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windows/whats-new/whats-new-windows-10-version-1909.md

@@ -21,11 +21,11 @@ This article lists new and updated features and content that are of interest to
 
 Windows 10, version 1909 is a scoped set of features for select performance improvements, enterprise features and quality enhancements.
 
-To deliver these updates in an optimal fashion, we are providing this feature update in a new way: using servicing technology. Users that are already running Windows 10, version 1903 (the May 2019 Update) will receive this update similar to how they receive monthly updates. If you are running version 1903, then updating to the new release will have a much faster update experience because the update will install like a monthly update.
+To deliver these updates in an optimal fashion, we're providing this feature update in a new way: using servicing technology. Users that are already running Windows 10, version 1903 (the May 2019 Update) will receive this update similar to how they receive monthly updates. If you're running version 1903, then updating to the new release will have a much faster update experience because the update will install like a monthly update.
 
-If you are updating from an older version of Windows 10 (version 1809 or earlier), the process of updating to the current version will be the same as it has been for previous Windows 10 feature updates. For more information, see [Evolving Windows 10 servicing and quality: the next steps](https://blogs.windows.com/windowsexperience/2019/07/01/evolving-windows-10-servicing-and-quality-the-next-steps/#rl2G5ETPhkhMvDeX.97).
+If you're updating from an older version of Windows 10 (version 1809 or earlier), the process of updating to the current version will be the same as it has been for previous Windows 10 feature updates. For more information, see [Evolving Windows 10 servicing and quality: the next steps](https://blogs.windows.com/windowsexperience/2019/07/01/evolving-windows-10-servicing-and-quality-the-next-steps/#rl2G5ETPhkhMvDeX.97).
 
-**Note**: Devices running the Enterprise, IoT Enterprise, or Education editions of Windows 10, version 1909 receive 30 months of support. For more information about the Windows servicing lifecycle, please see the [Windows lifecycle fact sheet](/lifecycle/faq/windows).
+**Note**: Devices running the Enterprise, IoT Enterprise, or Education editions of Windows 10, version 1909 receive 30 months of support. For more information about the Windows servicing lifecycle, see the [Windows lifecycle fact sheet](/lifecycle/faq/windows).
 
 ### Windows Server Update Services (WSUS)
 
@@ -35,13 +35,13 @@ The Windows 10, version 1909 enablement package will be available on WSUS as [KB
 
 ### Windows Update for Business
 
-If you are using Windows Update for Business, you will receive the Windows 10, version 1909 update in the same way that you have for prior feature updates, and as defined by your feature update deferral policy.
+If you're using Windows Update for Business, you'll receive the Windows 10, version 1909 update in the same way that you have for prior feature updates, and as defined by your feature update deferral policy.
 
 ## Security
 
 ### Windows Defender Credential Guard
 
-[Windows Defender Credential Guard](/windows/security/identity-protection/credential-guard/credential-guard) is now available for ARM64 devices, for additional protection against credential theft for enterprises deploying ARM64 devices in their organizations, such as Surface Pro X.
+[Windows Defender Credential Guard](/windows/security/identity-protection/credential-guard/credential-guard) is now available for ARM64 devices, for extra protection against credential theft for enterprises deploying ARM64 devices in their organizations, such as Surface Pro X.
 
 ### Microsoft BitLocker
 
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ Windows 10, version 1909 also includes two new features called **Key-rolling** a
 
 ### Transport Layer Security (TLS)
 
-An experimental implementation of TLS 1.3 is included in Windows 10, version 1909. TLS 1.3 disabled by default system wide. If you enable TLS 1.3 on a device for testing, then it can also be enabled in Internet Explorer 11.0 and Microsoft Edge by using Internet Options. For beta versions of Microsoft Edge on Chromium, TLS 1.3 is not built on the Windows TLS stack, and is instead configured independently, using the **Edge://flags** dialog. Also see [Microsoft Edge platform status](https://developer.microsoft.com/microsoft-edge/status/tls13/)
+An experimental implementation of TLS 1.3 is included in Windows 10, version 1909. TLS 1.3 disabled by default system wide. If you enable TLS 1.3 on a device for testing, then it can also be enabled in Internet Explorer 11.0 and Microsoft Edge by using Internet Options. For beta versions of Microsoft Edge on Chromium, TLS 1.3 isn't built on the Windows TLS stack, and is instead configured independently, using the **Edge://flags** dialog. Also see [Microsoft Edge platform status](https://developer.microsoft.com/microsoft-edge/status/tls13/)
 
 ## Virtualization
 
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ An experimental implementation of TLS 1.3 is included in Windows 10, version 190
 
 [Windows Virtual Desktop](/azure/virtual-desktop/overview) (WVD) is now generally available globally!
 
-Windows Virtual Desktop is a comprehensive desktop and app virtualization service running in the cloud. It’s the only virtual desktop infrastructure (VDI) that delivers simplified management, multi-session Windows 10, optimizations for Microsoft 365 Apps for enterprise, and support for Remote Desktop Services (RDS) environments. Deploy and scale your Windows desktops and apps on Azure in minutes, and get built-in security and compliance features. Windows Virtual Desktop requires a Microsoft E3 or E5 license, or a Microsoft 365 E3 or E5 license, as well as an Azure tenant.
+Windows Virtual Desktop is a comprehensive desktop and app virtualization service running in the cloud. It’s the only virtual desktop infrastructure (VDI) that delivers simplified management, multi-session Windows 10, optimizations for Microsoft 365 Apps for enterprise, and support for Remote Desktop Services (RDS) environments. Deploy and scale your Windows desktops and apps on Azure in minutes, and get built-in security and compliance features. Windows Virtual Desktop requires a Microsoft E3 or E5 license, or a Microsoft 365 E3 or E5 license, and an Azure tenant.
 
 ## Deployment
 
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ Configuration Manager, Intune, Desktop Analytics, Co-Management, and Device Mana
 
 [SetupDiag](/windows/deployment/upgrade/setupdiag) version 1.6.0.42 is available.
 
