From 8af7b32e0e5e97acf039f7b7910037d9b47fc76d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Meghan Stewart <33289333+mestew@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 24 Jan 2023 10:40:17 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] edits

---
 .../update/deployment-service-expedited-updates.md        | 2 +-
 .../update/includes/wufb-deployment-find-device-name.md   | 8 +++++---
 .../update/includes/wufb-deployment-graph-explorer.md     | 4 ++--
 3 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/windows/deployment/update/deployment-service-expedited-updates.md b/windows/deployment/update/deployment-service-expedited-updates.md
index 00ab2aa130..bce65e4707 100644
--- a/windows/deployment/update/deployment-service-expedited-updates.md
+++ b/windows/deployment/update/deployment-service-expedited-updates.md
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ In this tutorial, you will:
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-? This requires an extra license at the moment correct? Of does the client have to be listed as intune managed ate the moment?
+? This requires an extra license at the moment correct? Of does the client have to be listed as intune managed at the moment?
 
 ## Open Graph Explorer
 
diff --git a/windows/deployment/update/includes/wufb-deployment-find-device-name.md b/windows/deployment/update/includes/wufb-deployment-find-device-name.md
index 461af6da9d..3dcb2f89cd 100644
--- a/windows/deployment/update/includes/wufb-deployment-find-device-name.md
+++ b/windows/deployment/update/includes/wufb-deployment-find-device-name.md
@@ -18,18 +18,20 @@ Displays the AzureAD ID and name of all devices:</br>
 Displays the AzureAD ID for a device name that starts with `Test`:</br>
  `GET https://graph.microsoft.com/v1.0/devices?$filter=startswith(displayName, 'Test')&$select=deviceid,displayName`
 
+
+
 ### Add a request header
 
 For the next requests, set the **ConsistencyLevel** header to `eventual`. For more information about advanced query parameters, see [Advanced query capabilities on Azure AD directory objects](/graph/aad-advanced-queries).
 
 1. In Graph Explorer, select the **Request headers** tab.
-1. For **Key** type in `ConsistencyLevel` then type `eventual` for **Value**. 
+1. For **Key** type in `ConsistencyLevel` and for **Value**, type `eventual`. 
 1. Select the **Add** button. When you're finished, remove the request header by selecting the trash can icon.
 
     :::image type="content" source="../media/7512398-deployment-service-graph-modify-header.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the request headers tab in Graph Explorer":::
 
-Displays the name and operating system version for the device that has the AzureAD ID of `44bb2fa1-5bfe-44c7-9221-9c8ed64e1076`:</br>
- `GET https://graph.microsoft.com/v1.0/devices?$search="deviceid:44bb2fa1-5bfe-44c7-9221-9c8ed64e1076"?$select=displayName,operatingSystemVersion`
+Displays the name and operating system version for the device that has the AzureAD ID of `01234567-89ab-cdef-0123-456789abcdef`:</br>
+ `GET https://graph.microsoft.com/v1.0/devices?$search="deviceid:01234567-89ab-cdef-0123-456789abcdef"?$select=displayName,operatingSystemVersion`
 
 Find devices that don't have virtual machine listed as the model and that have a manufacturer listed: </br>
 `GET https://graph.microsoft.com/v1.0/devices?$filter=model ne 'virtual machine' and NOT(manufacturer eq null)&$count=true&$select=deviceid,displayName,operatingSystemVersion`
diff --git a/windows/deployment/update/includes/wufb-deployment-graph-explorer.md b/windows/deployment/update/includes/wufb-deployment-graph-explorer.md
index 9cfa2531d7..cef28edb38 100644
--- a/windows/deployment/update/includes/wufb-deployment-graph-explorer.md
+++ b/windows/deployment/update/includes/wufb-deployment-graph-explorer.md
@@ -24,6 +24,6 @@ For this tutorial, you'll use Graph Explorer to make requests to the [Microsoft
 
 1. To make requests:
    1. Select either GET, POST, PUT, PATCH, or DELETE from the drop-down list for the HTTP verb.
-   1. 
-   1. If you need to modify the request body, you can do so in the **Request body** tab.
+   1. Enter the request into the URL field.
+   1. If you need to modify the request body, edit the **Request body** tab.
    1. Select the **Run query** button. The results will appear in the **Response** window.