reviewed items through #138

windows/client-management/mdm/index.md

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 title: Mobile device management
-description: Windows 10 provides an enterprise management solution to help IT pros manage company security policies and business applications, while avoiding compromise of the users’ privacy on their personal devices.
+description: Windows 10 provides an enterprise-level solution to mobile management, to help IT pros comply with security policies while avoiding compromise of user's privacy
 MS-HAID:
 - 'p\_phDeviceMgmt.provisioning\_and\_device\_management'
 - 'p\_phDeviceMgmt.mobile\_device\_management\_windows\_mdm'

windows/client-management/mdm/windowssecurityauditing-ddf-file.md

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 title: WindowsSecurityAuditing DDF file
-description: This topic shows the OMA DM device description framework (DDF) for the WindowsSecurityAuditing configuration service provider. This CSP was added in Windows 10, version 1511.
+description: View the OMA DM device description framework (DDF) for the WindowsSecurityAuditing configuration service provider.
 ms.assetid: B1F9A5FA-185B-48C6-A7F4-0F0F23B971F0
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: dansimp

windows/deployment/planning/testing-your-application-mitigation-packages.md

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 title: Testing Your Application Mitigation Packages (Windows 10)
-description: This topic provides details about testing your application-mitigation packages, including recommendations about how to report your information and how to resolve any outstanding issues.
+description: Learn how to test your application-mitigation packages, including how to report your information and how to resolve any outstanding issues.
 ms.assetid: ae946f27-d377-4db9-b179-e8875d454ccf
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: laurawi

windows/deployment/volume-activation/use-the-volume-activation-management-tool-client.md

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 title: Use the Volume Activation Management Tool (Windows 10)
-description: The Volume Activation Management Tool (VAMT) provides several useful features, including the ability to perform VAMT proxy activation and to track and monitor several types of product keys.
+description: The Volume Activation Management Tool (VAMT) provides several useful features, including the ability to track and monitor several types of product keys.
 ms.assetid: b11f0aee-7b60-44d1-be40-c960fc6c4c47
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: laurawi
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 ms.mktglfcycl: deploy
 ms.sitesec: library
 ms.pagetype: activation
-audience: itpro
author: greg-lindsay
+audience: itpro
+author: greg-lindsay
 ms.localizationpriority: medium
 ms.date: 07/27/2017
 ms.topic: article

windows/deployment/volume-activation/volume-activation-windows-10.md

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 title: Volume Activation for Windows 10
-description: This guide is designed to help organizations that are planning to use volume activation to deploy and activate Windows 10, including organizations that have used volume activation for earlier versions of Windows.
+description: Learn how to use volume activation to deploy & activate Windows 10. Includes details for orgs that have used volume activation for earlier versions of Windows.
 ms.assetid: 6e8cffae-7322-4fd3-882a-cde68187aef2
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: laurawi

windows/security/information-protection/windows-information-protection/collect-wip-audit-event-logs.md

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 title: How to collect Windows Information Protection (WIP) audit event logs (Windows 10)
-description: How to collect and understand your Windows Information Protection audit event logs by using the Reporting configuration service provider (CSP) or the Windows Event Forwarding (for Windows desktop domain-joined devices only).
+description: How to collect & understand Windows Information Protection audit event logs via the Reporting configuration service provider (CSP) or Windows Event Forwarding.
 ms.prod: w10
 ms.mktglfcycl: explore
 ms.sitesec: library

windows/security/information-protection/windows-information-protection/overview-create-wip-policy-sccm.md

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 title: Create a Windows Information Protection (WIP) policy using System Center Configuration Manager (Windows 10)
-description: System Center Configuration Manager helps you create and deploy your enterprise data protection (WIP) policy, including letting you choose your protected apps, your WIP-protection level, and how to find enterprise data on the network.
+description: System Center Configuration Manager helps you create & deploy your enterprise data protection (WIP) policy.
 ms.assetid: d2059e74-94bd-4e54-ab59-1a7b9b52bdc6
 ms.reviewer: 
 ms.prod: w10

windows/security/threat-protection/auditing/audit-application-group-management.md

