diff --git a/windows/application-management/enterprise-background-activity-controls.md b/windows/application-management/enterprise-background-activity-controls.md
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@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ To provide the best experience for consumers, Windows provides controls that giv
 
 By default, resource limits are imposed on applications. Foreground apps are given the most memory and execution time; background apps get less. Users are thus protected from poor foreground app performance and heavy battery drain.
 
-Enterprise users want the same ability to enable or limit background activity. In Windows 10, version 1703 (also known as the Creators Update), enterprises can now configure settings via policy and provisioning that control background activity.
+Enterprise users want the same ability to enable or limit background activity. Starting with Windows 10 version 1703, enterprises can now configure settings via policy and provisioning that control background activity.
 
 ## Background activity controls
 
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ Here is the set of available controls for mobile devices: 
 
 ![Battery usage by app on mobile.](images/battery-usage-by-app-mobile.png)
 
-Although the user interface differs across editions of the operating system, the policy and developer interface is consistent across Windows 10. For more information about these controls, see [Optimize background activity](/windows/uwp/debug-test-perf/optimize-background-activity).
+Although the user interface differs across editions of the operating system, the policy and developer interface is consistent across Windows clients. For more information about these controls, see [Optimize background activity](/windows/uwp/debug-test-perf/optimize-background-activity).
 
 ## Enterprise background activity controls 
 
@@ -62,4 +62,4 @@ The Universal Windows Platform ensures that consumers will have great battery li
 
 - [Run in the background indefinitely](/windows/uwp/launch-resume/run-in-the-background-indefinetly)
 - [Policy CSP](/windows/client-management/mdm/policy-configuration-service-provider#privacy-letappsruninbackground)
-[Optimize background activity](/windows/uwp/debug-test-perf/optimize-background-activity)
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+[Optimize background activity](/windows/uwp/debug-test-perf/optimize-background-activity)