From 474033d2964f1fc80c8803ebac1167cf18e44d86 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: amirsc3 <42802974+amirsc3@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 May 2020 11:57:24 +0300
Subject: [PATCH 1/7] Update onboard-offline-machines.md
Adding important note regarding offline Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019
---
.../microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md | 5 ++++-
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md b/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
index 0534d30935..1208f1a24d 100644
--- a/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
+++ b/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
@@ -30,7 +30,10 @@ To onboard machines without Internet access, you'll need to take the following g
Windows Server 2016 and earlier or Windows 8.1 and earlier.
> [!NOTE]
-> An OMS gateway server can still be used as proxy for disconnected Windows 10 machines when configured via 'TelemetryProxyServer' registry or GPO.
+> An OMS gateway server cannot be used as proxy for disconnected Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 machines when configured via 'TelemetryProxyServer' registry or GPO.
+For Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 - you can use TelemetryProxyServer, but it must point to a standard proxy device or appliance.
+In addition, Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 in disconnected environments must be able to update Certificate Trust Lists offline via an internal file or web server.
+For more information refer to: https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/previous-versions/windows/it-pro/windows-server-2012-r2-and-2012/dn265983(v=ws.11)#configure-a-file-or-web-server-to-download-the-ctl-files
For more information, see the following articles:
- [Onboard previous versions of Windows](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-downlevel)
From 281eef6ca9b6d87453d77238dac27a7963373fe0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: amirsc3 <42802974+amirsc3@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 May 2020 12:00:25 +0300
Subject: [PATCH 2/7] Update onboard-offline-machines.md
quick additions
---
.../microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md | 9 +++++----
1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md b/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
index 1208f1a24d..d5c811c978 100644
--- a/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
+++ b/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
@@ -30,10 +30,11 @@ To onboard machines without Internet access, you'll need to take the following g
Windows Server 2016 and earlier or Windows 8.1 and earlier.
> [!NOTE]
-> An OMS gateway server cannot be used as proxy for disconnected Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 machines when configured via 'TelemetryProxyServer' registry or GPO.
-For Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 - you can use TelemetryProxyServer, but it must point to a standard proxy device or appliance.
-In addition, Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 in disconnected environments must be able to update Certificate Trust Lists offline via an internal file or web server.
-For more information refer to: https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/previous-versions/windows/it-pro/windows-server-2012-r2-and-2012/dn265983(v=ws.11)#configure-a-file-or-web-server-to-download-the-ctl-files
+> An OMS gateway server cannot be used as proxy for disconnected Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 machines when configured via 'TelemetryProxyServer' registry or GPO.
+For Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 - while you may use TelemetryProxyServer, it must point to a standard proxy device or appliance.
+In addition, Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 in disconnected environments must be able to update Certificate Trust Lists offline via an internal file or web server.
+For more information refer to the following articles:
https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/previous-versions/windows/it-pro/windows-server-2012-r2-and-2012/dn265983(v=ws.11)#configure-a-file-or-web-server-to-download-the-ctl-files
+https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/configure-proxy-internet#configure-the-proxy-server-manually-using-a-registry-based-static-proxy
For more information, see the following articles:
- [Onboard previous versions of Windows](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-downlevel)
From 12416407206fb9771031d24c6fb5f6b42bd06330 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: amirsc3 <42802974+amirsc3@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 May 2020 12:01:28 +0300
Subject: [PATCH 3/7] Update onboard-offline-machines.md
removed
---
.../onboard-offline-machines.md | 12 ++++++------
1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md b/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
index d5c811c978..c51772e358 100644
--- a/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
+++ b/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
@@ -30,13 +30,13 @@ To onboard machines without Internet access, you'll need to take the following g
Windows Server 2016 and earlier or Windows 8.1 and earlier.
> [!NOTE]
-> An OMS gateway server cannot be used as proxy for disconnected Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 machines when configured via 'TelemetryProxyServer' registry or GPO.
-For Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 - while you may use TelemetryProxyServer, it must point to a standard proxy device or appliance.
-In addition, Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 in disconnected environments must be able to update Certificate Trust Lists offline via an internal file or web server.
