Date: Tue, 13 Apr 2021 08:47:37 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 08/11] fix build warning
---
.../mdm/cellularsettings-csp.md | 17 ++---------------
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
diff --git a/windows/client-management/mdm/cellularsettings-csp.md b/windows/client-management/mdm/cellularsettings-csp.md
index 075780cbb9..64372f26a8 100644
--- a/windows/client-management/mdm/cellularsettings-csp.md
+++ b/windows/client-management/mdm/cellularsettings-csp.md
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ The CellularSettings configuration service provider is used to configure cellula
The following image shows the CellularSettings CSP in tree format as used by Open Mobile Alliance Client Provisioning (OMA CP). The OMA DM protocol is not supported with this configuration service provider.
-
+
**DataRoam**
Optional. Integer. Specifies the default roaming value. Valid values are:
@@ -53,19 +53,6 @@ The following image shows the CellularSettings CSP in tree format as used by Ope
-
-
-## Related topics
-
+ ## Related topics
[Configuration service provider reference](configuration-service-provider-reference.md)
-
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-
-
-
-
From cf41266bf8c26800ada6565afdf35e0903298329 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Daniel Simpson
Date: Tue, 13 Apr 2021 09:56:13 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 09/11] acrolinx
---
.../app-v/appv-technical-reference.md | 18 +++++++++++----
...ure-ad-tenant-and-azure-ad-subscription.md | 22 +++++++++----------
2 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
diff --git a/windows/application-management/app-v/appv-technical-reference.md b/windows/application-management/app-v/appv-technical-reference.md
index 2786ba91cc..19f2f4b499 100644
--- a/windows/application-management/app-v/appv-technical-reference.md
+++ b/windows/application-management/app-v/appv-technical-reference.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
---
title: Technical Reference for App-V (Windows 10)
-description: Learn strategy and context for a number of performance optimization practices in this techincal reference for Application Virtualization (App-V).
+description: Learn strategy and context for many performance optimization practices in this technical reference for Application Virtualization (App-V).
author: dansimp
ms.pagetype: mdop, appcompat, virtualization
ms.mktglfcycl: deploy
@@ -25,11 +25,21 @@ This section provides reference information related to managing App-V.
- [Performance Guidance for Application Virtualization](appv-performance-guidance.md)
- Provides strategy and context for a number of performance optimization practices. Not all practices will be applicable although they are supported and have been tested. Using all suggested practices that are applicable to your organization will provide the optimal end-user experience.
+ Provides strategy and context for many performance optimizations. Not all practices will be applicable. However, these are tested and supported. Using all suggested practices that are applicable to your organization will provide the optimal end-user experience.
- [Application Publishing and Client Interaction](appv-application-publishing-and-client-interaction.md)
- Describes how the following App-V client operations affect the local operating system: App-V files and data storage locations, package registry, package store behavior, roaming registry and data, client application lifecycle management, integration of App-V packages, dynamic configuration, side-by-side assemblies, and client logging.
+Describes how the following App-V client operations affect the local operating system:
+
+- App-V files and data storage locations
+- package registry
+- package store behavior
+- roaming registry and data
+- client application lifecycle management
+- integration of App-V packages
+- dynamic configuration
+- side-by-side assemblies
+- client logging
- [Viewing App-V Server Publishing Metadata](appv-viewing-appv-server-publishing-metadata.md)
@@ -44,7 +54,7 @@ This section provides reference information related to managing App-V.
For App-V issues, use the [App-V TechNet Forum](https://social.technet.microsoft.com/Forums/en-US/home?forum=mdopappv).
-## Related topics
+## Related articles
[How to Deploy the App-V Databases by Using SQL Scripts](appv-deploy-appv-databases-with-sql-scripts.md)
diff --git a/windows/client-management/mdm/add-an-azure-ad-tenant-and-azure-ad-subscription.md b/windows/client-management/mdm/add-an-azure-ad-tenant-and-azure-ad-subscription.md
index e528bbb020..cbf0331129 100644
--- a/windows/client-management/mdm/add-an-azure-ad-tenant-and-azure-ad-subscription.md
+++ b/windows/client-management/mdm/add-an-azure-ad-tenant-and-azure-ad-subscription.md
@@ -19,37 +19,37 @@ Here's a step-by-step guide to adding an Azure Active Directory tenant, adding a
> **Note** If you have paid subscriptions to Office 365, Microsoft Dynamics CRM Online, Enterprise Mobility Suite, or other Microsoft services, you have a free subscription to Azure AD. For step-by-step guide to register this free subscription, see [Register your free Azure Active Directory subscription.](#register-your-free-azure-active-directory-subscription)
-1. Sign-up for Azure AD tenant from [this website](https://account.windowsazure.com/organization) by creating an administrator account for your organization.
+1. Sign up for Azure AD tenant from [this website](https://account.windowsazure.com/organization) by creating an administrator account for your organization.

