Merged PR 11185: 9/10 AM Publish

windows/configuration/cortana-at-work/cortana-at-work-voice-commands.md

@@ -30,9 +30,9 @@ To enable voice commands in Cortana
 
     Cortana can perform actions on apps in the foreground (taking focus from Cortana) or in the background (allowing Cortana to keep focus). We recommend that you decide where an action should happen, based on what your voice command is intended to do. For example, if your voice command requires employee input, it’s best for that to happen in the foreground. However, if the app only uses basic commands and doesn’t require interaction, it can happen in the background.
 
-    - **Start Cortana with focus on your app, using specific voice-enabled statements.** [Activate a foreground app with voice commands through Cortana](https://docs.microsoft.com/cortana/voicecommands/launch-a-foreground-app-with-voice-commands-in-cortana).
+    - **Start Cortana with focus on your app, using specific voice-enabled statements.** [Activate a foreground app with voice commands through Cortana](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/cortana/voice-commands/launch-a-foreground-app-with-voice-commands-in-cortana).
 
-    - **Start Cortana removing focus from your app, using specific voice-enabled statements.** [Activate a background app in Cortana using voice commands](https://docs.microsoft.com/cortana/voicecommands/launch-a-background-app-with-voice-commands-in-cortana).
+    - **Start Cortana removing focus from your app, using specific voice-enabled statements.** [Activate a background app in Cortana using voice commands](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/cortana/voice-commands/launch-a-background-app-with-voice-commands-in-cortana).
 
 2.	**Install the VCD file on employees' devices**. You can use System Center Configuration Manager or Microsoft Intune to deploy and install the VCD file on your employees' devices, the same way you deploy and install any other package in your organization.
 

windows/deployment/update/windows-update-sources.md

@@ -15,8 +15,8 @@ ms.date: 04/05/2018
 Windows 10 devices can receive updates from a variety of sources, including Windows Update online, a Windows Server Update Services server, and others. To determine the source of Windows Updates currently being used on a device, follow these steps: 
 
 1.  Start Windows PowerShell as an administrator
-2.  Run  `\$MUSM = New-Object -ComObject   “Microsoft.Update.ServiceManager”`.
+2.  Run  `$MUSM = New-Object -ComObject   “Microsoft.Update.ServiceManager”`.
-3.  Run `\$MUSM.Services`. Check the resulting output for the **Name** and **OffersWindowsUPdates** parameters, which you can intepret according to this table:
+3.  Run `$MUSM.Services`. Check the resulting output for the **Name** and **OffersWindowsUPdates** parameters, which you can intepret according to this table:
 
 | Output          | Interpretation |
 |-----------------------------------------------------|-----------------------------------|

windows/privacy/diagnostic-data-viewer-overview.md

@@ -62,6 +62,8 @@ The Diagnostic Data Viewer provides you with the following features to view and
 
     Selecting an event opens the detailed JSON view, which provides the exact details uploaded to Microsoft. Microsoft uses this info to continually improve the Windows operating system.
     
+     ![View your diagnostic events](images/ddv-event-view.png)
+
 - **Search your diagnostic events.** The **Search** box at the top of the screen lets you search amongst all of the diagnostic event details. The returned search results include any diagnostic event that contains the matching text. 
 
     Selecting an event opens the detailed JSON view, with the matching text highlighted.
@@ -70,12 +72,16 @@ The Diagnostic Data Viewer provides you with the following features to view and
 
     Selecting a check box lets you filter between the diagnostic event categories.
     
+     ![Filter your diagnostic event categories](images/ddv-event-view-filter.png)
+
 - **Help to make your Windows experience better.** Microsoft samples diagnostic data from a small amount of devices to make big improvements to the Windows operating system and ultimately, your experience. If you’re a part of this small device group and you experience issues, Microsoft will collect the associated event diagnostic data, allowing your info to potentially help fix the issue for others.
 
     To signify your contribution, you’ll see this icon (![Icon to review the device-level sampling](images/ddv-device-sample.png)) if your device is part of the sampling group. In addition, if any of your diagnostic data events are sent from your device to Microsoft to help make improvements, you’ll see this icon (![Icon to review the event-level sampling](images/ddv-event-sample.png)). 
 
