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windows/configuration/provisioning-packages/provisioning-apply-package.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ ms.reviewer: gkomatsu
 manager: dansimp
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-# Apply a provisioning package on Windows 10/11
+# Apply a provisioning package
 
 
 **Applies to**
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Provisioning packages can be applied to client devices during the first-run expe
 3. The next screen asks you to select a provisioning source. Select **Removable Media** and select **Next**.
 
     ![Provision this device.](../images/prov.jpg)
-    
+
 4. Select the provisioning package (`.ppkg`) that you want to apply, and select **Next**.
 
     ![Choose a package.](../images/choose-package.png)

windows/configuration/provisioning-packages/provisioning-create-package.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ ms.reviewer: gkomatsu
 manager: dansimp
 ---
 
-# Create a provisioning package for Windows 10/11
+# Create a provisioning package
 
 
 **Applies to**
@@ -29,12 +29,7 @@ You can use Windows Configuration Designer to create a provisioning package (`.p
 
 ## Start a new project
 
-1. Open Windows Configuration Designer:
+1. Open Windows Configuration Designer: From either the Start menu or Start menu search, type **Windows Configuration Designer**, and then select the **Windows Configuration Designer** shortcut.
-   - From either the Start screen or Start menu search, type **Windows Configuration Designer**, and then select the **Windows Configuration Designer** shortcut. 
-
-     or
-
-   - If you installed Windows Configuration Designer from the ADK, navigate to `C:\Program Files (x86)\Windows Kits\10\Assessment and Deployment Kit\Imaging and Configuration Designer\x86` (on an x64 computer) or `C:\Program Files\Windows Kits\10\Assessment and Deployment Kit\Imaging and Configuration Designer\x86\ICD.exe` (on an x86 computer), and then select **ICD.exe**.
 
 2. Select your desired option on the **Start** page, which offers multiple options for creating a provisioning package, as shown in the following image:
 
@@ -77,9 +72,6 @@ You can use Windows Configuration Designer to create a provisioning package (`.p
 
 6. In the **Available customizations** pane, you can now configure settings for the package. 
 
-
-
-
 ## Configure settings
 
 For an advanced provisioning project, Windows Configuration Designer opens the **Available customizations** pane. The example in the following image is based on **All Windows desktop editions** settings.

windows/configuration/provisioning-packages/provisioning-install-icd.md

@@ -12,19 +12,21 @@ ms.reviewer: gkomatsu
 manager: dansimp
 ---
 
-# Install Windows Configuration Designer
+# Install Windows Configuration Designer, and learn about any limitations
 
 
 **Applies to**
 
--   Windows 10
+- Windows 10
--   Windows 11
+- Windows 11
 
-Use the Windows Configuration Designer tool to create provisioning packages to easily configure devices running Windows client. Windows Configuration Designer is primarily designed for use by IT departments for business and educational institutions who need to provision bring-your-own-device (BYOD) and business-supplied devices.
+Use the Windows Configuration Designer tool to create provisioning packages to easily configure devices running Windows client. Windows Configuration Designer is primarily used by IT departments for business and educational institutions who need to provision bring-your-own-device (BYOD) and business-supplied devices.
 
 ## Supported platforms
 
-Windows Configuration Designer can create provisioning packages for Windows client desktop, including Windows IoT Core, as well as Microsoft Surface Hub and Microsoft HoloLens. You can run Windows Configuration Designer on the following operating systems:
+Windows Configuration Designer can create provisioning packages for Windows client desktop, including Windows IoT Core, Microsoft Surface Hub, and Microsoft HoloLens. You can run Windows Configuration Designer on the following operating systems:
+
+**Client OS**:
 
 - Windows 11
 - Windows 10 - x86 and amd64
@@ -32,6 +34,9 @@ Windows Configuration Designer can create provisioning packages for Windows clie
 - Windows 8.1 - x86 and amd64
 - Windows 8 - x86 and amd64
 - Windows 7 - x86 and amd64
+
+**Server OS**:
+
 - Windows Server 2016
 - Windows Server 2012 R2 Update
 - Windows Server 2012 R2
@@ -43,50 +48,34 @@ Windows Configuration Designer can create provisioning packages for Windows clie
 
 ## Install Windows Configuration Designer
 
-On devices running Windows client, you can install [the Windows Configuration Designer app from the Microsoft Store](https://www.microsoft.com/store/apps/9nblggh4tx22). To run Windows Configuration Designer on other operating systems or in languages other than English, install it from the [Windows Assessment and Deployment Kit (ADK) for Windows](https://developer.microsoft.com/windows/hardware/windows-assessment-deployment-kit).
+On devices running Windows client, you can install [the Windows Configuration Designer app](https://www.microsoft.com/store/apps/9nblggh4tx22) from the Microsoft Store.
-
->[!NOTE]
->If you install Windows Configuration Designer from both the ADK and Microsoft Store, the Store app will not open.
->
->The Windows Configuration Designer App from Microsoft Store currently supports only English. For a localized version of the Windows Configuration Designer, install it from the Windows ADK. 
-
-1. Go to [Download the Windows ADK](https://developer.microsoft.com/windows/hardware/windows-assessment-deployment-kit) and select **Get Windows ADK** for the version of Windows client that you want to create provisioning packages for (version 1511, 1607, or 1703).
-
-    >[!NOTE]
-    >The rest of this procedure uses Windows ADK for Windows 10, version 1703 as an example.
-    
-2. Save **adksetup.exe** and then run it.
-
-3. On the **Specify Location** page, select an installation path and then click **Next**.
-    >[!NOTE]
-    >The estimated disk space listed on this page applies to the full Windows ADK. If you only install Windows Configuration Designer, the space requirement is approximately 32 MB.
-4. Make a selection on the **Windows Kits Privacy** page, and then click **Next**.
-
-5. Accept the **License Agreement**, and then click **Next**.
-
-6. On the **Select the features you want to install** page, clear all selections except **Configuration Designer**, and then click **Install**.
-
-    ![Only Configuration Designer selected for installation.](../images/icd-install.png)
 
