From 2380a597d36956ee01fe669041e2ad1750f70652 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Frank Rojas <45807133+frankroj@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2024 15:41:15 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Fixing TechNet and MSDN links plus refreshing articles 26 --- .../deployment/deploy-enterprise-licenses.md | 22 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/windows/deployment/deploy-enterprise-licenses.md b/windows/deployment/deploy-enterprise-licenses.md index 26d5005898..5ee2259be3 100644 --- a/windows/deployment/deploy-enterprise-licenses.md +++ b/windows/deployment/deploy-enterprise-licenses.md @@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ A device is healthy when both the subscription and activation are active. If the 1. Open a command prompt. -1. In the command prompt window, to get basic licensing information run the command: +1. To get basic licensing information, run the following command at the command prompt: ```cmd slmgr /dli @@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ A device is healthy when both the subscription and activation are active. If the License Status: Licensed ``` - To get detailed licensing information, run the following command instead: + To instead get detailed licensing information, run the following command: ```cmd slmgr /dlv @@ -375,24 +375,24 @@ When there are problems with Windows Enterprise E3 or E5 subscription activation - **Windows Pro isn't activated** - When Windows Pro isn't activated on a device, the following message is displayed next to **Activation** in the [Activation](ms-settings:activation) pane: + When Windows Pro isn't activated on a device, the following message is displayed for **Activation** in the [Activation](ms-settings:activation) pane: `Windows is not activated` - Additionally, under **Activation**, the following message might be displayed: + Additionally, the following message might be displayed: `We can't activate Windows on this device right now. You can try activating again later or go to the Store to buy genuine Windows. Error code: 0xC004F034.` Examples where this problem can occur include: - - The device doesn't have a firmware-embedded activation key + - The device doesn't have a firmware-embedded activation key. - The starting edition of Windows wasn't Windows Pro. For example, the starting edition of Windows was Windows Home. - In these case, a Windows Pro key might need to be manually entered. + In these cases, a Windows Pro key might need to be manually entered. - **Windows Enterprise subscription isn't active** - When a device with a Windows Enterprise subscription has lapsed or has been removed, the following message is displayed next to **Subscription** in the [Activation](ms-settings:activation) pane: + When a device with a Windows Enterprise subscription has lapsed or has been removed, the following message is displayed for **Subscription** in the [Activation](ms-settings:activation) pane: `Windows Enterprise subscription isn't valid.` @@ -424,7 +424,7 @@ When there are Windows Enterprise E3 or E5 license activation issues on a device Use the following guides to verify each one of these requirements: -- **Determine if the version of Windows is currently supported** +- **Determine if the version of Windows is currently supported**. To determine if the version of Windows is currently supported: @@ -443,7 +443,7 @@ Use the following guides to verify each one of these requirements: - [Windows 11 release information](/windows/release-health/windows11-release-information). - [Windows 10 release information](/windows/release-health/release-information). -- **Determine if a device is Microsoft Entra joined** +- **Determine if a device is Microsoft Entra joined**. To determine if a device is Microsoft Entra joined: @@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ Use the following guides to verify each one of these requirements: Device Name : Demo-PC ``` -- **Determine if devices has a firmware-embedded activation key** +- **Determine if devices has a firmware-embedded activation key**. To determine if the device has a firmware-embedded activation key: @@ -483,7 +483,7 @@ Use the following guides to verify each one of these requirements: 1. If the device has a firmware-embedded activation key, the key is displayed in the output. If the output is blank, the device doesn't have a firmware embedded activation key. Most modern OEM-provided devices designed to run currently supported versions of Windows have a firmware-embedded key. -- **Make sure the Microsoft Entra user has been assigned a license** +- **Make sure the Microsoft Entra user has been assigned a license**. For more information, see [Assigning licenses to users](#assigning-licenses-to-users).