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 title: Audit Application Group Management (Windows 10)
-description: This topic for the IT professional describes the advanced security audit policy setting, Audit Application Group Management, which determines whether the operating system generates audit events when application group management tasks are performed.
+description: The policy setting, Audit Application Group Management, determines if audit events are generated when application group management tasks are performed.
 ms.assetid: 1bcaa41e-5027-4a86-96b7-f04eaf1c0606
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: dansimp

windows/security/threat-protection/auditing/audit-detailed-file-share.md

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 title: Audit Detailed File Share (Windows 10)
-description: This topic for the IT professional describes the Advanced Security Audit policy setting, Audit Detailed File Share, which allows you to audit attempts to access files and folders on a shared folder.
+description: The Advanced Security Audit policy setting, Audit Detailed File Share, allows you to audit attempts to access files and folders on a shared folder.
 ms.assetid: 60310104-b820-4033-a1cb-022a34f064ae
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: dansimp

windows/security/threat-protection/auditing/audit-directory-service-access.md

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 title: Audit Directory Service Access (Windows 10)
-description: This topic for the IT professional describes the advanced security audit policy setting, Audit Directory Service Access, which determines whether the operating system generates audit events when an Active Directory Domain Services (ADÂ DS) object is accessed.
+description: The policy setting Audit Directory Service Access determines if audit events are generated when an Active Directory Domain Services (ADA DS) object is accessed.
 ms.assetid: ba2562ba-4282-4588-b87c-a3fcb771c7d0
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: dansimp

windows/security/threat-protection/auditing/basic-audit-object-access.md

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 title: Audit object access (Windows 10)
-description: Determines whether to audit the event of a user accessing an object--for example, a file, folder, registry key, printer, and so forth--that has its own system access control list (SACL) specified.
+description: The policy setting, Audit object access, determines whether to audit the event generated when a user accesses an object that has its own SACL specified.
 ms.assetid: D15B6D67-7886-44C2-9972-3F192D5407EA
 ms.reviewer: 
 ms.author: dansimp

windows/security/threat-protection/microsoft-defender-atp/tvm-weaknesses.md

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 title: Weaknesses
-description: The **Weaknesses** page lists down the vulnerabilities found in the infected software running in your organization, their severity, Common Vulnerability Scoring System (CVSS) rating, its prevalence in your organization, breach, and threat insights.    
+description: Windows Defender Security Center offers a Weaknesses page, which lists vulnerabilities found in the infected software running in your organization. 
 keywords: mdatp threat & vulnerability management, mdatp tvm weaknesses page, finding weaknesses through tvm, tvm vulnerability list, vulnerability details in tvm 
 search.product: eADQiWindows 10XVcnh
 search.appverid: met150

windows/security/threat-protection/security-policy-settings/network-security-do-not-store-lan-manager-hash-value-on-next-password-change.md

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 title: Network security Do not store LAN Manager hash value on next password change (Windows 10)
-description: Describes the best practices, location, values, policy management and security considerations for the Network security Do not store LAN Manager hash value on next password change security policy setting.
+description: Best practices, security considerations, and more for the security policy setting, Network security Do not store LAN Manager hash value on next password change.
 ms.assetid: 6452b268-e5ba-4889-9d38-db28f919af51
 ms.reviewer: 
 ms.author: dansimp

windows/security/threat-protection/security-policy-settings/network-security-restrict-ntlm-incoming-ntlm-traffic.md

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 title: Network security Restrict NTLM Incoming NTLM traffic (Windows 10)
-description: Describes the best practices, location, values, management aspects, and security considerations for the Network Security Restrict NTLM Incoming NTLM traffic security policy setting.
+description: Best practices, security considerations, and more for the security policy setting, Network Security Restrict NTLM Incoming NTLM traffic.
 ms.assetid: c0eff7d3-ed59-4004-908a-2205295fefb8
 ms.reviewer: 
 ms.author: dansimp

windows/security/threat-protection/security-policy-settings/smbv1-microsoft-network-client-digitally-sign-communications-if-server-agrees.md

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 title: SMBv1 Microsoft network client Digitally sign communications (if server agrees) (Windows 10)
-description: For SMBv1 only, describes the best practices, location, values, and security considerations for the Microsoft network client Digitally sign communications (if server agrees) security policy setting.
+description: Best practices, location, values, and security considerations for the policy setting, Microsoft network client Digitally sign communications (if server agrees).
 ms.assetid: e553f700-aae5-425c-8650-f251c90ba5dd
 ms.reviewer: 
 ms.author: dansimp