From 8da300e1bfc95689a8912c12640d3d7ab342a8f5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Meghan Stewart <33289333+mestew@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 10 Nov 2022 14:58:44 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] wording tweaks
---
windows/deployment/do/images/elixir_ux/readme.md | 4 ++--
windows/deployment/do/mcc-enterprise-prerequisites.md | 10 +++++-----
2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/windows/deployment/do/images/elixir_ux/readme.md b/windows/deployment/do/images/elixir_ux/readme.md
index 8b147b8226..a508d6edb9 100644
--- a/windows/deployment/do/images/elixir_ux/readme.md
+++ b/windows/deployment/do/images/elixir_ux/readme.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
---
-title: Do Not Remove images under do/images/elixir_ux - used by Azure portal Diagnose/Solve feature UI
+title: Don't Remove images under do/images/elixir_ux - used by Azure portal Diagnose/Solve feature UI
manager: aaroncz
description: Elixir images read me file
keywords: updates, downloads, network, bandwidth
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ ms.topic: article
# Read Me
-This file contains the images that are included in this GitHub repository for the purpose of Diagnose and Solve. These images below _should not be removed_ from the repository.
+This file contains the images that are included in this GitHub repository that are used by the Azure UI for Diagnose and Solve. The following images _shouldn't be removed_ from the repository:
:::image type="content" source="ux-checkverbose-2.png" alt-text="A screenshot that shows 6 out of the 22 checks raising errors":::
diff --git a/windows/deployment/do/mcc-enterprise-prerequisites.md b/windows/deployment/do/mcc-enterprise-prerequisites.md
index 20269726b9..705448742b 100644
--- a/windows/deployment/do/mcc-enterprise-prerequisites.md
+++ b/windows/deployment/do/mcc-enterprise-prerequisites.md
@@ -21,11 +21,11 @@ ms.topic: article
1. **Azure subscription**: MCC management portal is hosted within Azure and is used to create the Connected Cache [Azure resource](/azure/cloud-adoption-framework/govern/resource-consistency/resource-access-management) and IoT Hub resource. Both are free services.
- Your Azure subscription ID is first used to provision MCC services, and enable access to the preview. The MCC server requirement for an Azure subscription will cost you nothing. If you do not have an Azure subscription already, you can create an Azure [Pay-As-You-Go](https://azure.microsoft.com/offers/ms-azr-0003p/) account which requires a credit card for verification purposes. For more information, see the [Azure Free Account FAQ](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/free-account-faq/).
+ Your Azure subscription ID is first used to provision MCC services, and enable access to the preview. The MCC server requirement for an Azure subscription will cost you nothing. If you don't have an Azure subscription already, you can create an Azure [Pay-As-You-Go](https://azure.microsoft.com/offers/ms-azr-0003p/) account, which requires a credit card for verification purposes. For more information, see the [Azure Free Account FAQ](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/free-account-faq/).
- The resources used for the preview and in the future when this product is ready for production will be completely free to you, like other caching solutions.
+ The resources used for the preview and in the future when this product is ready for production will be free to you, like other caching solutions.
-2. **Hardware to host MCC**: The recommended configuration will serve approximately 35000 managed devices, downloading a 2GB payload in 24-hour timeframe at a sustained rate of 6.5 Gbps.
+2. **Hardware to host MCC**: The recommended configuration will serve approximately 35000 managed devices, downloading a 2 GB payload in 24-hour timeframe at a sustained rate of 6.5 Gbps.
**EFLOW Requires Hyper-V support**
- On Windows client, enable the Hyper-V feature
@@ -48,6 +48,6 @@ ms.topic: article
| -- | --- | --- |
| OS| Windows Server 2019*/2022
Windows 10*/11 (Pro or Enterprise) with Hyper-V Support
* Windows 10 and Windows Server 2019 build 17763 or later | Same |
|NIC | 1 Gbps | 5 Gbps |
-|Disk | SSD
1 drive
50GB each |SSD
1 drive
200GB each |
-|Memory | 4GB | 8GB |
+|Disk | SSD
1 drive
50 GB each |SSD
1 drive
200 GB each |
+|Memory | 4 GB | 8 GB |
|Cores | 4 | 8 |