-2. Enter the information for your organization. Click **check availability** to verify that domain name that you selected is available.
+2. Enter the information for your organization. Select **check availability** to verify that domain name that you selected is available.

-3. Complete the login and country information. You must provide a valid phone number, then click **Send text message** or **Call me**.
+3. Complete the login and country information. Enter a valid phone number, then select **Send text message** or **Call me**.

-4. Enter the code that you receive and then click **Verify code**. After the code is verified and the continue button turns green, click **continue**.
+4. Enter the code that you receive and then select **Verify code**. After the code is verified and the continue button turns green, select **continue**.

-5. After you finish creating your Azure account, you are ready to add an Azure AD subscription.
+5. After you finish creating your Azure account, you can add an Azure AD subscription.
- If you don't have a paid subscription to any Microsoft service, you can purchase an Azure AD premium subscription. Go to Office 356 portal, and then sign in using the admin account that you just created in Step 4 (for example, user1@contosoltd.onmicrosoftcom).
+ If you don't have a paid subscription to any Microsoft service, you can purchase an Azure AD premium subscription. Go to Office 356 portal https://portal.office.com/, and then sign in using the admin account that you created in Step 4 (for example, user1@contosoltd.onmicrosoftcom).

-6. Click **Install software**.
+6. Select **Install software**.

-7. In the Microsoft 365 admin center, select **Purchase Services** from the left nagivation.
+7. In the Microsoft 365 admin center, select **Purchase Services** from the left navigation.

-8. On the **Purchase services** page, scroll down until you see **Azure Active Directory Premium**, then click to purchase.
+8. On the **Purchase services** page, scroll down until you see **Azure Active Directory Premium**, then select to purchase.

@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ Here's a step-by-step guide to adding an Azure Active Directory tenant, adding a

-10. After the purchase is completed, you can login to your Office 365 Admin Portal and you will see the **Azure AD** option from the Admin drop-down menu along with other services (SharePoint, Exchange, etc...).
+10. After the purchase is completed, you can log in to your Office 365 Admin Portal and you will see the **Azure AD** option from the Admin drop-down menu along with other services (SharePoint, Exchange, etc....).

@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ If you have paid subscriptions to Office 365, Microsoft Dynamics CRM Online, Ent

-2. On the **Home** page, click on the Admin tools icon.
+2. On the **Home** page, select on the Admin tools icon.

