From 0af08cc07007575a14f1112f6e008219b127adcf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: mflemingwa <33759581+mflemingwa@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 14:05:40 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] Update waas-windows-insider-for-business.md

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 .../deployment/update/waas-windows-insider-for-business.md    | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/windows/deployment/update/waas-windows-insider-for-business.md b/windows/deployment/update/waas-windows-insider-for-business.md
index b105a54d56..d21f608bb7 100644
--- a/windows/deployment/update/waas-windows-insider-for-business.md
+++ b/windows/deployment/update/waas-windows-insider-for-business.md
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ When providing feedback, please consider the following:
 
 ### User consent requirement
 
-With the current version of the Feedback Hub app, we need the user's consent to access their AAD account profile data (We read their name, organizational tenant ID and user ID). When they sign in for the first time with the AAD account, they will see a popup asking for their permission, like this:
+Feedback Hub needs the user’s consent to access their AAD account profile data (we read their name, organizational tenant ID and user ID). When they sign in for the first time with the AAD account, they will see a popup asking for their permission, like this:
 
 ![Feedback Hub consent to AAD pop-up](images/waas-wipfb-aad-consent.png)
 
@@ -287,4 +287,4 @@ Your individual registration with the Insider program will not be impacted. If y
 - [Prepare servicing strategy for Windows 10 updates](waas-servicing-strategy-windows-10-updates.md)
 - [Build deployment rings for Windows 10 updates](waas-deployment-rings-windows-10-updates.md)
 - [Assign devices to servicing channels for Windows 10 updates](waas-servicing-channels-windows-10-updates.md)
-- [Optimize update delivery for Windows 10 updates](waas-optimize-windows-10-updates.md)
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+- [Optimize update delivery for Windows 10 updates](waas-optimize-windows-10-updates.md)