TOC consistency edits (plus metadata edits)

devices/hololens/TOC.md

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 ## [Install localized version of HoloLens (1st gen)](hololens1-install-localized.md)
 ## [Getting around HoloLens (1st gen)](hololens1-basic-usage.md)
 
-# Deploy HoloLens and mixed-reality apps in commercial environments
+# Deploy HoloLens and mixed reality apps in commercial environments
 ## [Commercial features](hololens-commercial-features.md)
 ## [Deploy HoloLens in a commercial environment](hololens-requirements.md)
 ## [Determine what licenses you need](hololens-licenses-requirements.md)
@@ -27,13 +27,13 @@
 ## [Manage HoloLens updates](hololens-updates.md)
 ## [Enable Bitlocker device encryption for HoloLens](hololens-encryption.md)
 
-# Navigating Windows Holographic
-## [Start menu and mixed reality home](holographic-home.md)
-## [Use your voice with HoloLens](hololens-cortana.md)
+# Navigate the Windows Holographic environment
+## [Use the Start menu and mixed reality home](holographic-home.md)
+## [Use your voice to operate HoloLens](hololens-cortana.md)
 ## [Find, open, and save files](holographic-data.md)
 ## [Create mixed reality photos and videos](holographic-photos-and-videos.md)
 
-# User management and access management
+# Manage users and access
 ## [Manage user identity and sign-in for HoloLens](hololens-identity.md)
 ## [Share your HoloLens with multiple people](hololens-multiple-users.md)
 ## [Set up HoloLens as a kiosk for specific applications](hololens-kiosk.md)

devices/hololens/holographic-home.md

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
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-title: Start menu and mixed reality home
+title: Use the Start menu and mixed reality home
 description: Navigate the mixed reality home in Windows Holographic.
 ms.assetid: 742bc126-7996-4f3a-abb2-cf345dff730c
 ms.date: 08/07/2019
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ appliesto:
 - HoloLens 2
 ---
 
-# Start menu and mixed reality home
+# Use the Start menu and mixed reality home
 
 Just like the Windows PC experience starts with the desktop, Windows Holographic starts with mixed reality home.  Using the Start menu you can open and place app windows, immersive app launchers, and 3D content in mixed reality home, and their placement in your physical space will be remembered.
 

devices/hololens/hololens-cortana.md

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
-title: Use your voice with HoloLens
+title: Use your voice to operate HoloLens
 description: Cortana can help you do all kinds of things on your HoloLens
 ms.assetid: fd96fb0e-6759-4dbe-be1f-58bedad66fed
 ms.date: 03/10/2020
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ appliesto:
 - HoloLens 2
 ---
 
-# Use your voice with HoloLens
+# Use your voice to operate HoloLens
 
 You can use your voice to do almost anything on HoloLens, such as taking a quick photo or opening an app. Many voice commands are built into HoloLens, while others are available through Cortana.
 
@@ -34,14 +34,14 @@ Get around HoloLens faster with these basic commands. In order to use these you
 
 ### General speech commands
 
-Use these commands throughout Windows Mixed Reality to get around faster. Some commands use the gaze cursor, which you bring up by saying “select.”
+Use these commands throughout Windows Mixed Reality to get around faster. Some commands use the gaze cursor, which you bring up by saying "select."
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > Hand rays are not supported on HoloLens (1st Gen).
 
 | Say this | To do this |
 | - | - |
-| "Select" | Say "select" to bring up the gaze cursor. Then, turn your head to position the cursor on the thing you want to select, and say “select” again. |
+| "Select" | Say "select" to bring up the gaze cursor. Then, turn your head to position the cursor on the thing you want to select, and say "select" again. |
 |Open the Start menu | "Go to Start" |
 |Close the Start menu | "Close" |
 |Leave an immersive app | Say "Go to Start" to bring up the quick actions menu, then say "Mixed reality home." |