From 22b8fd9a88d3485869e6d2d6c8c8ab033139095a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jaime Ondrusek
Date: Tue, 13 Apr 2021 10:09:41 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 10/11] Update waas-configure-wufb.md
Changed version references to "or later" per MS Style.
---
windows/deployment/update/waas-configure-wufb.md | 16 ++++++++--------
1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
diff --git a/windows/deployment/update/waas-configure-wufb.md b/windows/deployment/update/waas-configure-wufb.md
index 1e25af1930..07e9ae9bde 100644
--- a/windows/deployment/update/waas-configure-wufb.md
+++ b/windows/deployment/update/waas-configure-wufb.md
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ For example, a device on the Semi-Annual Channel with `DeferFeatureUpdatesPeriod
| Policy | Sets registry key under HKLM\Software |
| --- | --- |
-| GPO for Windows 10, version 1607 and later: Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > Windows Update for Business > **Select when Feature Updates are received** | \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\DeferFeatureUpdates\Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\DeferFeatureUpdatesPeriodInDays |
+| GPO for Windows 10, version 1607 or later: Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > Windows Update for Business > **Select when Feature Updates are received** | \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\DeferFeatureUpdates\Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\DeferFeatureUpdatesPeriodInDays |
| GPO for Windows 10, version 1511: Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > **Defer Upgrades and Updates** | \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\DeferUpgradePeriod |
| MDM for Windows 10, version 1607 and later: ../Vendor/MSFT/Policy/Config/Update/**DeferFeatureUpdatesPeriodInDays** | \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\DeferFeatureUpdatesPeriodInDays |
| MDM for Windows 10, version 1511: ../Vendor/MSFT/Policy/Config/Update/**DeferUpgrade** | \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\RequireDeferUpgrade |
@@ -99,9 +99,9 @@ In cases where the pause policy is first applied after the configured start date
| Policy | Sets registry key under HKLM\Software |
| --- | --- |
-| GPO for Windows 10, version 1607 and later: Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > Windows Update for Business > **Select when Feature Updates are received** | **1607:** \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\PauseFeatureUpdates**1703 and later:** \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\PauseFeatureUpdatesStartTime |
+| GPO for Windows 10, version 1607 or later: Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > Windows Update for Business > **Select when Feature Updates are received** | **1607:** \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\PauseFeatureUpdates**1703 and later:** \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\PauseFeatureUpdatesStartTime |
| GPO for Windows 10, version 1511: Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > **Defer Upgrades and Updates** | \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\Pause |
-| MDM for Windows 10, version 1607 and later: ../Vendor/MSFT/Policy/Config/Update/**PauseFeatureUpdates** | **1607:** \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\PauseFeatureUpdates **1703 and later:** \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\PauseFeatureUpdatesStartTime |
+| MDM for Windows 10, version 1607 or later: ../Vendor/MSFT/Policy/Config/Update/**PauseFeatureUpdates** | **1607:** \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\PauseFeatureUpdates **1703 and later:** \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\PauseFeatureUpdatesStartTime |
| MDM for Windows 10, version 1511: ../Vendor/MSFT/Policy/Config/Update/**DeferUpgrade** | \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\Pause |
You can check the date that Feature Updates were paused by checking the registry key **PausedFeatureDate** under **HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\WindowsUpdate\UpdatePolicy\Settings**.
@@ -136,9 +136,9 @@ You can set your system to receive updates for other Microsoft products—known
| Policy | Sets registry key under HKLM\Software |
| --- | --- |
-| GPO for Windows 10, version 1607 and later: Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > Windows Update for Business > **Select when Quality Updates are received** | \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\DeferQualityUpdates\Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\DeferQualityUpdatesPeriodInDays |
+| GPO for Windows 10, version 1607 or later: Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > Windows Update for Business > **Select when Quality Updates are received** | \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\DeferQualityUpdates\Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\DeferQualityUpdatesPeriodInDays |
| GPO for Windows 10, version 1511: Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > **Defer Upgrades and Updates** | \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\DeferUpdatePeriod |