-SetupDiag is a command-line tool that can help diagnose why a Windows 10 update failed. SetupDiag works by searching Windows Setup log files. When searching log files, SetupDiag uses a set of rules to match known issues. In the current version of SetupDiag there are 53 rules contained in the rules.xml file, which is extracted when SetupDiag is run. The rules.xml file will be updated as new versions of SetupDiag are made available.        .
+SetupDiag is a command-line tool that can help diagnose why a Windows 10 update failed. SetupDiag works by searching Windows Setup log files. When log files are being searched, SetupDiag uses a set of rules to match known issues. In the current version of SetupDiag there are 53 rules contained in the rules.xml file, which is extracted when SetupDiag is run. The rules.xml file will be updated as new versions of SetupDiag are made available.
 
 ### Windows Assessment and Deployment Toolkit (ADK)
 
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ With Intel Turbo Boost Max Technology 3.0, an operating system will use informat
 
 ### Debugging
 
-Additional debugging capabilities for newer Intel processors have been added in this release. This is only relevant for hardware manufacturers.
+More debugging capabilities for newer Intel processors have been added in this release. These newly added capabilities are only relevant for hardware manufacturers.
 
 ### Efficiency
 
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ General battery life and power efficiency improvements for PCs with certain proc
 [What's New in Windows 10](./index.yml): See what’s new in other versions of Windows 10.<br>
 [What Windows 10, version 1909 Means for Developers](https://blogs.windows.com/windowsdeveloper/2019/10/16/what-windows-10-version-1909-means-for-developers/): New and updated features in Windows 10 that are of interest to developers.<br>
 [Features and functionality removed in Windows 10](/windows/deployment/planning/windows-10-removed-features): Removed features.<br>
-[Windows 10 features we’re no longer developing](/windows/deployment/planning/windows-10-deprecated-features): Features that are not being developed.<br>
+[Windows 10 features we’re no longer developing](/windows/deployment/planning/windows-10-deprecated-features): Features that aren't being developed.<br>
 [How to get the Windows 10 November 2019 Update](https://aka.ms/how-to-get-1909): John Cable blog.<br>
 [How to get Windows 10, Version 1909: Enablement Mechanics](https://aka.ms/1909mechanics): Mechanics blog.<br>
 [What’s new for IT pros in Windows 10, version 1909](https://aka.ms/whats-new-in-1909): Windows IT Pro blog.<br>

windows/whats-new/whats-new-windows-10-version-2004.md

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ To download and install Windows 10, version 2004, use Windows Update (**Settings
 
 ### Windows Defender System Guard
 
-In this release,  [Windows Defender System Guard](/windows/security/threat-protection/windows-defender-system-guard/system-guard-how-hardware-based-root-of-trust-helps-protect-windows) enables an even *higher* level of [System Management Mode](/windows/security/threat-protection/windows-defender-system-guard/system-guard-how-hardware-based-root-of-trust-helps-protect-windows#system-management-mode-smm-protection) (SMM) Firmware Protection that goes beyond checking the OS memory and secrets to additional resources like registers and IO.
+In this release, [Windows Defender System Guard](/windows/security/threat-protection/windows-defender-system-guard/system-guard-how-hardware-based-root-of-trust-helps-protect-windows) enables an even *higher* level of [System Management Mode](/windows/security/threat-protection/windows-defender-system-guard/system-guard-how-hardware-based-root-of-trust-helps-protect-windows#system-management-mode-smm-protection) (SMM) Firmware Protection that goes beyond checking the OS memory and secrets to other resources like registers and IO.
 
 With this improvement, the OS can detect a higher level of SMM compliance, enabling devices to be even more hardened against SMM exploits and vulnerabilities. This feature is forward-looking and currently requires new hardware available soon.
 
@@ -66,15 +66,15 @@ For more information, see Windows Setup enhancements in the [Windows IT Pro Blog
 
 In Windows 10, version 2004, SetupDiag is now automatically installed.
 
-[SetupDiag](/windows/deployment/upgrade/setupdiag) is a command-line tool that can help diagnose why a Windows 10 update failed. SetupDiag works by searching Windows Setup log files. When searching log files, SetupDiag uses a set of rules to match known issues.
+[SetupDiag](/windows/deployment/upgrade/setupdiag) is a command-line tool that can help diagnose why a Windows 10 update failed. SetupDiag works by searching Windows Setup log files. When log files are being searched, SetupDiag uses a set of rules to match known issues.
 
-During the upgrade process, Windows Setup will extract all its sources files to the **%SystemDrive%\$Windows.~bt\Sources** directory. With Windows 10, version 2004 and later, Windows Setup now also installs SetupDiag.exe to this directory. If there is an issue with the upgrade, SetupDiag is automatically run to determine the cause of the failure. If the upgrade process proceeds normally, this directory is moved under %SystemDrive%\Windows.Old for cleanup.
+During the upgrade process, Windows Setup will extract all its sources files to the **%SystemDrive%\$Windows.~bt\Sources** directory. With Windows 10, version 2004 and later, Windows Setup now also installs SetupDiag.exe to this directory. If there's an issue with the upgrade, SetupDiag is automatically run to determine the cause of the failure. If the upgrade process proceeds normally, this directory is moved under %SystemDrive%\Windows.Old for cleanup.
 
 ### Windows Autopilot
 
 With this release, you can configure [Windows Autopilot user-driven](/windows/deployment/windows-autopilot/user-driven) Hybrid Azure Active Directory join with VPN support. This support is also backported to Windows 10, version 1909 and 1903.
 
-If you configure the language settings in the Autopilot profile and the device is connected to Ethernet, all scenarios will now skip the language, locale, and keyboard pages.  In previous versions, this was only supported with self-deploying profiles.
+If you configure the language settings in the Autopilot profile and the device is connected to Ethernet, all scenarios will now skip the language, locale, and keyboard pages. In previous versions, this skip was only supported with self-deploying profiles.
 
 ### Microsoft Endpoint Manager
 
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ For information about what's new in the ADK, see [What's new in the Windows ADK
 
 ### Microsoft Deployment Toolkit (MDT)
 
-MDT version 8456 supports Windows 10, version 2004, but there is currently an issue that causes MDT to incorrectly detect that UEFI is present.  There is an [update available](https://support.microsoft.com/help/4564442/windows-10-deployments-fail-with-microsoft-deployment-toolkit) for MDT to address this issue.
+MDT version 8456 supports Windows 10, version 2004, but there's currently an issue that causes MDT to incorrectly detect that UEFI is present. There's an [update available](https://support.microsoft.com/help/4564442/windows-10-deployments-fail-with-microsoft-deployment-toolkit) for MDT to address this issue.
 
