From 2fd23ac849bb325e54660d3920d57fee3054d2d6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: MokumaPM <105771503+MokumaPM@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 15 Oct 2024 00:21:26 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Updates

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 windows/security/book/operating-system-security.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/windows/security/book/operating-system-security.md b/windows/security/book/operating-system-security.md
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--- a/windows/security/book/operating-system-security.md
+++ b/windows/security/book/operating-system-security.md
@@ -11,4 +11,4 @@ ms.date: 09/06/2024
 
 :::image type="content" source="images/operating-system-on.png" alt-text="Diagram containing a list of security features." lightbox="images/operating-system.png" border="false":::
 
-Windows 11 is the most secure Windows yet with extensive security measures in the operating system designed to help keep devices, identities, and information safe. These measures include built-in advanced encryption and data protection, robust network system security, and intelligent safeguards against ever-evolving viruses and threats.
+Operating systems face an onslaught of security threats, from malware and exploits to unauthorized access and privilege escalation. Windows 11 is the most secure Windows yet, with strong operating system safeguards to help keep devices, identities, and data safe. Defenses include a trusted boot process, layers of encryption, network security, and virus and threat protection. These comprehensive security features ensure that Windows 11 provides robust protection against modern cyber threats.