Merge pull request #2916 from MicrosoftDocs/someDOfixes

fixing some errors in the DO content; cleaning up some internal notes

windows/deployment/update/eval-infra-tools.md

@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Keep security baslines current to help ensure that your environment is secure an
 There are a number of Windows policies (set by Group Policy, Intune, or other methods) that affect when Windows updates are installed, deferral, end-user experience, and many other aspects. Check these policies to make sure they are set appropriately.
 
 - **Windows 10 Administrative templates**: Each Windows 10 feature update has a supporting Administrative template (.admx) file. Group Policy tools use Administrative template files to populate policy settings in the user interface. The templates are available in the Download Center, for example, this one for [Windows 10, version 1909](https://www.microsoft.com/download/100591).
-- **Policies for update compliance and end-user experience**: A number of settings affect when a device installs updates, whether and for how long a user can defer an update, restart behavior after installation, and many other aspects of update behavior. It's especially important to look for existing policies that are out of date or could conflict with new ones. {SET COMPLIANCE and other policies}
+- **Policies for update compliance and end-user experience**: A number of settings affect when a device installs updates, whether and for how long a user can defer an update, restart behavior after installation, and many other aspects of update behavior. It's especially important to look for existing policies that are out of date or could conflict with new ones. 
 
 
 ## Define operational readiness criteria

windows/deployment/update/update-policies.md

@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ automatic restart. To take advantage of this feature, ensure **ConfigureDeadline
 ## Device activity policies
 
 Windows typically requires that a device is active and connected to the internet for at least six hours, with at least two
-of continuous activity {HOW DO YOU DEFINE ACTIVITY?}, in order to successfully complete a system update. The device could have other
+of continuous activity, in order to successfully complete a system update. The device could have other
 physical circumstances that prevent successful installation of an update--for example, if a laptop is running low
 on battery power, or the user has shut down the device before active hours end and the device cannot comply
 with the deadline.
@@ -201,4 +201,4 @@ Updates** rather than setting a deferral policy. You can choose a longer period
 - **Pause Quality Updates Start Time**. Set to **Disabled** unless there is a known issue requiring time for a resolution.
 - **Deadline No Auto Reboot**. Default is **Disabled – Set to 0** . We recommend that devices automatically try to restart when an update is received. Windows uses user interactions to dynamically identify the least disruptive time to restart.
 
-There are additional policies are no longer supported or have been superseded. See {LINK TO Policies and settings reference guide – Policies to disable or not configure} for more information.
+There are additional policies are no longer supported or have been superseded. 

windows/deployment/update/waas-delivery-optimization-setup.md

@@ -129,6 +129,8 @@ To do this with MDM, go to **.Vendor/MSFT/Policy/Config/DeliveryOptimization/**
 | ExpireOn | The target expiration date and time for the file. |
 | Pinned | A yes/no value indicating whether an item has been "pinned" in the cache (see `setDeliveryOptmizationStatus`). |
 
+Starting in Windows 10, version 2004, `Get-DeliveryOptimizationStatus` has a new option `-PeerInfo` which returns a real-time list of the connected peers.
+ 
 `Get-DeliveryOptimizationPerfSnap` returns a list of key performance data:
 
 - Number of files downloaded 

windows/deployment/update/waas-delivery-optimization.md

@@ -73,9 +73,6 @@ The following table lists the minimum Windows 10 version that supports Delivery
 
 
 
-<!-- ### Network requirements
-
-{can you share with me what the network requirements are?}-->
 
 
 
@@ -144,7 +141,7 @@ For the payloads (optional):
 **How does Delivery Optimization handle VPNs?**
 Delivery Optimization attempts to identify VPNs by checking the network adapter type and details and will treat the connection as a VPN if the adapter description contains certain keywords, such as "VPN" or "secure."
 
-If the connection is identified as a VPN, Delivery Optimization will not use any peer-to-peer activity. However, you can allow peer-to-peer activity over a VPN by using the {WE SHOULD NAME OR POINT TO THIS POLICY} policy.
+If the connection is identified as a VPN, Delivery Optimization will not use any peer-to-peer activity. However, you can allow peer-to-peer activity over a VPN by using the [Enable Peer Caching while the device connects via VPN](waas-delivery-optimization-reference.md#enable-peer-caching-while-the-device-connects-via-vpn)	policy.
 
 If you have defined a boundary group in Configuration Manager and have for VPN IP ranges, you can set the DownloadMode policy to 0 for that boundary group to ensure that there will be no peer-to-peer activity over the VPN.