From 40336e833a9c25c02f616f02920d166549b6e82d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: LizRoss <lizross@microsoft.com>
Date: Thu, 13 Oct 2016 12:51:49 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Updated for tech review

---
 windows/keep-secure/app-behavior-with-wip.md | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/windows/keep-secure/app-behavior-with-wip.md b/windows/keep-secure/app-behavior-with-wip.md
index 134bb1bd26..55939649d4 100644
--- a/windows/keep-secure/app-behavior-with-wip.md
+++ b/windows/keep-secure/app-behavior-with-wip.md
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ This table includes info about how unenlightened apps might behave, based on you
         <th align="center">Name-based policies, using the <code>/*AppCompat*/</code> string or proxy-based policies</th>
     </tr>
    <tr align="left">
-     <td><strong>Not required.</strong> App connects directly using IP address.</td>
+     <td><strong>Not required.</strong> App connects to enterprise cloud resources directly, using an IP address.</td>
      <td>
         <ul>
             <li>App is entirely blocked from both personal and enterprise cloud resources.</li>
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ This table includes info about how unenlightened apps might behave, based on you
     </td>
    </tr>
     <tr align="left">
-     <td><strong>Not required.</strong> App connects using hostname.</td>
+     <td><strong>Not required.</strong> App connects to enterprise cloud resources, using a hostname.</td>
      <td colspan="2">
         <ul>
             <li>App is blocked from accessing enterprise cloud resources, but can access other network resources.</li>
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ This table includes info about how unenlightened apps might behave, based on you
     </td>
    </tr>
     <tr align="left">
-     <td><strong>Allow.</strong> App connects using IP address or hostnames.</td>
+     <td><strong>Allow.</strong> App connects to enterprise cloud resources, using an IP address or a hostname.</td>
      <td colspan="2">
         <ul>
             <li>App can access both personal and enterprise cloud resources.</li>
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ This table includes info about how unenlightened apps might behave, based on you
     </td>
    </tr>
     <tr align="left" colspan="2">
-     <td><strong>Exempt.</strong> App connects using IP address or hostnames.</td>
+     <td><strong>Exempt.</strong> App connects to enterprise cloud resources, using an IP address or a hostname.</td>
      <td colspan="2">
         <ul>
             <li>App can access both personal and enterprise cloud resources.</li>
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ This table includes info about how enlightened apps might behave, based on your
      <th>Networking policy configuration for name-based policies, possibly using the <code>/*AppCompat*/</code> string, or proxy-based policies</th>
    </tr>
     <tr>
-        <td><strong>Not required.</strong> App connects using IP address or hostnames.</td>
+        <td><strong>Not required.</strong> App connects to enterprise cloud resources, using an IP address or a hostname.</td>
         <td>
             <ul>
                 <li>App is blocked from accessing enterprise cloud resources, but can access other network resources.</li>
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ This table includes info about how enlightened apps might behave, based on your
         </td>
     </tr>
     <tr>
-        <td><strong>Allow.</strong> App connects using IP address or hostnames.</td>
+        <td><strong>Allow.</strong> App connects to enterprise cloud resources, using an IP address or a hostname.</td>
         <td>
             <ul>
                 <li>App can access both personal and enterprise cloud resources.</li>
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ This table includes info about how enlightened apps might behave, based on your
         </td>
     </tr>
     <tr>
-        <td><strong>Exempt.</strong> App connects using IP address or hostnames.</td>
+        <td><strong>Exempt.</strong> App connects to enterprise cloud resources, using an IP address or a hostname.</td>
         <td>
             <ul>
                 <li>App can access both personal and enterprise cloud resources.</li>