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windows/deployment/deploy-windows-mdt/create-a-windows-10-reference-image.md

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ For the purposes of this topic, we will use three computers: DC01, MDT01, and PC
     ![figure 1](../images/mdt-08-fig01.png)
 
 >[!NOTE]
->See [Deploying Windows 10 with the Microsoft Deployment Toolkit](deploy-windows-10-with-the-microsoft-deployment-toolkit.md) for more detailed information about the setup for this lab.
+>See [Deploying Windows 10 with the Microsoft Deployment Toolkit](deploy-windows-10-with-the-microsoft-deployment-toolkit.md) for detailed information about the setup for this guide.
 
 ## The reference image
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ With Windows 10, there is no hard requirement to create reference images. Howev
 
 ### Create the MDT build lab deployment share
 
-- On MDT01, log on as admin using a password of <b>pass@word3</b> (credentials from the [prepare for deployment](prepare-for-windows-deployment-with-mdt.md) topic).
+- On MDT01, log on as administrator using a password of <b>pass@word1</b> (credentials from the [prepare for deployment](prepare-for-windows-deployment-with-mdt.md) topic).
 - Start the MDT deployment workbench, and pin this to the taskbar for easy access.
 - Using the Deployment Workbench, right-click **Deployment Shares** and select **New Deployment Share**.
 - Use the following settings for the New Deployment Share Wizard:
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ MDT supports adding both full source Windows 10 DVDs (ISOs) and custom images t
  
 ### Add Windows 10 Enterprise x64 (full source)
 
-1. Sign on to MDT01 on as **CONTOSO\\admin** and copy the content of a Windows 10 Enterprise x64 DVD/ISO to the **D:\\Downloads\\Windows 10 Enterprise x64** folder on MDT01. See the following example.
+1. Sign on to MDT01 on as **CONTOSO\\administrator** and copy the content of a Windows 10 Enterprise x64 DVD/ISO to the **D:\\Downloads\\Windows 10 Enterprise x64** folder on MDT01, or just insert the DVD or mount an ISO on MDT01. The following example shows the files copied to the D:\\Downloads folder, but you can also choose to import the OS directly from an ISO or DVD.
 
     ![ISO](../images/iso-data.png)
 
@@ -93,12 +93,14 @@ MDT supports adding both full source Windows 10 DVDs (ISOs) and custom images t
 3. Right-click the **Operating Systems** node, and create a new folder named **Windows 10**.
 4. Expand the **Operating Systems** node, right-click the **Windows 10** folder, and select **Import Operating System**. Use the following settings for the Import Operating System Wizard:
     - Full set of source files
-    - Source directory: <b>D:\\Downloads\\Windows 10 Enterprise x64</b>
+    - Source directory: (location of your source files)
     - Destination directory name: <b>W10EX64RTM</b>
 5. After adding the operating system, in the **Operating Systems / Windows 10** folder, double-click the added operating system name in the **Operating System** node and change the name to: **Windows 10 Enterprise x64 RTM Default Image**. See the following example.
 
     ![Default image](../images/figure4-deployment-workbench.png)
 
+>Depending on the DVD you used, there might be multiple editions. For the purposes of this guide, we are using the Windows 10 Enterprise image, but other images will also work.
+
 ## Add applications
 
 Before you create an MDT task sequence, you need to add any applications and scripts you wish to install to the MDT Build Lab share.

windows/deployment/deploy-windows-mdt/prepare-for-windows-deployment-with-mdt.md

@@ -166,13 +166,13 @@ To use the Active Directory Users and Computers console (instead of PowerShell):
 5.  In the **Contoso / Groups** OU, create the following OU:
     1.   Security Groups
 
-The final result of either method is shown below (the MDT_BA account will be created next).
+The final result of either method is shown below. The **MDT_BA** account will be created next.
 
 ## Create the MDT service account
 
 When creating a reference image, you need an account for MDT. The MDT build account is used for Windows Preinstallation Environment (Windows PE) to connect to MDT01.
 
-To create an MDT build account, open an elevalted Windows PowerShell prompt on DC01 and enter the following (copy and paste the entire command noticing the scroll bar at the bottom):
+To create an MDT build account, open an elevalted Windows PowerShell prompt on DC01 and enter the following (copy and paste the entire command, taking care to notice the scroll bar at the bottom). This command will create the MDT_BA user account and set the password to "pass@word1":
 
 ```powershell
 New-ADUser -Name MDT_BA -UserPrincipalName MDT_BA -path "OU=Service Accounts,OU=Accounts,OU=Contoso,DC=CONTOSO,DC=COM" -Description "MDT Build Account" -AccountPassword (ConvertTo-SecureString "pass@word1" -AsPlainText -Force) -ChangePasswordAtLogon $false -PasswordNeverExpires $true -Enabled $true
@@ -210,19 +210,17 @@ Alternatively, CMTrace formatting makes the logs much easier to read. See the sa
 
 ## Next steps
 
-The following is an example of files that have been downloaded and installed (including optional CMTrace) on MDT at this point in the lab.
-
-![downloads](../images/downloads.png)
-
 When you have completed all the steps in this section to prepare for deployment, see [Create a Windows 10 reference image](create-a-windows-10-reference-image.md).
 
-## Sample files
+## Appendix
 
-The following sample files are available to help automate some MDT deployment tasks:
+**Sample files**
+
+The following sample files are also available to help automate some MDT deployment tasks:
 -   [Gather.ps1](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/p/?LinkId=619361). This sample Windows PowerShell script performs the MDT Gather process in a simulated MDT environment. This allows you to test the MDT gather process and check to see if it is working correctly without performing a full Windows deployment.
 -   [Set-OUPermissions.ps1](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/p/?LinkId=619362). This sample Windows PowerShell script creates a domain account and then configures OU permissions to allow the account to join machines to the domain in the specified OU.
 -   [MDTSample.zip](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/p/?LinkId=619363). This sample web service shows you how to configure a computer name dynamically using MDT.
 
 ## Related topics
 
-[Understand the Microsoft Deployment Toolkit (MDT)](get-started-with-the-microsoft-deployment-toolkit.md)
+[Get started with MDT](get-started-with-the-microsoft-deployment-toolkit.md)