-For more information refer to the following articles:
https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/previous-versions/windows/it-pro/windows-server-2012-r2-and-2012/dn265983(v=ws.11)#configure-a-file-or-web-server-to-download-the-ctl-files
+> An OMS gateway server cannot be used as proxy for disconnected Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 machines when configured via 'TelemetryProxyServer' registry or GPO.
+For Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 - while you may use TelemetryProxyServer, it must point to a standard proxy device or appliance.
+>In addition, Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 in disconnected environments must be able to update Certificate Trust Lists offline via an internal file or web server.
+>For more information refer to the following articles:
+> https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/previous-versions/windows/it-pro/windows-server-2012-r2-and-2012/dn265983(v=ws.11)#configure-a-file-or-web-server-to-download-the-ctl-files
https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/configure-proxy-internet#configure-the-proxy-server-manually-using-a-registry-based-static-proxy
-
-For more information, see the following articles:
+>For more information, see the following articles:
- [Onboard previous versions of Windows](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-downlevel)
- [Onboard servers to the Microsoft Defender ATP service](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/configure-server-endpoints#windows-server-2008-r2-sp1--windows-server-2012-r2-and-windows-server-2016)
- [Configure machine proxy and Internet connectivity settings](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/configure-proxy-internet#configure-the-proxy-server-manually-using-a-registry-based-static-proxy)
From 6dde94ce87736a922876f59df818a0ae4680ac64 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: amirsc3 <42802974+amirsc3@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 May 2020 12:03:24 +0300
Subject: [PATCH 4/7] Update onboard-offline-machines.md
more changed to text
---
.../microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
diff --git a/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md b/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
index c51772e358..f0a198103d 100644
--- a/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
+++ b/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
@@ -33,9 +33,9 @@ Windows Server 2016 and earlier or Windows 8.1 and earlier.
> An OMS gateway server cannot be used as proxy for disconnected Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 machines when configured via 'TelemetryProxyServer' registry or GPO.
For Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 - while you may use TelemetryProxyServer, it must point to a standard proxy device or appliance.
>In addition, Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 in disconnected environments must be able to update Certificate Trust Lists offline via an internal file or web server.
->For more information refer to the following articles:
-> https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/previous-versions/windows/it-pro/windows-server-2012-r2-and-2012/dn265983(v=ws.11)#configure-a-file-or-web-server-to-download-the-ctl-files
+> For more information about updating CTLs offline or the TelemetryProxyServer option, refer to the following articles:https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/previous-versions/windows/it-pro/windows-server-2012-r2-and-2012/dn265983(v=ws.11)#configure-a-file-or-web-server-to-download-the-ctl-files
https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/configure-proxy-internet#configure-the-proxy-server-manually-using-a-registry-based-static-proxy
+
>For more information, see the following articles:
- [Onboard previous versions of Windows](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-downlevel)
- [Onboard servers to the Microsoft Defender ATP service](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/configure-server-endpoints#windows-server-2008-r2-sp1--windows-server-2012-r2-and-windows-server-2016)
From 55a4556cc7969652c0f92706a15a6a5bfc848c36 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: amirsc3 <42802974+amirsc3@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 May 2020 12:37:15 +0300
Subject: [PATCH 5/7] Update onboard-offline-machines.md
trying to better align text
---
.../onboard-offline-machines.md | 11 +++++------
1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md b/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
index f0a198103d..7f64aa66e5 100644
--- a/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
+++ b/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
@@ -30,13 +30,12 @@ To onboard machines without Internet access, you'll need to take the following g
Windows Server 2016 and earlier or Windows 8.1 and earlier.
> [!NOTE]
-> An OMS gateway server cannot be used as proxy for disconnected Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 machines when configured via 'TelemetryProxyServer' registry or GPO.
-For Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 - while you may use TelemetryProxyServer, it must point to a standard proxy device or appliance.
->In addition, Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 in disconnected environments must be able to update Certificate Trust Lists offline via an internal file or web server.
