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windows/security/intelligence/transparency-report.md

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-# Industry antivirus tests
+# Top scoring in industry antivirus tests
 
-Microsoft security stack continually performs well on independent tests. 
+Antivirus capabilities in Windows Defender ATP **consistently receives high scores** from independent tests, making it a top choice in the antivirus market. That is because Microsoft has built the most secure version of its platform in Windows 10, making it much more difficult for exploits, malware, and other threats to infect devices.
 
-## Top scoring in independent tests
+Windows Defender ATP [next generation](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xy3MOxkX_o4) protection detects and stops malware at first sight by using a model that leverages predictive technologies, [machine learning](https://cloudblogs.microsoft.com/microsoftsecure/2018/06/07/machine-learning-vs-social-engineering/), [artificial intelligence](https://cloudblogs.microsoft.com/microsoftsecure/2018/02/14/how-artificial-intelligence-stopped-an-emotet-outbreak/), behavioral analysis, and other evolutions. That is why it [is the most deployed in the enterprise](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/threat-protection/windows-defender-antivirus/windows-defender-antivirus-in-windows-10).
 
-Microsoft has worked hard to make our capabilities increasingly more effective by utilizing heuristic detections, machine learning, behavioral analysis, and other evolutions. That is why [Windows Defender Antivirus is the most deployed in the enterprise](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/threat-protection/windows-defender-antivirus/windows-defender-antivirus-in-windows-10).
+Millions of devices are protected from malware outbreaks and cyberattacks every day, sometimes [milliseconds after a campaign starts](https://cloudblogs.microsoft.com/microsoftsecure/2018/03/07/behavior-monitoring-combined-with-machine-learning-spoils-a-massive-dofoil-coin-mining-campaign/). In many cases, customers may not even know they were protected.
 
-The time and effort Microsoft puts into improving Windows Defender Antivirus continues to show in the form of consistently high scores from independent tests.
+The excellent results on independent industry tests is just one indication of quality we provide.
 
 ## AV-TEST
 
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ The graphs below show Windows Defender AV’s detection rates in “Real World
 
 AV-Comparatives is an independent organization offering systematic testing for security software such as PC/Mac-based antivirus products and mobile security solutions.
 
-The results show the AV Comparatives Enterprise Real-World Protection Test
+The results show the AV Comparatives Enterprise Real-World Protection Test, which evaluates the “real-world” protection capabilities with default settings. The goal is to find out whether the security software protects the computer by either hindering the malware from changing any systems or remediating all changes if any were made.
 
 ### **March-June 2018**
 
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ Blocked (malware was successfully blocked by AV): **98.7%**
 
 ## Factors not represented in the tests
 
-It is important to remember that [Windows Defender ATP](https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/WindowsForBusiness/windows-atp?ocid=cx-blog-mmpc) (which integrates our antivirus capabilities and the whole Windows security stack) provides a much larger set of protection features that are not factored into the tests. These features provide **additional layers of protection** that help prevent malware from getting onto devices in the first place.
+It is important to remember that [Windows Defender ATP](https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/WindowsForBusiness/windows-atp?ocid=cx-blog-mmpc) (which integrates our antivirus capabilities and the whole Windows security stack) provides a much larger set of protection features that are not factored into the tests. These features provide [additional layers of protection](https://cloudblogs.microsoft.com/microsoftsecure/2017/12/11/detonating-a-bad-rabbit-windows-defender-antivirus-and-layered-machine-learning-defenses/) that help prevent malware from getting onto devices in the first place.
 
  To see these capabilities for yourself sign up for a [90-day trial of Windows Defender ATP](https://www.microsoft.com/windowsforbusiness/windows-atp?ocid=cx-blog-mmpc) today, or [enable Preview features on existing tenants](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/security/threat-protection/windows-defender-atp/preview-settings-windows-defender-advanced-threat-protection).