Miscellaneous fixes (e.g. typos)

windows/privacy/basic-level-windows-diagnostic-events-and-fields-1703.md

@@ -1212,7 +1212,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **RunAppraiser**  Indicates if Appraiser was set to run at all. If this if false, it is understood that data events will not be received from this device.
 - **RunDate**  The date that the diagnostic data run was stated, expressed as a filetime.
 - **RunGeneralTel**  Indicates if the generaltel.dll component was run. Generaltel collects additional diagnostic data on an infrequent schedule and only from machines at diagnostic data levels higher than Basic.
-- **RunOnline**  Indicates if appraiser was able to connect to Windows Update and theefore is making decisions using up-to-date driver coverage information.
+- **RunOnline**  Indicates if appraiser was able to connect to Windows Update and therefore is making decisions using up-to-date driver coverage information.
 - **RunResult**  The hresult of the Appraiser diagnostic data run.
 - **SendingUtc**  Indicates whether the Appraiser client is sending events during the current diagnostic data run.
 - **StoreHandleIsNotNull**  Obsolete, always set to false
@@ -1286,7 +1286,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **InternalBatteryCapacityCurrent**  Represents the battery's current fully charged capacity in mWh (or relative). Compare this value to DesignedCapacity  to estimate the battery's wear.
 - **InternalBatteryCapacityDesign**  Represents the theoretical capacity of the battery when new, in mWh.
 - **InternalBatteryNumberOfCharges**  Provides the number of battery charges. This is used when creating new products and validating that existing products meets targeted functionality performance.
-- **IsAlwaysOnAlwaysConnectedCapable**  Represents whether the battery enables the device to be AlwaysOnAlwaysConnected . Boolean value.
+- **IsAlwaysOnAlwaysConnectedCapable**  Represents whether the battery enables the device to be AlwaysOnAlwaysConnected. Boolean value.
 
 
 ### Census.Enterprise
@@ -1301,16 +1301,16 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **CommercialId**  Represents the GUID for the commercial entity which the device is a member of.  Will be used to reflect insights back to customers.
 - **ContainerType**  The type of container, such as process or virtual machine hosted.
 - **HashedDomain**  The hashed representation of the user domain used for login.
-- **IsCloudDomainJoined**  Is this device joined to an Azure Active Directory (AAD) tenant? true/false
+- **IsCloudDomainJoined**  Is this device joined to an Azure Active Directory (Azure AD) tenant? true/false
 - **IsDERequirementMet**  Represents if the device can do device encryption.
 - **IsDeviceProtected**  Represents if Device protected by BitLocker/Device Encryption
 - **IsDomainJoined**  Indicates whether a machine is joined to a domain.
 - **IsEDPEnabled**  Represents if Enterprise data protected on the device.
 - **IsMDMEnrolled**  Whether the device has been MDM Enrolled or not.
 - **MPNId**  Returns the Partner ID/MPN ID from Regkey. HKEY_LOCAL_MACHINE\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows\DeployID
-- **SCCMClientId**  This ID correlate systems that send data to Compat Analytics (OMS) and other OMS based systems with systems in an Enterprise System Center Configuration Manager (SCCM) environment.
-- **ServerFeatures**  Represents the features installed on a Windows   Server. This can be used by developers and administrators who need to automate the process of determining the features installed on a set of server computers.
-- **SystemCenterID**  The SCCM ID is an anonymized one-way hash of the Active Directory Organization identifier.
+- **SCCMClientId**  This ID correlate systems that send data to Compat Analytics (OMS) and other OMS based systems with systems in an enterprise Configuration Manager environment.
+- **ServerFeatures**  Represents the features installed on a Windows Server. This can be used by developers and administrators who need to automate the process of determining the features installed on a set of server computers.
+- **SystemCenterID**  The Configuration Manager ID is an anonymized one-way hash of the Active Directory Organization identifier.
 