 For the latest information about MDT, see the [MDT release notes](/mem/configmgr/mdt/release-notes).
 
@@ -102,9 +102,9 @@ Windows PowerShell cmdlets have been improved:
 
 - **Get-DeliveryOptimizationStatus** has added the  **-PeerInfo** option for a real-time peak behind the scenes on peer-to-peer activity (for example the peer IP Address, bytes received / sent).
 - **Get-DeliveryOptimizationLogAnalysis** is a new cmdlet that provides a summary of the activity in your DO log (# of downloads, downloads from peers, overall peer efficiency). Use the **-ListConnections** option to for in-depth look at peer-to-peer connections.
-- **Enable-DeliveryOptimizationVerboseLogs** is a new cmdlet that enables a greater level of logging detail to assist in troubleshooting.
+- **Enable-DeliveryOptimizationVerboseLogs** is a new cmdlet that enables a greater level of logging detail to help in troubleshooting.
 
-Additional improvements:
+Other improvements:
 - Enterprise network [throttling is enhanced](/windows-insider/archive/new-in-20H1#new-download-throttling-options-for-delivery-optimization-build-18917) to optimize foreground vs. background throttling.
 - Automatic cloud-based congestion detection is available for PCs with cloud service support.
 
@@ -123,9 +123,9 @@ The following [Delivery Optimization](/windows/deployment/update/waas-delivery-o
 
 - Intune console updates: target version is now available allowing you to specify which version of Windows 10 you want devices to move to. Additionally, this capability enables you to keep devices on their current version until they reach end of service. Check it out in Intune, also available as a Group Policy and Configuration Service Provider (CSP) policy.
 
-- Validation improvements: To ensure devices and end users stay productive and protected, Microsoft uses safeguard holds to block devices from updating when there are known issues that would impact that device. Also, to better enable IT administrators to validate on the latest release, we have created a new policy that enables admins to opt devices out of the built-in safeguard holds.
+- Validation improvements: To ensure devices and end users stay productive and protected, Microsoft uses safeguard holds to block devices from updating when there are known issues that would impact that device. Also, to better enable IT administrators to validate on the latest release, we've created a new policy that enables admins to opt devices out of the built-in safeguard holds.
 
-- Update less: Last year, we [changed update installation policies](https://blogs.windows.com/windowsexperience/2019/04/04/improving-the-windows-10-update-experience-with-control-quality-and-transparency/#l2jH7KMkOkfcWdBs.97) for Windows 10 to only target devices running a feature update version that is nearing end of service. As a result, many devices are only updating once a year. To enable all devices to make the most of this policy change, and to prevent confusion, we have removed deferrals from the Windows Update settings **Advanced Options** page starting on Windows 10, version 2004. If you wish to continue leveraging deferrals, you can use local Group Policy (**Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > Windows Update for Business > Select when Preview builds and Feature Updates are received** or **Select when Quality Updates are received**). For more information about this change, see [Simplified Windows Update settings for end users](https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/windows-it-pro-blog/simplified-windows-update-settings-for-end-users/ba-p/1497215).
+- Update less: Last year, we [changed update installation policies](https://blogs.windows.com/windowsexperience/2019/04/04/improving-the-windows-10-update-experience-with-control-quality-and-transparency/#l2jH7KMkOkfcWdBs.97) for Windows 10 to only target devices running a feature update version that is nearing end of service. As a result, many devices are only updating once a year. To enable all devices to make the most of this policy change, and to prevent confusion, we have removed deferrals from the Windows Update settings **Advanced Options** page starting on Windows 10, version 2004. If you wish to continue using deferrals, you can use local Group Policy (**Computer Configuration > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Windows Update > Windows Update for Business > Select when Preview builds and Feature Updates are received** or **Select when Quality Updates are received**). For more information about this change, see [Simplified Windows Update settings for end users](https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/windows-it-pro-blog/simplified-windows-update-settings-for-end-users/ba-p/1497215).
 
 ## Networking
 
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ In this release, Tunnel Extensible Authentication Protocol (TEAP) has been added
 [Windows Sandbox configuration](/windows/security/threat-protection/windows-sandbox/windows-sandbox-configure-using-wsb-file) includes:
 - MappedFolders now supports a destination folder. Previously no destination could be specified, it was always mapped to the Sandbox desktop.
 - AudioInput/VideoInput settings now enable you to share their host microphone or webcam with the Sandbox.
-- ProtectedClient is a new security setting that runs the connection to the Sandbox with extra security settings enabled. This is disabled by default due to issues with copy & paste.
+- ProtectedClient is a new security setting that runs the connection to the Sandbox with extra security settings enabled. This setting is disabled by default due to issues with copy & paste.
 - PrinterRedirection: You can now enable and disable host printer sharing with the Sandbox.
 - ClipboardRedirection: You can now enable and disable host clipboard sharing with the Sandbox.
 - MemoryInMB adds the ability to specify the maximum memory usage of the Sandbox.
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ Windows Sandbox also has improved accessibility in this release, including:
 
 ### Windows Subsystem for Linux (WSL)
 
-With this release, memory that is no longer in use in a Linux VM will be freed back to Windows. Previously, a WSL VM's memory could grow, but would not shrink when no longer needed.
+With this release, memory that is no longer in use in a Linux VM will be freed back to Windows. Previously, a WSL VM's memory could grow, but wouldn't shrink when no longer needed.
 
 [WSL2](/windows/wsl/wsl2-index) support has been added for ARM64 devices if your device supports virtualization.
 
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ For a full list of updates to WSL, see the [WSL release notes](/windows/wsl/rele
 
 ### Windows Virtual Desktop (WVD)
 
-Windows 10 is an integral part of WVD, and several enhancements are available in the Spring 2020 update. Check out [Windows Virtual Desktop documentation](/azure/virtual-desktop/) for the latest and greatest information, as well as the [WVD Virtual Event from March](https://aka.ms/wvdvirtualevent).
+Windows 10 is an integral part of WVD, and several enhancements are available in the Spring 2020 update. Check out [Windows Virtual Desktop documentation](/azure/virtual-desktop/) for the latest and greatest information, and the [WVD Virtual Event from March](https://aka.ms/wvdvirtualevent).
 