 ## Current Windows Configuration Designer limitations
 
-- Windows Configuration Designer will not work properly if the Group Policy setting **Policies > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Internet Explorer > Security Zones: Use only machine settings** is enabled. We recommend that you run Windows Configuration Designer on a different device, rather than change the security setting. 
+- Windows Configuration Designer doesn't work properly if the **Policies > Administrative Templates > Windows Components > Internet Explorer > Security Zones: Use only machine settings** Group Policy setting is enabled. Instead of changing the security setting, we recommend you run Windows Configuration Designer on a different device.
 
 - You can only run one instance of Windows Configuration Designer on your computer at a time.
 
-- Be aware that when adding apps and drivers, all files stored in the same folder will be imported and may cause errors during the build process.
+- When adding apps and drivers, all files stored in the same folder are imported, and may cause errors during the build process.
 
-- The Windows Configuration Designer UI does not support multivariant configurations. Instead, you must use the Windows Configuration Designer command-line interface to configure multivariant settings. For more information, see [Create a provisioning package with multivariant settings](provisioning-multivariant.md).
+- The Windows Configuration Designer UI doesn't support multivariant configurations. Instead, you must use the Windows Configuration Designer command-line interface to configure multivariant settings. For more information, see [Create a provisioning package with multivariant settings](provisioning-multivariant.md).
 
-- While you can open multiple projects at the same time within Windows Configuration Designer, you can only build one project at a time.
+- In Windows Configuration Designer, you can only build one project at a time. You can open multiple projects at the same time, but you can only build one at a time.
 
-- In order to enable the simplified authoring jscripts to work on a server SKU running Windows Configuration Designer, you need to explicitly enable **Allow websites to prompt for information using scripted windows**. Do this by opening Internet Explorer and then navigating to **Settings** > **Internet Options** > **Security**  -> **Custom level** > **Allow websites to prompt for information using scripted windows**, and then choose **Enable**. 
+- To enable the simplified authoring jscripts to work on a server SKU running Windows Configuration Designer, you must enable **Allow websites to prompt for information using scripted windows**:
 
-- If you copy a Windows Configuration Designer project from one PC to another PC, make sure that all the associated files for the deployment assets, such as apps and drivers, are copied along with the project to the same path as it was on the original PC. 
+  1. Open Internet Explorer.
+  2. Go to **Settings** > **Internet Options** > **Security** > **Custom level**.
+  3. Select **Allow websites to prompt for information using scripted windows** > **Enable**.
 
-    For example, when you add a driver to a provisioned package, you must copy the .INF file to a local directory on the PC that is running Windows Configuration Designer. If you don't do this, and attempt to use a copied version of this project on a different PC, Windows Configuration Designer might attempt to resolve the path to the files that point to the original PC.
+- If you copy a Windows Configuration Designer project from one PC to another PC, then:
- 
+
-- **Recommended**: Before starting, copy all source files to the PC running Windows Configuration Designer, rather than using external sources like network shares or removable drives. This reduces the risk of interrupting the build process from a temporary network issue or from disconnecting the USB device.
+  - Copy all the associated files for the deployment assets with the project, including apps and drivers.
+  - Copy all the files to the same path as the original PC.
+
+  For example, when you add a driver to a provisioned package, you must copy the `.INF` file to a local directory on the PC that's running Windows Configuration Designer. If you don't copy the `.INF` file, and use a copied version of this project on a different PC, then Windows Configuration Designer might resolve the file paths to the original PC.
+
+- **Recommended**: Before starting, copy all source files to the PC running Windows Configuration Designer. Don't use external sources, like network shares or removable drives. Using local files reduces the risk of interrupting the build process from a network issue, or from disconnecting the USB device.
 
 **Next step**: [How to create a provisioning package](provisioning-create-package.md)
 

windows/configuration/provisioning-packages/provisioning-script-to-install-app.md

@@ -20,9 +20,7 @@ manager: dansimp
 -   Windows 10
 -   Windows 11
 
-This walkthrough describes how to include scripts in a Windows client provisioning package to install Win32 applications. Scripted operations other than installing apps can also be performed, however, some care is needed in order to avoid unintended behavior during script execution (see [Remarks](#remarks) below). 
+This walkthrough describes how to include scripts in a Windows client provisioning package to install Win32 applications. Scripted operations other than installing apps can also be performed. However, some care is needed to avoid unintended behavior during script execution (see [Remarks](#remarks) below).
-
->**Prerequisite**: [Windows Assessment and Deployment Kit (ADK) for Windows](https://developer.microsoft.com/windows/hardware/windows-assessment-deployment-kit)
 
 ## Assemble the application assets
 

windows/configuration/provisioning-packages/provisioning-uninstall-package.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ ms.reviewer: gkomatsu
 manager: dansimp
 ---
 
-# Settings changed when you uninstall a provisioning package on Windows 10/11
+# Settings changed when you uninstall a provisioning package
 
 
 **Applies to**