 
 ### Census.Firmware
@@ -1431,7 +1431,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **OA3xOriginalProductKey**  Retrieves the License key stamped by the OEM to the machine.
 - **OSEdition**  Retrieves the version of the current OS.
 - **OSInstallDateTime**  Retrieves the date the OS was installed using ISO 8601 (Date part) == yyyy-mm-dd
-- **OSInstallType**  Retrieves a numeric description of what install was used on the device i.e. clean, upgrade, refresh, reset, etc
+- **OSInstallType**  Retrieves a numeric description of what install was used on the device i.e. clean, upgrade, refresh, reset, etc.
 - **OSOOBEDateTime**  Retrieves Out of Box Experience (OOBE) Date in Coordinated Universal Time (UTC).
 - **OSSKU**  Retrieves the Friendly Name of OS Edition.
 - **OSSubscriptionStatus**  Represents the existing status for enterprise subscription feature for PRO machines.
@@ -1485,7 +1485,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **HolographicSpeechInputDisabledRemote**  Indicates if a remote policy has disabled speech functionalities for the HMD devices.
 - **KWSEnabled**  Cortana setting that represents if a user has enabled the "Hey Cortana" keyword spotter (KWS).
 - **MDMAllowInputPersonalization**  Indicates if an MDM policy has enabled speech functionalities.
-- **RemotelyManaged**  Indicates if the device is being controlled by a remote admininistrator (MDM or Group Policy) in the context of speech functionalities.
+- **RemotelyManaged**  Indicates if the device is being controlled by a remote administrator (MDM or Group Policy) in the context of speech functionalities.
 - **SpeakerIdEnabled**  Cortana setting that represents if keyword detection has been trained to try to respond to a single user's voice.
 - **SpeechServicesEnabled**  Windows setting that represents whether a user is opted-in for speech services on the device.
 
@@ -1578,9 +1578,9 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **UpdateServiceURLConfigured**  Retrieves if the device is managed by Windows Server Update Services (WSUS).
 - **WUDeferUpdatePeriod**  Retrieves if deferral is set for Updates.
 - **WUDeferUpgradePeriod**  Retrieves if deferral is set for Upgrades.
-- **WUDODownloadMode**  Retrieves whether DO is turned on and how to acquire/distribute updates Delivery Optimization (DO) allows users to deploy previously downloaded WU updates to other devices on the same network.
+- **WUDODownloadMode**  Retrieves whether DO is turned on and how to acquire/distribute updates Delivery Optimization (DO) allows users to deploy previously downloaded Windows Update (WU) updates to other devices on the same network.
 - **WUMachineId**  Retrieves the Windows Update (WU) Machine Identifier.
-- **WUPauseState**  Retrieves WU setting to determine if updates are paused.
+- **WUPauseState**  Retrieves Windows Update setting to determine if updates are paused.
 - **WUServer**  Retrieves the HTTP(S) URL of the WSUS server that is used by Automatic Updates and API callers (by default).
 
 
@@ -1817,7 +1817,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 
 - **creativeId**  A serialized string containing the ID of the offer being rendered, the ID of the current rotation period, the ID of the surface/ring/market combination, the offer index in the current branch, the ID of the batch, the rotation period length, and the expiration timestamp.
 - **eventToken**  In there are multiple item offers, such as Start tiles, this indicates which tile the event corresponds to.
-- **eventType**  A code that indicates the type of creative event, such a impression, click, positive feedback, negative feedback, etc..
+- **eventType**  A code that indicates the type of creative event, such a impression, click, positive feedback, negative feedback, etc.
 - **placementId**  Name of surface, such as LockScreen or Start.
 
 
@@ -2130,7 +2130,7 @@ This event sends data about hangs for both native and managed applications, to h
 The following fields are available:
 
 - **AppName**  The name of the app that has hung.
-- **AppSessionGuid**  GUID made up of process id used as a correlation vector for process instances in the telemetry backend.
+- **AppSessionGuid**  GUID made up of process ID used as a correlation vector for process instances in the telemetry backend.
 - **AppVersion**  The version of the app that has hung.
 - **PackageFullName**  Store application identity.
 - **PackageRelativeAppId**  Store application identity.
@@ -2145,7 +2145,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **WaitingOnAppName**  If this is a cross process hang waiting for an application, this has the name of the application.
 - **WaitingOnAppVersion**  If this is a cross process hang, this has the version of the application for which it is waiting.
 - **WaitingOnPackageFullName**  If this is a cross process hang waiting for a package, this has the full name of the package for which it is waiting.
-- **WaitingOnPackageRelativeAppId**  If this is a cross process hang waiting for a package, this has the relative application id of the package.
+- **WaitingOnPackageRelativeAppId**  If this is a cross process hang waiting for a package, this has the relative application ID of the package.
 
