From 2502299f9f4a68aef0b1604915a915bd1855dc0d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: jaimeo Date: Mon, 8 Oct 2018 11:10:20 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] adjusted language in login.live.com endpoint description for style, voice, and tone --- windows/deployment/update/windows-analytics-get-started.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/windows/deployment/update/windows-analytics-get-started.md b/windows/deployment/update/windows-analytics-get-started.md index c7518d3e77..30f586c3f1 100644 --- a/windows/deployment/update/windows-analytics-get-started.md +++ b/windows/deployment/update/windows-analytics-get-started.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ ms.sitesec: library ms.pagetype: deploy author: jaimeo ms.author: jaimeo -ms.date: 10/01/2018 +ms.date: 10/08/2018 ms.localizationpriority: medium --- @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ To enable data sharing, configure your proxy server to whitelist the following e | `http://adl.windows.com` | Allows the compatibility update to receive the latest compatibility data from Microsoft. | | `https://watson.telemetry.microsoft.com` | Windows Error Reporting (WER); required for Device Health and Update Compliance AV reports. Not used by Upgrade Readiness. | | `https://oca.telemetry.microsoft.com` | Online Crash Analysis; required for Device Health and Update Compliance AV reports. Not used by Upgrade Readiness. | -| `https://login.live.com` | This end-point is required by Device Health to ensure data integrity and provides a more reliable device identity for all Windows Analtyics solutions on Windows 10. Those who wish to disable end-user MSA access should do so by applying [policy](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/security/identity-protection/access-control/microsoft-accounts#block-all-consumer-microsoft-account-user-authentication) rather than blocking this end-point. | +| `https://login.live.com` | This endpoint is required by Device Health to ensure data integrity and provides a more reliable device identity for all of the Windows Analytics solutions on Windows 10. If you want to disable end-user managed service account (MSA) access, you should apply the appropriate [policy](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/security/identity-protection/access-control/microsoft-accounts#block-all-consumer-microsoft-account-user-authentication) instead of blocking this endpoint. | | `https://www.msftncsi.com` | Windows Error Reporting (WER); required for Device Health to check connectivity. | | `https://www.msftconnecttest.com` | Windows Error Reporting (WER); required for Device Health to check connectivity. | From 29daddd211bf7619f1d2a84b04e2aef85d3557ba Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dani Halfin Date: Thu, 11 Oct 2018 21:04:20 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Merged PR 12048: ToC changes for certifications --- windows/security/threat-protection/TOC.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/windows/security/threat-protection/TOC.md b/windows/security/threat-protection/TOC.md index 391cca39d8..7b94429cea 100644 --- a/windows/security/threat-protection/TOC.md +++ b/windows/security/threat-protection/TOC.md @@ -404,10 +404,10 @@ #### [Software developer FAQ](intelligence/developer-faq.md) #### [Software developer resources](intelligence/developer-resources.md) -## Certifications +## Windows Certifications -### [FIPS 140 Validation](fips-140-validation.md) -### [Windows Platform Common Criteria Certification](windows-platform-common-criteria.md) +### [FIPS 140 Validations](fips-140-validation.md) +### [Common Criteria Certifications](windows-platform-common-criteria.md) ## More Windows 10 security