 ## Microsoft Edge
 
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ Windows Search is improved in several ways. For more information, see [Superchar
 
 ### Virtual Desktops
 
-There is a new [Update on Virtual Desktop renaming (Build 18975)](/windows-insider/archive/new-in-20H1#update-on-virtual-desktop-renaming-build-18975), where, instead of getting stuck with the system-issued names like Desktop 1, you can now rename your virtual desktops more freely.
+There's a new [Update on Virtual Desktop renaming (Build 18975)](/windows-insider/archive/new-in-20H1#update-on-virtual-desktop-renaming-build-18975), where, instead of getting stuck with the system-issued names like Desktop 1, you can now rename your virtual desktops more freely.
 
 ### Bluetooth pairing
 
@@ -262,4 +262,4 @@ For information about Desktop Analytics and this release of Windows 10, see [Wha
 - [What's new for business in Windows 10 Insider Preview Builds](/windows-insider/Active-Dev-Branch): A preview of new features for businesses.
 - [What's new in Windows 10, version 2004 - Windows Insiders](/windows-insider/archive/new-in-20h1): This list also includes consumer focused new features.
 - [Features and functionality removed in Windows 10](/windows/deployment/planning/windows-10-removed-features): Removed features.
-- [Windows 10 features we're no longer developing](/windows/deployment/planning/windows-10-deprecated-features): Features that are not being developed.
+- [Windows 10 features we're no longer developing](/windows/deployment/planning/windows-10-deprecated-features): Features that aren't being developed.

windows/whats-new/whats-new-windows-10-version-20H2.md

@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ Activities are grouped into the following phases: **Plan** > **Prepare** > **Dep
 - Ensure that [users are ready](/windows/deployment/update/prepare-deploy-windows) for updates
 
 **Deploy** and manage Windows 10 strategically in your organization:
-- Use [Windows Autopilot](/mem/autopilot/windows-autopilot) to streamline the set up, configuration, and delivery of new devices
+- Use [Windows Autopilot](/mem/autopilot/windows-autopilot) to streamline the setup, configuration, and delivery of new devices
 - Use [Configuration Manager](/windows/deployment/deploy-windows-cm/prepare-for-zero-touch-installation-of-windows-10-with-configuration-manager) or [MDT](/windows/deployment/deploy-windows-mdt/prepare-for-windows-deployment-with-mdt) to deploy new devices and update existing devices
 - Use [Windows Update for Business](/windows/deployment/update/waas-configure-wufb) with Group Policy to [customize update settings](/windows/deployment/update/waas-wufb-group-policy) for your devices
 - [Deploy Windows updates](/windows/deployment/update/waas-manage-updates-wsus) with Windows Server Update Services (WSUS)
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Enhancements to Windows Autopilot since the last release of Windows 10 include:
 
 ### Windows Assessment and Deployment Toolkit (ADK)
 
-There is no new ADK for Windows 10, version 20H2. The ADK for Windows 10, version 2004 will also work with Windows 10, version 20H2.  For more information, see [Download and install the Windows ADK](/windows-hardware/get-started/adk-install).
+There's no new ADK for Windows 10, version 20H2. The ADK for Windows 10, version 2004 will also work with Windows 10, version 20H2.  For more information, see [Download and install the Windows ADK](/windows-hardware/get-started/adk-install).
 
 ## Device management
 
@@ -146,4 +146,4 @@ For information about Desktop Analytics and this release of Windows 10, see [Wha
 [What's New in Windows 10](./index.yml): See what’s new in other versions of Windows 10.<br>
 [Announcing more ways we’re making app development easier on Windows](https://blogs.windows.com/windowsdeveloper/2020/09/22/kevin-gallo-microsoft-ignite-2020/): Simplifying app development in Windows.<br>
 [Features and functionality removed in Windows 10](/windows/deployment/planning/windows-10-removed-features): Removed features.<br>
-[Windows 10 features we’re no longer developing](/windows/deployment/planning/windows-10-deprecated-features): Features that are not being developed.<br>
+[Windows 10 features we’re no longer developing](/windows/deployment/planning/windows-10-deprecated-features): Features that aren't being developed.<br>

windows/whats-new/windows-11-plan.md

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ ms.collection: highpri
 
 This article provides guidance to help you plan for Windows 11 in your organization.
 
-Since Windows 11 is built on the same foundation as Windows 10, you can use the same deployment capabilities, scenarios, and tools—as well as the same basic deployment strategy that you use today for Windows 10. You will need to review and update your servicing strategy to adjust for changes in [Servicing and support](#servicing-and-support) for Windows 11. 
+Since Windows 11 is built on the same foundation as Windows 10, you can use the same deployment capabilities, scenarios, and tools—and the same basic deployment strategy that you use today for Windows 10. You'll need to review and update your servicing strategy to adjust for changes in [Servicing and support](#servicing-and-support) for Windows 11. 
 
 At a high level, this strategy should include the following steps:
 - [Create a deployment plan](/windows/deployment/update/create-deployment-plan)
@@ -29,13 +29,13 @@ At a high level, this strategy should include the following steps:
 - [Determine application readiness](/windows/deployment/update/plan-determine-app-readiness)
 - [Define your servicing strategy](/windows/deployment/update/plan-define-strategy)
 
-If you are looking for ways to optimize your approach to deploying Windows 11, or if deploying a new version of an operating system is not a familiar process for you, some items to consider are provided below. 
+If you're looking for ways to optimize your approach to deploying Windows 11, or if deploying a new version of an operating system isn't a familiar process for you, some items to consider are provided below:
 
 ## Determine eligibility
 
-As a first step, you will need to know which of your current devices meet the Windows 11 hardware requirements. Most devices purchased in the last 18-24 months will be compatible with Windows 11. Verify that your device meets or exceeds [Windows 11 requirements](windows-11-requirements.md) to ensure it is compatible.
+As a first step, you'll need to know which of your current devices meet the Windows 11 hardware requirements. Most devices purchased in the last 18-24 months will be compatible with Windows 11. Verify that your device meets or exceeds [Windows 11 requirements](windows-11-requirements.md) to ensure it's compatible.
 