-| MDM for Windows 10, version 1607 and later: ../Vendor/MSFT/Policy/Config/Update/**DeferQualityUpdatesPeriodInDays** | \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\DeferQualityUpdatesPeriodInDays |
+| MDM for Windows 10, version 1607 or later: ../Vendor/MSFT/Policy/Config/Update/**DeferQualityUpdatesPeriodInDays** | \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\DeferQualityUpdatesPeriodInDays |
| MDM for Windows 10, version 1511: ../Vendor/MSFT/Policy/Config/Update/**DeferUpgrade** | \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\RequireDeferUpdate |
>[!NOTE]
@@ -159,9 +159,9 @@ In cases where the pause policy is first applied after the configured start date
| Policy | Sets registry key under HKLM\Software |
| --- | --- |
-| GPO for Windows 10, version 1607 and later: Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > Windows Update for Business > **Select when Quality Updates are received** |**1607:** \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\PauseQualityUpdates**1703:** \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\PauseQualityUpdatesStartTime |
+| GPO for Windows 10, version 1607 or later: Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > Windows Update for Business > **Select when Quality Updates are received** |**1607:** \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\PauseQualityUpdates**1703:** \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\PauseQualityUpdatesStartTime |
| GPO for Windows 10, version 1511: Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > **Defer Upgrades and Updates** | \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\Pause |
-| MDM for Windows 10, version 1607 and later: ../Vendor/MSFT/Policy/Config/Update/**PauseQualityUpdates** | **1607:** \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\PauseQualityUpdates**1703:** \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\PauseQualityUpdatesStartTime |
+| MDM for Windows 10, version 1607 or later: ../Vendor/MSFT/Policy/Config/Update/**PauseQualityUpdates** | **1607:** \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\PauseQualityUpdates**1703:** \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\PauseQualityUpdatesStartTime |
| MDM for Windows 10, version 1511: ../Vendor/MSFT/Policy/Config/Update/**DeferUpgrade** | \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\Pause |
You can check the date that quality Updates were paused by checking the registry key **PausedQualityDate** under **HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\WindowsUpdate\UpdatePolicy\Settings**.
@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ Starting with Windows 10, version 1607, you can selectively opt out of receiving
| Policy | Sets registry key under HKLM\Software |
| --- | --- |
-| GPO for Windows 10, version 1607 and later: Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > **Do not include drivers with Windows Updates** | \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\ExcludeWUDriversInQualityUpdate |
+| GPO for Windows 10, version 1607 or later: Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > **Do not include drivers with Windows Updates** | \Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate\ExcludeWUDriversInQualityUpdate |
| MDM for Windows 10, version 1607 and later: ../Vendor/MSFT/Policy/Config/Update/**ExcludeWUDriversInQualityUpdate** | \Microsoft\PolicyManager\default\Update\ExcludeWUDriversInQualityUpdate |
## Summary: MDM and Group Policy settings for Windows 10, version 1703 and later
From ca1f192883dc0fb3886e0227a798bcc7f5dabdf4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Rebecca Agiewich
Date: Tue, 13 Apr 2021 10:44:15 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 11/11] grammar fix
---
.../mdm/add-an-azure-ad-tenant-and-azure-ad-subscription.md | 2 +-
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/windows/client-management/mdm/add-an-azure-ad-tenant-and-azure-ad-subscription.md b/windows/client-management/mdm/add-an-azure-ad-tenant-and-azure-ad-subscription.md
index cbf0331129..34f60116f4 100644
--- a/windows/client-management/mdm/add-an-azure-ad-tenant-and-azure-ad-subscription.md
+++ b/windows/client-management/mdm/add-an-azure-ad-tenant-and-azure-ad-subscription.md
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ Here's a step-by-step guide to adding an Azure Active Directory tenant, adding a
5. After you finish creating your Azure account, you can add an Azure AD subscription.
- If you don't have a paid subscription to any Microsoft service, you can purchase an Azure AD premium subscription. Go to Office 356 portal https://portal.office.com/, and then sign in using the admin account that you created in Step 4 (for example, user1@contosoltd.onmicrosoftcom).
+ If you don't have a paid subscription to any Microsoft service, you can purchase an Azure AD premium subscription. Go to the Office 356 portal at https://portal.office.com/, and then sign in using the admin account that you created in Step 4 (for example, user1@contosoltd.onmicrosoftcom).
