From a9c621ce22b0ddf001f9da3b29b4bf0dc83d4abf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Brian Lich Date: Mon, 11 Jul 2016 12:52:50 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] typos --- ...-windows-telemetry-in-your-organization.md | 25 ++++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/windows/manage/configure-windows-telemetry-in-your-organization.md b/windows/manage/configure-windows-telemetry-in-your-organization.md index f69a2ac28e..daaa0d03ee 100644 --- a/windows/manage/configure-windows-telemetry-in-your-organization.md +++ b/windows/manage/configure-windows-telemetry-in-your-organization.md @@ -108,13 +108,14 @@ To better help customers through this difficult process, Microsoft developed Upg With Windows telemetry enabled, Microsoft collects computer, application, and driver compatibility-related information for analysis. We then identify compatibility issues that can block your upgrade and suggest fixes when they are known to Microsoft. Use Upgrade Analytics to get: -• A visual workflow that guides you from pilot to production -• Detailed computer, driver, and application inventory -• Powerful computer level search and drill-downs -• Guidance and insights into application and driver compatibility issues with suggested fixes -• Data driven application rationalization tools -• Application usage information, allowing targeted validation; workflow to track validation progress and decisions -• Data export to commonly used software deployment tools + +- A visual workflow that guides you from pilot to production +- Detailed computer, driver, and application inventory +- Powerful computer level search and drill-downs +- Guidance and insights into application and driver compatibility issues with suggested fixes +- Data driven application rationalization tools +- Application usage information, allowing targeted validation; workflow to track validation progress and decisions +- Data export to commonly used software deployment tools The Upgrade Analytics workflow steps you through the discovery and rationalization process until you have a list of computers that are ready to be upgraded. @@ -371,7 +372,7 @@ There are a few more settings that you can turn off that may send telemetry info ## Additional resources -FAQs: +FAQs - [Cortana, Search, and privacy](http://windows.microsoft.com/en-us/windows-10/cortana-privacy-faq) - [Windows 10 feedback, diagnostics, and privacy](http://windows.microsoft.com/en-us/windows-10/feedback-diagnostics-privacy-faq) @@ -383,18 +384,18 @@ FAQs: - [Wi-Fi Sense](http://windows.microsoft.com/en-us/windows-10/wi-fi-sense-faq) - [Windows Update Delivery Optimization](http://windows.microsoft.com/en-us/windows-10/windows-update-delivery-optimization-faq) -Blogs: +Blogs - [Privacy and Windows 10](https://blogs.windows.com/windowsexperience/2015/09/28/privacy-and-windows-10) -Privacy Statement: +Privacy Statement - [Microsoft Privacy Statement](https://privacy.microsoft.com/en-us/privacystatement) -TechNet: +TechNet - [Manage connections from Windows operating system components to Microsoft services](https://technet.microsoft.com/en-us/itpro/windows/manage/manage-connections-from-windows-operating-system-components-to-microsoft-services) -Web Pages: +Web Pages - [Privacy at Microsoft](http://privacy.microsoft.com)