 
 ## Inventory events
@@ -2818,8 +2818,8 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **BatteryCapacity**  Maximum battery capacity in mWh
 - **BatteryCharge**  Current battery charge as a percentage of total capacity
 - **BatteryDischarging**  Flag indicating whether the battery is discharging or charging
-- **BootId**  Monotonically increasing boot id, reset on upgrades.
-- **BootTimeUTC**  Boot time in UTC  file time.
+- **BootId**  Monotonically increasing boot ID, reset on upgrades.
+- **BootTimeUTC**  Boot time in UTC file time.
 - **EventSequence**  Monotonically increasing event number for OsStateChange events logged during this boot.
 - **LastStateTransition**  The previous state transition on the device.
 - **LastStateTransitionSub**  The previous state subtransition on the device.
@@ -3113,7 +3113,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **RemediationNoisyHammerUserLoggedInAdmin**  TRUE if there is the user currently logged in is an Admin.
 - **RemediationShellDeviceManaged**  TRUE if the device is WSUS managed or Windows Updated disabled.
 - **RemediationShellDeviceNewOS**  TRUE if the device has a recently installed OS.
-- **RemediationShellDeviceSccm**  TRUE if the device is managed by SCCM (Microsoft System Center Configuration Manager).
+- **RemediationShellDeviceSccm**  TRUE if the device is managed by Configuration Manager.
 - **RemediationShellDeviceZeroExhaust**  TRUE if the device has opted out of Windows Updates completely.
 - **RemediationTargetMachine**  Indicates whether the device is a target of the specified fix.
 - **RemediationTaskHealthAutochkProxy**  True/False based on the health of the AutochkProxy task.
@@ -3211,7 +3211,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **RemediationWindowsTotalSystemDiskSize**  The total storage capacity of the System Disk Drive, measured in Megabytes.
 - **Result**  The HRESULT for Detection or Perform Action phases of the plug-in.
 - **RunResult**  The HRESULT for Detection or Perform Action phases of the plug-in.
-- **ServiceHealthPlugin**  The nae of the Service Health plug-in.
+- **ServiceHealthPlugin**  The name of the Service Health plug-in.
 - **StartComponentCleanupTask**  TRUE if the Component Cleanup task started successfully.
 - **TotalSizeofOrphanedInstallerFilesInMegabytes**  The size of any orphaned Windows Installer files, measured in Megabytes.
 - **TotalSizeofStoreCacheAfterCleanupInMegabytes**  The size of the Microsoft Store cache after cleanup, measured in Megabytes.
@@ -3855,7 +3855,7 @@ This event sends basic metadata about the SetupPlatform update installation proc
 
 The following fields are available:
 
-- **ActivityId**  Provides a unique Id to correlate events that occur between a activity start event, and a stop event
+- **ActivityId**  Provides a unique ID to correlate events that occur between a activity start event, and a stop event
 - **ActivityName**  Provides a friendly name of the package type that belongs to the ActivityId (Setup, LanguagePack, GDR, Driver, etc.)
 - **FieldName**  Retrieves the event name/data point. Examples: InstallStartTime, InstallEndtime, OverallResult etc.
 - **GroupName**  Retrieves the groupname the event belongs to. Example: Install Information, DU Information, Disk Space Information etc.
@@ -3897,7 +3897,7 @@ Activity for deletion of a user account for devices set up for Shared PC mode as
 
 The following fields are available:
 
-- **accountType**  The type of account that was deleted. Example: AD, AAD, or Local
+- **accountType**  The type of account that was deleted. Example: AD, Azure AD, or Local
 - **userSid**  The security identifier of the account.
 - **wilActivity**  Windows Error Reporting data collected when there is a failure in deleting a user account with the Transient Account Manager. See [wilActivity](#wilactivity).
 
