fixes based on feedback

windows/deployment/TOC.yml

@@ -166,8 +166,8 @@
               href: update/waas-configure-wufb.md
             - name: Windows Update for Business deployment service
               href: update/deployment-service-overview.md
-            - name: Troubleshooting the Windows Update for Business deployment service
+              - name: Troubleshooting the Windows Update for Business deployment service
-              href: update/deployment-service-troubleshooting.md
+                href: update/deployment-service-troubleshooting.md
             - name: Enforcing compliance deadlines for updates
               href: update/wufb-compliancedeadlines.md
             - name: Integrate Windows Update for Business with management solutions

windows/deployment/update/deployment-service-overview.md

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ The service is compliant {COMPLIANT WITH WHAT? BY ITSELF THE WORD DOESN'T MEAN A
 
 ## How it works
 
-The deployment service complements existing Windows Update for Business capabilities, including existing device policies and Update Compliance.
+The deployment service complements existing Windows Update for Business capabilities, including existing device policies and [Update Compliance](update-compliance-monitor.md).
 
 {BIG IMAGE}
 
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ Unlike existing client policy, the deployment service does not interact with dev
 
 {SMALLER IMAGE}
 
-The deployment service exposes these capabilities through Microsoft Graph REST APIs {LINK}. You can call the APIs directly, through a Graph SDK, or integrate them with a management tool such as Microsoft Endpoint Manager.
+The deployment service exposes these capabilities through Microsoft [Graph REST APIs](/graph/overview). You can call the APIs directly, through a Graph SDK, or integrate them with a management tool such as Microsoft Endpoint Manager.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ The deployment service protects deployments through a combination of rollout con
 
 ### Schedule rollouts with automatic piloting
 
-The deployment service allows any update to be deployed over a period of days or weeks. Once an update has been scheduled, the deployment service optimizes the deployment based on the scheduling parameters and unique attributes spanning the devices being updated. The service does the following: {IN THIS ORDER SPECIFICALLY OR JUST IN GENERAL?}
+The deployment service allows any update to be deployed over a period of days or weeks. Once an update has been scheduled, the deployment service optimizes the deployment based on the scheduling parameters and unique attributes spanning the devices being updated. The service follows these steps:
 
 1. Determine the number of devices to be updated in each deployment wave, based on scheduling parameters.
 2. Select devices for each deployment wave so that earlier waves have a diversity of hardware and software, to function as pilot device populations.
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ Deployment scheduling controls are always available, but to take advantage of th
 
 #### Set the **AllowWUfBCloudProcessing** policy
 
-To enroll devices in Windows Update for Business cloud processing {IS THIS THE SAME THING AS THE DEPLOYMENT SERVICE?}, set the **AllowWUfBCloudProcessing** policy using mobile device management (MDM) policy.
+To enroll devices in Windows Update for Business cloud processing, set the **AllowWUfBCloudProcessing** policy using mobile device management (MDM) policy.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > Setting this policy by using Group Policy isn't currently supported.
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ Following is an example of setting the policy using Microsoft Endpoint Manager:
 5. In **Configuration settings**, select **Add**, enter the following settings, select **Save**, and then select **Next**.
     - Name: **AllowWUfBCloudProcessing**
     - Description: Enter a description.
-    - OMA-URI: \`./Vendor/MSFT/Policy/Config/System/AllowWUfBCloudProcessing\`
+    - OMA-URI: `./Vendor/MSFT/Policy/Config/System/AllowWUfBCloudProcessing`
     - Data type: **String**
     - Value: **1**
 6. In **Assignments**, select the groups that will receive the profile, and then select **Next**.

windows/deployment/update/deployment-service-troubleshooting.md

@@ -32,4 +32,4 @@ This troubleshooting guide addresses the most common issues that IT administrato
 ## The device is receiving an update that I didn't deploy
 
 - Check that the device is scanning the Windows Update service and not a different endpoint. If the device is scanning for updates from a WSUS endpoint, for example, it might receive different updates. To learn more about scanning for updates, see [Scanning updates](how-windows-update-works.md#scanning-updates).
-- **Feature updates only***: Check that the device is successfully enrolled in feature update management by the deployment service. A device that is not successfully enrolled might receive different updates according to its feature update deferral period, for example. A device that is successfully enrolled will be represented by an Azure AD device resource with an update management enrollment for feature updates and have no Azure AD device registration errors.
+- **Feature updates only**: Check that the device is successfully enrolled in feature update management by the deployment service. A device that is not successfully enrolled might receive different updates according to its feature update deferral period, for example. A device that is successfully enrolled will be represented by an Azure AD device resource with an update management enrollment for feature updates and have no Azure AD device registration errors.