From 058f053dfd5d33495be9fe4cea25d03a6879e6f1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Brian Lich <brianlic@microsoft.com>
Date: Fri, 31 Mar 2017 09:56:41 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] copy edit

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 windows/configure/windows-diagnostic-data.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/windows/configure/windows-diagnostic-data.md b/windows/configure/windows-diagnostic-data.md
index ad15b21614..a00eaa3f06 100644
--- a/windows/configure/windows-diagnostic-data.md
+++ b/windows/configure/windows-diagnostic-data.md
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ author: brianlic-msft
 
 # Windows 10, version 1703 Diagnostic Data
 
-Microsoft collects Windows diagnostic data to keep Windows up-to-date, secure, and operating properly. It also helps us improve Windows and, for users who have turned on tailored experiences, can be used to provide relevant tips and recommendations to tailor Microsoft products to the user’s needs. In keeping with our efforts to be transparent about diagnostic data Windows collects, as described in Terry Myerson’s [blog post](https://blogs.windows.com/windowsexperience/2017/01/10/continuing-commitment-privacy-windows-10/) in January 2017, this article includes descriptions of the diagnostic data that is collected by Windows at the Full telemetry level. A small subset of this data is collected at the [Basic level](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=845809).
+Microsoft collects Windows diagnostic data to keep Windows up-to-date, secure, and operating properly. It also helps us improve Windows and, for users who have turned on tailored experiences, can be used to provide relevant tips and recommendations to tailor Microsoft products to the user's needs. In keeping with our efforts to be transparent about diagnostic data Windows collects, as described in Terry Myerson's [blog post](https://blogs.windows.com/windowsexperience/2017/01/10/continuing-commitment-privacy-windows-10/) in January 2017, this article includes descriptions of the diagnostic data that is collected by Windows at the Full telemetry level. A small subset of this data is collected at the [Basic level](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=845809).
 
 
 The data covered in this article is grouped into the following categories:
@@ -35,4 +35,4 @@ Most diagnostic events contain a header of common data:
 
 | Category Name | Examples |
 | - | - |
-| Common Data | Information that is added to most diagnostic events, if relevant and available:<br><ul><li>OS name, version, build, and [locale](https://msdn.microsoft.com/en-us/library/windows/desktop/dd318716.aspx)</li><li>User ID – a unique identifier associated with the user’s Microsoft Account (if one is used) or local account. The user’s Microsoft Account identifier is not collected from devices configured to send Basic Diagnostic data; Xbox UserID</li><li>Environment from which the event was logged – Application ID of app or component that logged the event, Session GUID. Used to track events over a given period of time such the period an app is running or between boots of the OS.</li><li>The diagnostic event name, Event ID, ETW[^3] opcode, version, schema signature, keywords, and flags</li><li>HTTP header information including</li><li>IP address. This is not the IP address of the device but the source address in the network packet header received by the diagnostics ingestion service.</li><li>Various IDs that are used to correlate and sequence related events together.</li><li>Device ID. This is not the user provided device name, but an ID that is unique for that device.</li><li>Device class -- Desktop, Server, or Mobile</li><li>Event collection time</li><li>Diagnostic level eg. Basic or Full, Sample level – for sampled data, what sample level is this machine opted into</li></ul> |
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+| Common Data | Information that is added to most diagnostic events, if relevant and available:<br><ul><li>OS name, version, build, and [locale](https://msdn.microsoft.com/en-us/library/windows/desktop/dd318716.aspx)</li><li>User ID -- a unique identifier associated with the user's Microsoft Account (if one is used) or local account. The user's Microsoft Account identifier is not collected from devices configured to send Basic Diagnostic data; Xbox UserID</li><li>Environment from which the event was logged -- Application ID of app or component that logged the event, Session GUID. Used to track events over a given period of time such the period an app is running or between boots of the OS.</li><li>The diagnostic event name, Event ID, [ETW](https://msdn.microsoft.com/en-us/library/windows/desktop/bb968803.aspx) opcode, version, schema signature, keywords, and flags</li><li>HTTP header information including</li><li>IP address. This is not the IP address of the device but the source address in the network packet header received by the diagnostics ingestion service.</li><li>Various IDs that are used to correlate and sequence related events together.</li><li>Device ID. This is not the user provided device name, but an ID that is unique for that device.</li><li>Device class -- Desktop, Server, or Mobile</li><li>Event collection time</li><li>Diagnostic level eg. Basic or Full, Sample level -- for sampled data, what sample level is this machine opted into</li></ul> |
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