-Microsoft is currently developing analysis tools to help you evaluate your devices against the Windows 11 hardware requirements. When Windows 11 reaches general availability, users running Windows 10 Home, Pro, and Pro for Workstations will be able to use the [PC Health Check](https://www.microsoft.com/windows/windows-11#pchealthcheck) app to determine their eligibility for Windows 11. Users running Windows 10 Enterprise and Education editions should rely on their IT administrators to let them know when they are eligible for the upgrade.  
+Microsoft is currently developing analysis tools to help you evaluate your devices against the Windows 11 hardware requirements. When Windows 11 reaches general availability, users running Windows 10 Home, Pro, and Pro for Workstations will be able to use the [PC Health Check](https://www.microsoft.com/windows/windows-11#pchealthcheck) app to determine their eligibility for Windows 11. Users running Windows 10 Enterprise and Education editions should rely on their IT administrators to let them know when they're eligible for the upgrade.  
  
 Enterprise organizations looking to evaluate device readiness in their environments can expect this capability to be integrated into existing Microsoft tools, such as Endpoint analytics and Update Compliance. This capability will be available when Windows 11 is generally available. Microsoft is also working with software publishing partners to facilitate adding Windows 11 device support into their solutions. 
 
@@ -45,19 +45,19 @@ The availability of Windows 11 will vary according to a device's hardware and wh
 
 ##### Managed devices
 
-Managed devices are devices that are under organization control. Managed devices include those managed by Microsoft Intune, Microsoft Endpoint Configuration Manager, or other endpoint management solutions. 
+Managed devices are devices that are under organization control. Managed devices include those devices managed by Microsoft Intune, Microsoft Endpoint Configuration Manager, or other endpoint management solutions. 
 
-If you manage devices on behalf of your organization, you will be able to upgrade eligible devices to Windows 11 using your existing deployment and management tools at no cost when the upgrade reaches general availability. Organizations that use Windows Update for Business will have added benefits, such as:  
+If you manage devices on behalf of your organization, you'll be able to upgrade eligible devices to Windows 11 using your existing deployment and management tools at no cost when the upgrade reaches general availability. Organizations that use Windows Update for Business will have added benefits, such as:  
 
-- Ensuring that devices that don't meet the minimum hardware requirements are not automatically offered the Windows 11 upgrade. 
+- Ensuring that devices that don't meet the minimum hardware requirements aren't automatically offered the Windows 11 upgrade. 
-- Additional insight into safeguard holds. While safeguard holds will function for Windows 11 devices just as they do for Windows 10 today, administrators using Windows Update for Business will have access to information on which safeguard holds are preventing individual devices from taking the upgrade to Windows 11. 
+- More insight into safeguard holds. While safeguard holds will function for Windows 11 devices just as they do for Windows 10 today, administrators using Windows Update for Business will have access to information on which safeguard holds are preventing individual devices from taking the upgrade to Windows 11. 
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > Also, Windows 11 has new Microsoft Software License Terms. If you are deploying with Windows Update for Business or Windows Server Update Services, you are accepting these new license terms on behalf of the users in your organization. 
 
 ##### Unmanaged devices
 
-Unmanaged devices are devices that are not managed by an IT administrator on behalf of an organization. For operating system (OS) deployment, these devices are not subject to organizational policies that manage upgrades or updates.  
+Unmanaged devices are devices that aren't managed by an IT administrator on behalf of an organization. For operating system (OS) deployment, these devices aren't subject to organizational policies that manage upgrades or updates.  
 
 Windows 11 will be offered to eligible Windows 10 devices beginning later in the 2021 calendar year. Messaging on new devices will vary by PC manufacturer, but users will see labels such as **This PC will upgrade to Windows 11 once available** on products that are available for purchase. 
 
@@ -69,10 +69,10 @@ Just like Windows 10, the machine learning based [intelligent rollout](https://t
 
 The recommended method to determine if your infrastructure, deployment processes, and management tools are ready for Windows 11 is to join the [Windows Insider Program for Business](https://insider.windows.com/for-business). As a participant in the [Release Preview Channel](/windows-insider/business/validate-Release-Preview-Channel), you can validate that your devices and applications work as expected, and explore new features.
 
-As you plan your endpoint management strategy for Windows 11, consider moving to cloud-based mobile device management (MDM), such as [Microsoft Intune](/mem/intune/fundamentals/what-is-intune). If a cloud-only approach isn't right for your organization just yet, you can still modernize and streamline essential pieces of your endpoint management strategy as follows:
+As you plan your endpoint management strategy for Windows 11, consider moving to cloud-based mobile device management (MDM), such as [Microsoft Intune](/mem/intune/fundamentals/what-is-intune). If a cloud-only approach isn't right for your organization yet, you can still modernize and streamline essential pieces of your endpoint management strategy as follows:
 - Create a [cloud management gateway](/mem/configmgr/core/clients/manage/cmg/overview) (CMG) to manage Configuration Manager clients over the internet.
 - Attach your existing Configuration Management estate to the cloud with [tenant attach](/mem/configmgr/tenant-attach/device-sync-actions) so you can manage all devices from within the Microsoft Endpoint Manager admin center. 
-- Use [co-management](/mem/configmgr/comanage/overview) to concurrently manage devices using both Configuration Manager and Microsoft Intune. This allows you to take advantage of cloud-powered capabilities like [Conditional Access](/azure/active-directory/conditional-access/overview). 
+- Use [co-management](/mem/configmgr/comanage/overview) to concurrently manage devices using both Configuration Manager and Microsoft Intune. This concurrent management allows you to take advantage of cloud-powered capabilities like [Conditional Access](/azure/active-directory/conditional-access/overview). 
 
 For more information on the benefits of these approaches, see [Cloud Attach Your Future: The Big 3](https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/configuration-manager-blog/cloud-attach-your-future-part-ii-quot-the-big-3-quot/ba-p/1750664). 
 