 - **Provide diagnostic event feedback.** The **Feedback** icon opens the Feedback Hub app, letting you provide feedback about the Diagnostic Data Viewer and the diagnostic events.
 
+ 	![Send event feedback](images/ddv-event-feedback.png)
+
     Selecting a specific event in the Diagnostic Data Viewer automatically fills in the field in the Feedback Hub. You can add your comments to the box labeled, **Give us more detail (optional)**.
 	
     >[!Important]

windows/security/threat-protection/windows-defender-atp/advanced-hunting-windows-defender-advanced-threat-protection.md

@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ Check out the [Advanced Hunting repository](https://github.com/Microsoft/Windows
 
 ## Related topic
 - [Advanced hunting reference](advanced-hunting-reference-windows-defender-advanced-threat-protection.md)
-- [Advanced hunting query language best practices](/advanced-hunting-best-practices-windows-defender-advanced-threat-protection.md)
+- [Advanced hunting query language best practices](advanced-hunting-best-practices-windows-defender-advanced-threat-protection.md)
 
 
 

windows/security/threat-protection/windows-defender-atp/data-storage-privacy-windows-defender-advanced-threat-protection.md

@@ -10,13 +10,12 @@ ms.pagetype: security
 ms.author: macapara
 author: mjcaparas
 ms.localizationpriority: medium
-ms.date: 07/05/2018
+ms.date: 09/07/2018
 ---
 
 # Windows Defender ATP data storage and privacy
 
 **Applies to:**
-
 - Windows Defender Advanced Threat Protection (Windows Defender ATP)
 
 

windows/security/threat-protection/windows-defender-atp/run-detection-test-windows-defender-advanced-threat-protection.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ ms.pagetype: security
 ms.author: macapara
 author: mjcaparas
 ms.localizationpriority: medium
-ms.date: 11/06/2017
+ms.date: 09/07/2018
 ---
 
 #  Run a detection test on a newly onboarded Windows Defender ATP machine 
@@ -26,7 +26,8 @@ ms.date: 11/06/2017
 
 Run the following PowerShell script on a newly onboarded machine to verify that it is properly reporting to the Windows Defender ATP service.
 
-1. Open an elevated command-line prompt on the machine and run the script:
+1. Create a folder:  'C:\test-WDATP-test'.
+2. Open an elevated command-line prompt on the machine and run the script:
 
     a.  Go to **Start** and type **cmd**.
 
@@ -34,7 +35,7 @@ Run the following PowerShell script on a newly onboarded machine to verify that
 
     ![Window Start menu pointing to Run as administrator](images/run-as-admin.png)
 
-2. At the prompt, copy and run the following command:
+3. At the prompt, copy and run the following command:
 
     ```
     powershell.exe -NoExit -ExecutionPolicy Bypass -WindowStyle Hidden (New-Object System.Net.WebClient).DownloadFile('http://127.0.0.1/1.exe', 'C:\test-WDATP-test\invoice.exe');Start-Process 'C:\test-WDATP-test\invoice.exe'

windows/security/threat-protection/windows-defender-atp/troubleshoot-onboarding-windows-defender-advanced-threat-protection.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ ms.pagetype: security
 ms.author: macapara
 author: mjcaparas
 ms.localizationpriority: medium
-ms.date: 04/24/2018
+ms.date: 09/07/2018
 ---
 
 # Troubleshoot Windows Defender Advanced Threat Protection onboarding issues
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ Event ID | Error Type | Resolution steps
 ## Troubleshoot onboarding issues using Microsoft Intune
 You can use Microsoft Intune to check error codes and attempt to troubleshoot the cause of the issue.
 
-If you have configured policies in Intune and they are not propagated on machines, you might need to configure automatic MDM enrollment. For more information, see the [Configure automatic MDM enrollment](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=829597) section.
+If you have configured policies in Intune and they are not propagated on machines, you might need to configure automatic MDM enrollment. 
 
 Use the following tables to understand the possible causes of issues while onboarding: