From 36c52ec59052902f6d9f572672a26eeb0d3ffeee Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Geoff <34522990+GeoffFromMSFT@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 25 Jan 2019 10:22:53 -0800
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Update hololens-provisioning.md
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devices/hololens/hololens-provisioning.md | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
diff --git a/devices/hololens/hololens-provisioning.md b/devices/hololens/hololens-provisioning.md
index 00a7436e23..21f851e4dd 100644
--- a/devices/hololens/hololens-provisioning.md
+++ b/devices/hololens/hololens-provisioning.md
@@ -72,8 +72,8 @@ Use the Windows Configuration Designer tool to create a provisioning package.
-Browse to and select the enterprise license file to upgrade the HoloLens edition.You can also toggle **Yes** or **No** to hide parts of the first experience.Select a region and timezone in which the device will be used. |  |
- Toggle **On** or **Off** for wireless network connectivity. If you select **On**, enter the SSID, the network type (**Open** or **WPA2-Personal**), and (if **WPA2-Personal**) the password for the wireless network. |  |
+Browse to and select the enterprise license file to upgrade the HoloLens edition.You can also toggle **Yes** or **No** to hide parts of the first experience.To setup the device without the need to connect to a Wi-Fi network, toggle **Skip Wi-Fi setup** to **On**.Select a region and timezone in which the device will be used. |  |
+ In this section, you can pre-enter the details of the Wi-Fi wireless network the device should automatically connect to. To do this, select **On**, enter the SSID, the network type (**Open** or **WPA2-Personal**), and (if **WPA2-Personal**) the password for the wireless network. |  |
 You can enroll the device in Azure Active Directory, or create a local account on the deviceBefore you use a Windows Configuration Designer wizard to configure bulk Azure AD enrollment, [set up Azure AD join in your organization](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/active-directory/active-directory-azureadjoin-setup). The **maximum number of devices per user** setting in your Azure AD tenant determines how many times the bulk token that you get in the wizard can be used. To enroll the device in Azure AD, select that option and enter a friendly name for the bulk token you will get using the wizard. Set an expiration date for the token (maximum is 30 days from the date you get the token). Click **Get bulk token**. In the **Let's get you signed in** window, enter an account that has permissions to join a device to Azure AD, and then the password. Click **Accept** to give Windows Configuration Designer the necessary permissions. To create a local account, select that option and enter a user name and password. **Important:** (For Windows 10, version 1607 only) If you create a local account in the provisioning package, you must change the password using the **Settings** app every 42 days. If the password is not changed during that period, the account might be locked out and unable to sign in. |  |
 To provision the device with a certificate, click **Add a certificate**. Enter a name for the certificate, and then browse to and select the certificate to be used. |  |
 Toggle **Yes** or **No** to enable Developer Mode on the HoloLens. [Learn more about Developer Mode.](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/uwp/get-started/enable-your-device-for-development#developer-mode) |  |
From fd39dcfc86d46ba5f949eb29d52657e431f342a8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jeanie Decker
Date: Fri, 25 Jan 2019 10:33:14 -0800
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] minor copy edit
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devices/hololens/hololens-provisioning.md | 2 +-
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/devices/hololens/hololens-provisioning.md b/devices/hololens/hololens-provisioning.md
index 21f851e4dd..3ef1fa581c 100644
--- a/devices/hololens/hololens-provisioning.md
+++ b/devices/hololens/hololens-provisioning.md
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Use the Windows Configuration Designer tool to create a provisioning package.
Browse to and select the enterprise license file to upgrade the HoloLens edition.You can also toggle **Yes** or **No** to hide parts of the first experience.To setup the device without the need to connect to a Wi-Fi network, toggle **Skip Wi-Fi setup** to **On**.Select a region and timezone in which the device will be used. |  |
- In this section, you can pre-enter the details of the Wi-Fi wireless network the device should automatically connect to. To do this, select **On**, enter the SSID, the network type (**Open** or **WPA2-Personal**), and (if **WPA2-Personal**) the password for the wireless network. |  |
+ In this section, you can enter the details of the Wi-Fi wireless network that the device should connect to automatically. To do this, select **On**, enter the SSID, the network type (**Open** or **WPA2-Personal**), and (if **WPA2-Personal**) the password for the wireless network. |  |
 You can enroll the device in Azure Active Directory, or create a local account on the deviceBefore you use a Windows Configuration Designer wizard to configure bulk Azure AD enrollment, [set up Azure AD join in your organization](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/active-directory/active-directory-azureadjoin-setup). The **maximum number of devices per user** setting in your Azure AD tenant determines how many times the bulk token that you get in the wizard can be used. To enroll the device in Azure AD, select that option and enter a friendly name for the bulk token you will get using the wizard. Set an expiration date for the token (maximum is 30 days from the date you get the token). Click **Get bulk token**. In the **Let's get you signed in** window, enter an account that has permissions to join a device to Azure AD, and then the password. Click **Accept** to give Windows Configuration Designer the necessary permissions. To create a local account, select that option and enter a user name and password. **Important:** (For Windows 10, version 1607 only) If you create a local account in the provisioning package, you must change the password using the **Settings** app every 42 days. If the password is not changed during that period, the account might be locked out and unable to sign in. |  |
 To provision the device with a certificate, click **Add a certificate**. Enter a name for the certificate, and then browse to and select the certificate to be used. |  |
 Toggle **Yes** or **No** to enable Developer Mode on the HoloLens. [Learn more about Developer Mode.](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/uwp/get-started/enable-your-device-for-development#developer-mode) |  |