Improve wording to align with Microsoft writing style

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![Microsoft Docs Web, showing the Edit This Document link.](images/contribute-link.png) ![Microsoft Docs Web, showing the Edit This Document link.](images/contribute-link.png)
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![GitHub Web, showing the Pencil icon.](images/pencil-icon.png) ![GitHub Web, showing the Pencil icon.](images/pencil-icon.png)
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