revised MBAM section

windows/security/information-protection/bitlocker/bitlocker-management-for-enterprises.md

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 The ideal for modern BitLocker management is to eliminate the need for IT admins to set management policies using tools or other mechanisms by having Windows perform tasks that are more practical to automate. This vision leverages modern hardware developments. The growth of TPM 2.0, Secure Boot, and other hardware improvements, for example, has helped to alleviate the support burden on the helpdesk, and we are seeing a consequent decrease in support call volumes, yielding improved user satisfaction. Windows continues to be the focus for new features and improvements for built-in encryption management, such as automatically enabling encryption on devices that support Modern Standby beginning with Windows 8.1. 
 
-Therefore, we recommend that you upgrade your hardware so that your devices comply with Modern Standby or [Hardware Security Test Interface (HSTI)](https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/windows/hardware/mt712332.aspx) specifications to take advantage of their automated features, for example, when using Azure Active Directory (Azure AD). 
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 Though much Windows BitLocker [documentation](bitlocker-overview.md) has been published, customers frequently ask for recommendations and pointers to specific, task-oriented documentation that is both easy to digest and focused on how to deploy and manage BitLocker. This article links to relevant documentation, products, and services to help answer this and other related frequently-asked questions, and also provides BitLocker recommendations for different types of computers.
 
-## Recommendations for moving domain-joined computers to cloud management
+## Recommendations for domain-joined computers and moving to cloud management
 
 Companies that image their own computers using Microsoft System Center 2012 Configuration Manager SP1 (SCCM) or later can use an existing task sequence to [pre-provision BitLocker](https://technet.microsoft.com/library/hh846237.aspx#BKMK_PreProvisionBitLocker) encryption while in Windows Preinstallation Environment (WinPE) and can then [enable protection](https://technet.microsoft.com/library/hh846237.aspx#BKMK_EnableBitLocker). This can help ensure that computers are encrypted from the start, even before users receive them. As part of the imaging process, a company could also decide to use SCCM to pre-set any desired [BitLocker Group Policy](https://technet.microsoft.com/library/ee706521(v=ws.10).aspx).
 
-Microsoft's enterprise solution to manage client computers with BitLocker that are domain joined on-premises has been Microsoft BitLocker Administration and Management (MBAM)], for which [mainstream support ends in July 2019](https://support.microsoft.com/en-us/lifecycle/search?alpha=Microsoft%20BitLocker%20Administration%20and%20Monitoring%202.5%20Service%20Pack%201). Microsoft recommends moving from MBAM to cloud management:
+Microsoft recommends [Microsoft BitLocker Administration and Management (MBAM)](https://docs.microsoft.com/microsoft-desktop-optimization-pack/mbam-v25/) to manage client computers with BitLocker that are domain-joined on-premises. MBAM remains in [mainstream support until July 2019](https://support.microsoft.com/en-us/lifecycle/search?alpha=Microsoft%20BitLocker%20Administration%20and%20Monitoring%202.5%20Service%20Pack%201) and can receive extended support until July 2024. Enterprises that are transitioning to the cloud can follow these steps to proactively move from MBAM to cloud management:
 
 1. Disable MBAM management and leave MBAM as only a database backup for the recovery key.
 2. Join the computers to Azure Active Directory (Azure AD).