-> For more information about updating CTLs offline or the TelemetryProxyServer option, refer to the following articles:https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/previous-versions/windows/it-pro/windows-server-2012-r2-and-2012/dn265983(v=ws.11)#configure-a-file-or-web-server-to-download-the-ctl-files
-https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/configure-proxy-internet#configure-the-proxy-server-manually-using-a-registry-based-static-proxy
+> - An OMS gateway server cannot be used as proxy for disconnected Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 machines when configured via 'TelemetryProxyServer' registry or GPO.
+- For Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 - while you may use TelemetryProxyServer, it must point to a standard proxy device or appliance.
+- In addition, Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 in disconnected environments must be able to update Certificate Trust Lists offline via an internal file or web server.
+> - For more information about updating CTLs offline, refer to the following articles:https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/previous-versions/windows/it-pro/windows-server-2012-r2-and-2012/dn265983(v=ws.11)#configure-a-file-or-web-server-to-download-the-ctl-files
->For more information, see the following articles:
+>For more information about onboarding methods, see the following articles:
- [Onboard previous versions of Windows](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-downlevel)
- [Onboard servers to the Microsoft Defender ATP service](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/configure-server-endpoints#windows-server-2008-r2-sp1--windows-server-2012-r2-and-windows-server-2016)
- [Configure machine proxy and Internet connectivity settings](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/configure-proxy-internet#configure-the-proxy-server-manually-using-a-registry-based-static-proxy)
From 6f002e5135e78b0e9babb15e2d73ae0189929763 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: amirsc3 <42802974+amirsc3@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 May 2020 12:37:55 +0300
Subject: [PATCH 6/7] Update onboard-offline-machines.md
missing '-'
---
.../microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
diff --git a/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md b/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
index 7f64aa66e5..0b252c4fda 100644
--- a/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
+++ b/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ Windows Server 2016 and earlier or Windows 8.1 and earlier.
> [!NOTE]
> - An OMS gateway server cannot be used as proxy for disconnected Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 machines when configured via 'TelemetryProxyServer' registry or GPO.
-- For Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 - while you may use TelemetryProxyServer, it must point to a standard proxy device or appliance.
-- In addition, Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 in disconnected environments must be able to update Certificate Trust Lists offline via an internal file or web server.
+> - For Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 - while you may use TelemetryProxyServer, it must point to a standard proxy device or appliance.
+> - In addition, Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 in disconnected environments must be able to update Certificate Trust Lists offline via an internal file or web server.
> - For more information about updating CTLs offline, refer to the following articles:https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/previous-versions/windows/it-pro/windows-server-2012-r2-and-2012/dn265983(v=ws.11)#configure-a-file-or-web-server-to-download-the-ctl-files
>For more information about onboarding methods, see the following articles:
From 6afc0e3a6331afc145c4f93cc1d5a9644de004f1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: amirsc3 <42802974+amirsc3@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 May 2020 12:39:51 +0300
Subject: [PATCH 7/7] Update onboard-offline-machines.md
typo
---
.../microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md | 2 +-
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md b/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
index 0b252c4fda..7578b1bddf 100644
--- a/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
+++ b/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-offline-machines.md
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ Windows Server 2016 and earlier or Windows 8.1 and earlier.
> - An OMS gateway server cannot be used as proxy for disconnected Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 machines when configured via 'TelemetryProxyServer' registry or GPO.
> - For Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 - while you may use TelemetryProxyServer, it must point to a standard proxy device or appliance.
> - In addition, Windows 10 or Windows Server 2019 in disconnected environments must be able to update Certificate Trust Lists offline via an internal file or web server.
-> - For more information about updating CTLs offline, refer to the following articles:https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/previous-versions/windows/it-pro/windows-server-2012-r2-and-2012/dn265983(v=ws.11)#configure-a-file-or-web-server-to-download-the-ctl-files
+> - For more information about updating CTLs offline, refer to the following article: https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/previous-versions/windows/it-pro/windows-server-2012-r2-and-2012/dn265983(v=ws.11)#configure-a-file-or-web-server-to-download-the-ctl-files
>For more information about onboarding methods, see the following articles:
- [Onboard previous versions of Windows](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/onboard-downlevel)