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@@ -22,13 +22,13 @@ Windows Defender ATP offers a comprehensive approach in securing enterprise netw
 
 The attack surface reduction set of capabilities provide the first line of defense in the stack. By ensuring configuration settings are properly set and exploit mitigation techniques are applied, these set of capabilities resist attacks and exploitations. 
 
-To further reinforce the security perimeter of your network, Windows Defender ATP uses next generation protection capabilities designed to catch all types of emerging threats.
+To further reinforce the security perimeter of your network, Windows Defender ATP uses next generation protection designed to catch all types of emerging threats.
 
-The endpoint detection and response capabilities are put in place to detect, investigate, and respond to advanced threats that may have penetrated the first line of defense. 
+Endpoint detection and response capabilities are put in place to detect, investigate, and respond to advanced threats that may have made it past the first two security security pillars. 
 
 In conjunction with being able to quickly respond to advanced attacks, Windows Defender ATP offers automatic investigation and remediation capabilities that help reduce the volume of alerts in minutes at scale. 
 
-The security posture capability brings all these views together in one place so that you can easily keep track and further improve your organization's security posture. 
+Windows Defender ATP also provides a security posture capability to help you dynamically assess the security state of your enterprise network, identify unprotected systems, and take recommended actions to improve the overall security state of your network.
 
 
 The following table can help you better understand how capabilities align within the Windows Defender ATP offering:
@@ -38,6 +38,6 @@ The following table can help you better understand how capabilities align within
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 [Windows Defender SmartScreen](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows/security/threat-protection/windows-defender-smartscreen/windows-defender-smartscreen-overview) OTHER PRODUCTS?? <br> OR <br> Hardware based isolation<br><br> Application control<br><br> Exploit protection<br><br> Network protection<br><br> Controlled folder access | [Windows Defender Antivirus](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows/security/threat-protection/windows-defender-antivirus/windows-defender-antivirus-in-windows-10) <br> OR <br> Web protection <br><br> Machine learning <br><br> Script and memory attack protection <br><br> Antivirus <br><br> Runtime emulator<br><br> Threat intelligence<br><br> URL/IP reputation <br><br> Sandbox service | Deep operating system recording sensor <br><br> Machine learning, behavioral and anomaly detection <br><br> Response containment <br><br> Realtime and historical threat hunting <br><br> Threat intelligence and custom detections | Forensic collection <br><br> Response orchestration <br><br> Historical endpoint data <br><br> Artificial intelligence reponse playbooks | Asset inventory <br> Operating system baseline compliance <br><br> Recommended improvement actions<br> <br> Secure score <br><br> Threat analytics <br><br> Reporting and trends
 
-These capabilities cut across multiple products that make up the Windows Defender ATP platform. For more information on how to leverage all the Windows Defender ATP capabilities, see [Threat protection](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows/security/threat-protection/index).
+These capabilities are available across multiple products that make up the Windows Defender ATP platform. For more information on how to leverage all the Windows Defender ATP capabilities, see [Threat protection](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows/security/threat-protection/index).