@@ -4087,7 +4087,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **EventInstanceID**  A globally unique identifier for event instance.
 - **EventScenario**  State of call
 - **EventType**  Possible values are "Child", "Bundle", or "Driver".
-- **FlightId**  The specific id of the flight the device is getting
+- **FlightId**  The specific ID of the flight the device is getting
 - **HandlerType**  Indicates the kind of content (app, driver, windows patch, etc.)
 - **RevisionNumber**  Unique revision number of Update
 - **ServerId**  Identifier for the service to which the software distribution client is connecting, such as Windows Update and Microsoft Store.
@@ -4139,7 +4139,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **FeatureUpdatePause**  Indicates whether feature OS updates are paused on the device.
 - **FlightBranch**  The branch that a device is on if participating in flighting (pre-release builds).
 - **FlightBuildNumber**  If this download was for a flight (pre-release build), this indicates the build number of that flight.
-- **FlightId**  The specific id of the flight (pre-release build) the device is getting.
+- **FlightId**  The specific ID of the flight (pre-release build) the device is getting.
 - **FlightRing**  The ring (speed of getting builds) that a device is on if participating in flighting (pre-release builds).
 - **HandlerType**  Indicates what kind of content is being downloaded (app, driver, windows patch, etc.).
 - **HardwareId**  If this download was for a driver targeted to a particular device model, this ID indicates the model of the device.
@@ -4191,7 +4191,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **CallerApplicationName**  The name provided by the caller who initiated API calls into the software distribution client
 - **ClientVersion**  The version number of the software distribution client
 - **EventScenario**  Indicates the purpose of sending this event - whether because the software distribution just started checking for content, or whether it was cancelled, succeeded, or failed
-- **EventType**  Possible values are "Child", "Bundle", "Relase" or "Driver"
+- **EventType**  Possible values are "Child", "Bundle", "Release" or "Driver"
 - **ExtendedStatusCode**  Secondary error code for certain scenarios where StatusCode wasn't specific enough
 - **FileId**  A hash that uniquely identifies a file
 - **FileName**  Name of the downloaded file
@@ -4220,7 +4220,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **IsNetworkMetered**  Indicates whether Windows considered the current network to be ?metered"
 - **MOAppDownloadLimit**  Mobile operator cap on size of application downloads, if any
 - **MOUpdateDownloadLimit**  Mobile operator cap on size of operating system update downloads, if any
-- **PowerState**  Indicates the power state of the device at the time of heartbeart (DC, AC, Battery Saver, or Connected Standby)
+- **PowerState**  Indicates the power state of the device at the time of heartbeat (DC, AC, Battery Saver, or Connected Standby)
 - **RelatedCV**  The previous correlation vector that was used by the client, before swapping with a new one
 - **ResumeCount**  Number of times this active download has resumed from a suspended state
 - **ServiceID**  Identifier for the service to which the software distribution client is connecting (Windows Update, Microsoft Store, etc)
@@ -4254,7 +4254,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **DeviceModel**  What is the device model.
 - **DeviceOEM**  What OEM does this device belong to.
 - **DownloadPriority**  The priority of the download activity.
-- **DownloadScenarioId**  A unique ID for a given download used to tie together WU and DO events.
+- **DownloadScenarioId**  A unique ID for a given download used to tie together Windows Update and DO events.
 - **DriverPingBack**  Contains information about the previous driver and system state.
 - **Edition**  Indicates the edition of Windows being used.
 - **EventInstanceID**  A globally unique identifier for event instance.
@@ -4385,7 +4385,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 - **DeviceIsMdmManaged**  This device is MDM managed.
 - **IsNetworkAvailable**  If the device network is not available.
 - **IsNetworkMetered**  If network is metered.
-- **IsSccmManaged**  This device is SCCM managed.
+- **IsSccmManaged**  This device is managed by Configuration Manager.
 - **NewlyInstalledOs**  OS is newly installed quiet period.
 - **PausedByPolicy**  Updates are paused by policy.
 - **RecoveredFromRS3**  Previously recovered from RS3.
@@ -5008,7 +5008,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 
 ### Microsoft.Windows.WERVertical.OSCrash
 
-This event sends binary data from the collected dump file wheneveer a bug check occurs, to help keep Windows up to date. The is the OneCore version of this event.
+This event sends binary data from the collected dump file whenever a bug check occurs, to help keep Windows up to date. The is the OneCore version of this event.
 
 The following fields are available:
 
@@ -5464,7 +5464,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 
 - **CatalogId**  The Store Catalog ID for the product being installed.
 - **ProductId**  The Store Product ID for the product being installed.
-- **SkuId**  Specfic edition of the app being updated.
+- **SkuId**  Specific edition of the app being updated.
 
 
 ### Microsoft.Windows.StoreAgent.Telemetry.UpdateAppOperationRequest
@@ -5911,7 +5911,7 @@ The following fields are available:
 
 - **batteryLevel**  Current battery capacity in mWh or percentage left.
 - **deferReason**  Reason for install not completing.
-- **errorCode**  The error code reppresented by a hexadecimal value.
+- **errorCode**  The error code represented by a hexadecimal value.
 - **eventScenario**  End-to-end update session ID.
 - **flightID**  The ID of the Windows Insider build the device is getting.
 - **flightUpdate**  Indicates whether the update is a Windows Insider build.