From 3286a40e0d5adb2716a57af49f7d76e571c7514d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Laura Newsad Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2018 10:27:22 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Updated tense --- education/windows/set-up-school-pcs-whats-new.md | 11 +++++------ 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/education/windows/set-up-school-pcs-whats-new.md b/education/windows/set-up-school-pcs-whats-new.md index b18d01c83d..d35daeb864 100644 --- a/education/windows/set-up-school-pcs-whats-new.md +++ b/education/windows/set-up-school-pcs-whats-new.md @@ -25,22 +25,21 @@ The following screens and functionality were added to the setup workflow. Select [**Package name**](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#package-name): Customize a package name to make it easy to recognize it from your school's other packages. The name is generated by Azure Active Directory and appears as the filename and as the token name in Azure AD in the Azure portal. -[**Product key**](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#product-key): Enter a product key to upgrade your current edition of Windows 10, or change -the existing product key. +[**Product key**](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#product-key): Enter a product key to upgrade your current edition of Windows 10, or change the existing product key. [**Personalization**](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#personalization): Upload images from your computer to customize how the lock screen and background appears on student devices. ### Azure AD token expiration extended to 180 days -Packages now expire 180 days from the date they are created. [An update has also been made](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#package-name) to append the date to the end of the package name. Example name: SetUpSchoolPCS (Expires 4-22-2019) +Packages now expire 180 days from the date you create them. ### Updated apps with more helpful, descriptive text -The app's **Skip** buttons were updated with new text to clarify the intent of each action. An **Exit** button was also added to the last page of the app. +We've update the app's **Skip** buttons to clarify the intent of each action. You'll also see an **Exit** button on the last page of the app. ### Option to keep existing device names -If you want to keep the orginal names of your student devices, the [**Name these devices** screen](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#device-names) now lets you click **Continue with existing names.** +The [**Name these devices** screen](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#device-names) now gives you the option to keep the orginal or existing names of your student devices. ### Skype and Messaging apps to be removed from student PCs by default -The Skype and Messaging app has been added to a selection of apps that are, by default, removed from student devices. +We've added the Skype and Messaging app to a selection of apps that are, by default, removed from student devices. ## Next steps