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ Along with user experience and security improvements, Windows 11 introduces enha
 
 When Windows 11 reaches general availability, a consolidated Windows 11 update history will be available on support.microsoft.com, similar to what is [available today for Windows 10](https://support.microsoft.com/topic/windows-10-update-history-1b6aac92-bf01-42b5-b158-f80c6d93eb11). Similarly, the [Windows release health](/windows/release-health/) hub will offer quick access to Windows 11 servicing announcements, known issues, and safeguard holds. 
 
-It is important that organizations have adequate time to plan for Windows 11. Microsoft also recognizes that many organizations will have a mix of Windows 11 and Windows 10 devices across their ecosystem. Devices on in-service versions of Windows 10 will continue to receive monthly Windows 10 security updates through 2025, as well as incremental improvements to Windows 10 to support ongoing Microsoft 365 deployments. For more information, see the [Windows 10 release information](/windows/release-health/release-information) page, which offers information about the Windows 10 General Availability Channel and Long-term Servicing Channel (LTSC) releases. 
+It's important that organizations have adequate time to plan for Windows 11. Microsoft also recognizes that many organizations will have a mix of Windows 11 and Windows 10 devices across their ecosystem. Devices on in-service versions of Windows 10 will continue to receive monthly Windows 10 security updates through 2025, and incremental improvements to Windows 10 to support ongoing Microsoft 365 deployments. For more information, see the [Windows 10 release information](/windows/release-health/release-information) page, which offers information about the Windows 10 General Availability Channel and Long-term Servicing Channel (LTSC) releases. 
 
 ## Application compatibility
 
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ If you run into compatibility issues or want to ensure that your organization's
 
 **App Assure**: With enrollment in the [App Assure](/windows/compatibility/app-assure) service, any app compatibility issues that you find with Windows 11 can be resolved. Microsoft will help you remedy application issues at no cost. Since 2018, App Assure has evaluated almost 800,000 apps, and subscriptions are free for eligible customers with 150+ seats. 
 
-**Test Base for Microsoft 365**: For software publishers, systems integrators, and IT administrators, [Test Base for Microsoft 365](https://aka.ms/testbase) (currently in private preview) is a service that allows you to validate your apps across a variety of Windows feature and quality updates and environments in a Microsoft-managed Azure environment. Enterprise organizations can also nominate their software publishers for participation by completing a short form.  
+**Test Base for Microsoft 365**: For software publishers, systems integrators, and IT administrators, [Test Base for Microsoft 365](https://aka.ms/testbase) (currently in private preview) is a service that allows you to validate your apps across various Windows features and quality updates and environments in a Microsoft-managed Azure environment. Enterprise organizations can also nominate their software publishers for participation by completing a short form.  
 
 You might already be using App Assure and Test Base in your Windows 10 environment. Both of these tools will continue to function with Windows 11. 
 

windows/whats-new/windows-11-prepare.md

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ The tools that you use for core workloads during Windows 10 deployments can stil
 
 #### On-premises solutions
 
-- If you use [Windows Server Update Service (WSUS)](/windows-server/administration/windows-server-update-services/get-started/windows-server-update-services-wsus), you will need to sync the new **Windows 11** product category. After you sync the product category, you will see Windows 11 offered as an option. If you would like to validate Windows 11 prior to release, you can sync the **Windows Insider Pre-release** category as well.
+- If you use [Windows Server Update Service (WSUS)](/windows-server/administration/windows-server-update-services/get-started/windows-server-update-services-wsus), you'll need to sync the new **Windows 11** product category. After you sync the product category, you'll see Windows 11 offered as an option. If you would like to validate Windows 11 prior to release, you can sync the **Windows Insider Pre-release** category as well.
 
   > [!NOTE]
   > During deployment, you will be prompted to agree to the Microsoft Software License Terms on behalf of your users. Additionally, you will not see an x86 option because Windows 11 is not supported on 32-bit architecture.
@@ -42,14 +42,14 @@ The tools that you use for core workloads during Windows 10 deployments can stil
 
 #### Cloud-based solutions
 
--	If you use Windows Update for Business policies, you will need to use the **Target Version** capability (either through policy or the Windows Update for Business deployment service) rather than using feature update deferrals alone to upgrade from Windows 10 to Windows 11. Feature update deferrals are great to move to newer versions of your current product (for example, Windows 10, version 20H2 to 21H1), but won't automatically devices move between products (Windows 10 to Windows 11). 
+-	If you use Windows Update for Business policies, you'll need to use the **Target Version** capability (either through policy or the Windows Update for Business deployment service) rather than using feature update deferrals alone to upgrade from Windows 10 to Windows 11. Feature update deferrals are great to move to newer versions of your current product (for example, Windows 10, version 20H2 to 21H1), but won't automatically devices move between products (Windows 10 to Windows 11). 
-    - If you use Microsoft Intune and have a Microsoft 365 E3 license, you will be able to use the [feature update deployments](/mem/intune/protect/windows-10-feature-updates) page to select **Windows 11, version 21H2** and upgrade Windows 10 devices to Windows 11. You can also continue using the same update experience controls to manage Windows 10 and Windows 11 on the **Update Rings** page in Intune. If you aren’t ready to move to Windows 11, keep the feature update version set at the version you are currently on. When you are ready to start upgrading devices, change the feature update deployment setting to specify Windows 11. 
+    - If you use Microsoft Intune and have a Microsoft 365 E3 license, you'll be able to use the [feature update deployments](/mem/intune/protect/windows-10-feature-updates) page to select **Windows 11, version 21H2** and upgrade Windows 10 devices to Windows 11. You can also continue using the same update experience controls to manage Windows 10 and Windows 11 on the **Update Rings** page in Intune. If you aren’t ready to move to Windows 11, keep the feature update version set at the version you're currently on. When you're ready to start upgrading devices, change the feature update deployment setting to specify Windows 11. 
     - In Group Policy, **Select target Feature Update version** has two entry fields after taking the 9/1/2021 optional update ([KB5005101](https://support.microsoft.com/topic/september-1-2021-kb5005101-os-builds-19041-1202-19042-1202-and-19043-1202-preview-82a50f27-a56f-4212-96ce-1554e8058dc1)) or a later update: **Product Version** and **Target Version**. 
 
