slight edit to login.live endpoint language for tone and style

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@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ Clicking the header of the Frequently Crashing Devices blade opens a reliability
Notice the filters in the left pane; they allow you to filter the crash rate shown to a particular operating system version, device model, or other parameter.
>[!NOTE]
>Use caution when interpreting results filtered by model or operating system version. This is very useful for troubleshooting, but might not be accurate for *comparisons* because the crashes displayed could be of different types. The overall goal for working with crash data is to ensure that most devices have the same driver versions and that that version has a low crash rate.
>Use caution when interpreting results filtered by model or operating system version. This is very useful for troubleshooting, but might not be accurate for *comparisons* because the crashes displayed could be of different types. The overall goal for working with crash data is to ensure that most devices have the same driver versions and that the version has a low crash rate.
>[!TIP]
>Once you've applied a filter (for example setting OSVERSION=1607) you will see the query in the text box change to append the filter (for example, with “(OSVERSION=1607)”). To undo the filter, remove that part of the query in the text box and click the search button to the right of the text box to run the adjusted query.”

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ms.pagetype: deploy
author: jaimeo
ms.author: jaimeo
ms.date: 09/26/2018
ms.date: 10/10/2018
ms.localizationpriority: medium
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1. Sign in to the [Azure Portal](https://portal.azure.com) with your work or school account or a Microsoft account. If you don't already have an Azure subscription you can create one (including free trial options) through the portal.
>[!NOTE]
> Upgrade Readiness is included at no additional cost with Windows 10 [education and enterprise licensing](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows/deployment/update/device-health-monitor#device-health-licensing). An Azure subscription is required for managing and using Upgrade Readiness, but no Azure charges are expected to accrue to the subscription as a result of using Upgrade Readiness.
> Upgrade Readiness is included at no additional cost with Windows 10 Professional, Education, and Enterprise editions. An Azure subscription is required for managing and using Upgrade Readiness, but no Azure charges are expected to accrue to the subscription as a result of using Upgrade Readiness.
2. In the Azure portal select **Create a resource**, search for "Upgrade Readiness", and then select **Create** on the **Upgrade Readiness** solution.
![Azure portal page highlighting + Create a resource and with Upgrade Readiness selected](../images/UR-Azureportal1.png)

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author: greg-lindsay
ms.author: greglin
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---
title: Rip and Replace
description: Listing of Autopilot scenarios
keywords: mdm, setup, windows, windows 10, oobe, manage, deploy, autopilot, ztd, zero-touch, partner, msfb, intune
ms.prod: w10
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# Rip and replace
**Applies to: Windows 10**
DO NOT PUBLISH. Just a placeholder for now, coming with 1809.
---
title: Autopilot for existing devices
description: Listing of Autopilot scenarios
keywords: mdm, setup, windows, windows 10, oobe, manage, deploy, autopilot, ztd, zero-touch, partner, msfb, intune
ms.prod: w10
ms.mktglfcycl: deploy
ms.localizationpriority: low
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ms.pagetype: deploy
author: greg-lindsay
ms.author: greglin
ms.date: 10/11/2018
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# Autopilot for existing devices
**Applies to: Windows 10**
Placeholder. Content coming.

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# Windows Autopilot user-driven mode for Azure Active Directory
**Applies to: Windows 10**
DO NOT PUBLISH. This eventually will contain the AAD-specific instuctions currently in user-driven.md.
Placeholder. Content coming.

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**Applies to: Windows 10**
DO NOT PUBLISH. This eventually will contain the AD-specific (hybrid) instuctions. This will be in preview at a later point in time.
Placeholder. Content coming.

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