     - The product field must specify Windows 11 in order for devices to upgrade to Windows 11. If only the target version field is configured, the device will be offered matching versions of the same product. 
     - For example, if a device is running <i>Windows 10, version 2004</i> and only the target version is configured to 21H1, this device will be offered version <i>Windows 10, version 21H1</i>, even if multiple products have a 21H1 version.
-- Quality update deferrals will continue to work the same across both Windows 10 and Windows 11. This is true regardless of which management tool you use to configure Windows Update for Business policies.
+- Quality update deferrals will continue to work the same across both Windows 10 and Windows 11, which is true regardless of which management tool you use to configure Windows Update for Business policies.
-- If you use Microsoft Intune and have a Microsoft 365 E3 license, you will be able to use [feature update deployments](/mem/intune/protect/windows-10-feature-updates) to easily update devices from one release of Windows 10 to another, or to upgrade Windows 10 devices to Windows 11. You can also continue using the same update experience controls to manage Windows 10 and Windows 11. If you aren’t ready to move to Windows 11, keep the feature update version set at the version you are currently on. When you are ready to start upgrading devices, change the feature update deployment setting to specify Windows 11.
+- If you use Microsoft Intune and have a Microsoft 365 E3 license, you'll be able to use [feature update deployments](/mem/intune/protect/windows-10-feature-updates) to easily update devices from one release of Windows 10 to another, or to upgrade Windows 10 devices to Windows 11. You can also continue using the same update experience controls to manage Windows 10 and Windows 11. If you aren’t ready to move to Windows 11, keep the feature update version set at the version you're currently on. When you're ready to start upgrading devices, change the feature update deployment setting to specify Windows 11.
 
   > [!NOTE]
   > Endpoints managed by Windows Update for Business will not automatically upgrade to Windows 11 unless an administrator explicitly configures a **Target Version** using the [TargetReleaseVersion](/windows/client-management/mdm/policy-csp-update#update-targetreleaseversion) setting using a Windows CSP, a [feature update profile](/mem/intune/protect/windows-10-feature-updates) in Intune, or the [Select target Feature Update version setting](/windows/deployment/update/waas-wufb-group-policy#i-want-to-stay-on-a-specific-version) in a group policy. 
@@ -64,13 +64,13 @@ The following are some common use cases and the corresponding Microsoft Endpoint
 - **Configure rules and control settings for users, apps, and devices**: When you enroll devices in [Microsoft Intune](/mem/intune/fundamentals/what-is-intune), administrators have full control over apps, settings, features, and security for both Windows 11 and Windows 10. You can also use app protection policies to require multifactor authentication (MFA) for specific apps. 
 - **Streamline device management for frontline, remote, and onsite workers**: Introduced with Windows 10, [cloud configuration](/mem/intune/fundamentals/cloud-configuration) is a standard, easy-to-manage, device configuration that is cloud-optimized for users with specific workflow needs. It can be deployed to devices running the Pro, Enterprise, and Education editions of Windows 11 by using Microsoft Endpoint Manager. 
 
-If you are exclusively using an on-premises device management solution (for example, Configuration Manager), you can still use the [cloud management gateway](/mem/configmgr/core/clients/manage/cmg/overview), enable [tenant attach](/mem/configmgr/tenant-attach/device-sync-actions), or enable [co-management](/mem/configmgr/comanage/overview) with Microsoft Intune. These solutions can make it easier to keep devices secure and up-to-date. 
+If you're exclusively using an on-premises device management solution (for example, Configuration Manager), you can still use the [cloud management gateway](/mem/configmgr/core/clients/manage/cmg/overview), enable [tenant attach](/mem/configmgr/tenant-attach/device-sync-actions), or enable [co-management](/mem/configmgr/comanage/overview) with Microsoft Intune. These solutions can make it easier to keep devices secure and up-to-date. 
 
 ## Review servicing approach and policies
 
-Every organization will transition to Windows 11 at its own pace. Microsoft is committed to supporting you through your migration to Windows 11, whether you are a fast adopter or will make the transition over the coming months or years. 
+Every organization will transition to Windows 11 at its own pace. Microsoft is committed to supporting you through your migration to Windows 11, whether you're a fast adopter or will make the transition over the coming months or years. 
 
-When you think of operating system updates as an ongoing process, you will automatically improve your ability to deploy updates. This approach enables you to stay current with less effort, and less impact on productivity. To begin, think about how you roll out Windows feature updates today: which devices, and at what pace. 
+When you think of operating system updates as an ongoing process, you'll automatically improve your ability to deploy updates. This approach enables you to stay current with less effort, and less impact on productivity. To begin, think about how you roll out Windows feature updates today: which devices, and at what pace. 
 
 Next, craft a deployment plan for Windows 11 that includes deployment groups, rings, users, or devices. There are no absolute rules for exactly how many rings to have for your deployments, but a common structure is: 
 - Preview (first or canary): Planning and development 
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ For detailed information, see [Create a deployment plan](/windows/deployment/upd
 
 #### Review policies
 
-Review deployment-related policies, taking into consideration your organization's security objectives, update compliance deadlines, and device activity. Apply changes where you can gain a clear improvement, particularly with regard to the speed of the update process or security. 
+Review deployment-related policies, taking into consideration your organization's security objectives, update compliance deadlines, and device activity. Apply changes where you can gain a clear improvement, particularly regarding the speed of the update process or security. 
 
 #### Validate apps and infrastructure
 
@@ -90,16 +90,16 @@ To validate that your apps, infrastructure, and deployment processes are ready f
 If you use Windows Server Update Services, you can deploy directly from the Windows Insider Pre-release category using one of the following processes:
 
 - Set **Manage Preview Builds** to **Release Preview** in Windows Update for Business. 
-- Leverage Azure Virtual Desktop and Azure Marketplace images. 
+- Use Azure Virtual Desktop and Azure Marketplace images. 
 - Download and deploy ISOs from Microsoft’s Windows Insider Program ISO Download page. 
 
 Regardless of the method you choose, you have the benefit of free Microsoft support when validating pre-release builds. Free support is available to any commercial customer deploying Windows 10 or Windows 11 Preview Builds, once they become available through the Windows Insider Program. 
 
 #### Analytics and assessment tools 
 
-If you use Microsoft Endpoint Manager and have onboarded devices to Endpoint analytics, you will have access to a hardware readiness assessment later this year. This tool enables you to quickly identify which of your managed devices are eligible for the Windows 11 upgrade.
+If you use Microsoft Endpoint Manager and have onboarded devices to Endpoint analytics, you'll have access to a hardware readiness assessment later this year. This tool enables you to quickly identify which of your managed devices are eligible for the Windows 11 upgrade.
 
-[Desktop Analytics](/mem/configmgr/desktop-analytics/overview) does not support Windows 11. You must use [Endpoint analytics](/mem/analytics/overview).
+[Desktop Analytics](/mem/configmgr/desktop-analytics/overview) doesn't support Windows 11. You must use [Endpoint analytics](/mem/analytics/overview).
 
 ## Prepare a pilot deployment
 
@@ -117,8 +117,8 @@ At a high level, the tasks involved are:
 
 ## User readiness
 
-Do not overlook the importance of user readiness to deliver an effective, enterprise-wide deployment of Windows 11. Windows 11 has a familiar design, but your users will see several enhancements to the overall user interface. They will also need to adapt to changes in menus and settings pages. Therefore, consider the following tasks to prepare users and your IT support staff Windows 11: 
+Don't overlook the importance of user readiness to deliver an effective, enterprise-wide deployment of Windows 11. Windows 11 has a familiar design, but your users will see several enhancements to the overall user interface. They'll also need to adapt to changes in menus and settings pages. Therefore, consider the following tasks to prepare users and your IT support staff Windows 11: 
-- Create a communications schedule to ensure that you provide the right message at the right time to the right groups of users, based on when they will see the changes. 
+- Create a communications schedule to ensure that you provide the right message at the right time to the right groups of users, based on when they'll see the changes. 
 - Draft concise emails that inform users of what changes they can expect to see. Offer tips on how to use or customize their experience. Include information about support and help desk options. 
 - Update help desk manuals with screenshots of the new user interface, the out-of-box experience for new devices, and the upgrade experience for existing devices. 
 

windows/whats-new/windows-11-requirements.md

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ To install or upgrade to Windows 11, devices must meet the following minimum har
 - Processor: 1 gigahertz (GHz) or faster with two or more cores on a [compatible 64-bit processor](https://aka.ms/CPUlist) or system on a chip (SoC).
 - RAM: 4 gigabytes (GB) or greater.
 - Storage: 64 GB\* or greater available storage is required to install Windows 11.
-  - Additional storage space might be required to download updates and enable specific features.
+  - Extra storage space might be required to download updates and enable specific features.
 - Graphics card: Compatible with DirectX 12 or later, with a WDDM 2.0 driver.
 - System firmware: UEFI, Secure Boot capable.
 - TPM: [Trusted Platform Module](/windows/security/information-protection/tpm/trusted-platform-module-overview) (TPM) version 2.0.
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ To install or upgrade to Windows 11, devices must meet the following minimum har
 - Internet connection: Internet connectivity is necessary to perform updates, and to download and use some features. 
   - Windows 11 Home edition requires an Internet connection and a Microsoft Account to complete device setup on first use.
 
-\* There might be additional requirements over time for updates, and to enable specific features within the operating system. For more information, see [Windows 11 specifications](https://www.microsoft.com/windows/windows-11-specifications). 
+\* There might be more requirements over time for updates, and to enable specific features within the operating system. For more information, see [Windows 11 specifications](https://www.microsoft.com/windows/windows-11-specifications). 
 
 Also see [Update on Windows 11 minimum system requirements](https://blogs.windows.com/windows-insider/2021/06/28/update-on-windows-11-minimum-system-requirements/).
 
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ Eligible Windows 10 devices must be on version 2004 or later, and have installed
 
 ## Feature-specific requirements
 
-Some features in Windows 11 have requirements beyond those listed above. See the following list of features and associated requirements.
+Some features in Windows 11 have requirements beyond those requirements listed above. See the following list of features and associated requirements.
 
 - **5G support**: requires 5G capable modem.
 - **Auto HDR**: requires an HDR monitor.
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ Some features in Windows 11 have requirements beyond those listed above. See the
 - **Wi-Fi 6E**: requires new WLAN IHV hardware and driver and a Wi-Fi 6E capable AP/router.
 - **Windows Hello**: requires a camera configured for near infrared (IR) imaging or fingerprint reader for biometric authentication. Devices without biometric sensors can use Windows Hello with a PIN or portable Microsoft compatible security key. For more information, see [IT tools to support Windows 10, version 21H1](https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/windows-it-pro-blog/it-tools-to-support-windows-10-version-21h1/ba-p/2365103).
 - **Windows Projection**: requires a display adapter that supports Windows Display Driver Model (WDDM) 2.0 and a Wi-Fi adapter that supports Wi-Fi Direct.
-- **Xbox app**: requires an Xbox Live account, which is not available in all regions. Please go to the Xbox Live Countries and Regions page for the most up-to-date information on availability. Some features in the Xbox app will require an active [Xbox Game Pass](https://www.xbox.com/xbox-game-pass) subscription.
+- **Xbox app**: requires an Xbox Live account, which isn't available in all regions. Go to the Xbox Live Countries and Regions page for the most up-to-date information on availability. Some features in the Xbox app will require an active [Xbox Game Pass](https://www.xbox.com/xbox-game-pass) subscription.
 
 ## Virtual machine support
 
@@ -84,11 +84,11 @@ The following configuration requirements apply to VMs running Windows 11.
 -	Storage: 64 GB or greater
 -	Security: Secure Boot capable, virtual TPM enabled
 -	Memory:  4 GB or greater
--	Processor: 2 or more virtual processors
+-	Processor: Two or more virtual processors
 
 The VM host CPU must also meet Windows 11 [processor requirements](/windows-hardware/design/minimum/windows-processor-requirements).
 
-<b>\*</b> In-place upgrade of existing generation 1 VMs to Windows 11 is not possible.
+<b>\*</b> In-place upgrade of existing generation 1 VMs to Windows 11 isn't possible.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > Procedures to configure required VM settings depend on the VM host type. For VM hosts running Hyper-V, virtualization (VT-x, VT-d) must be enabled in BIOS. Virtual TPM 2.0 is emulated in the guest VM independent of the Hyper-V host TPM presence or version.