Merge branch 'master' of https://github.com/microsoftdocs/windows-itpro-docs

windows/client-management/mdm/policy-csp-browser.md

@@ -2785,7 +2785,7 @@ ADMX Info:
 Supported values:
 
 - Blank (default) - Load the pages specified in App settings as the default Start pages.
-- String - Enter the URLs of the pages you want to load as the Start pages, separating each page using angle brackets:<p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;\<support.contoso.com\>&nbsp;\<support.microsoft.com\>
+- String - Enter the URLs of the pages you want to load as the Start pages, separating each page using angle brackets and comma:<p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;\<support.contoso.com\>&comma;\<support.microsoft.com\>
 
 <!--/SupportedValues-->
 <!--/Policy-->

windows/deployment/upgrade/windows-10-edition-upgrades.md

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ For a list of operating systems that qualify for the Windows 10 Pro Upgrade or W
 
 The following table shows the methods and paths available to change the edition of Windows 10 that is running on your computer. **Note**: The reboot requirement for upgrading from Pro to Enterprise was removed in version 1607.
 
-Note: Although it isn't displayed yet in the table, edition upgrade is also possible using [edition upgrade policy](https://docs.microsoft.com/sccm/compliance/deploy-use/upgrade-windows-version) in System Center Configuratio Manager.
+Note: Although it isn't displayed yet in the table, edition upgrade is also possible using [edition upgrade policy](https://docs.microsoft.com/sccm/compliance/deploy-use/upgrade-windows-version) in System Center Configuration Manager.
 
 ![not supported](../images/x_blk.png) (X) = not supported</br>
 ![supported, reboot required](../images/check_grn.png) (green checkmark) = supported, reboot required</br>

windows/deployment/windows-autopilot/windows-autopilot-requirements-network.md

@@ -41,11 +41,11 @@ In environments that have more restrictive internet access, or for those that re
 
     -   NOTE:  If Windows Update is inaccessible, the AutoPilot process will still continue.
 
--   **Delivery Optimization.**  When downloading Windows Updates and Microsoft Store apps and app updates (with additional content types expected in the future), the Delivery Optimization service is contacted to enable peer-to-peer sharing of content, so that all devices don’t need to download it from the internet.
+-   **Delivery Optimization.**  When downloading Windows Updates, Microsoft Store apps and app updates, Office Updates and Intune Win32 Apps, the Delivery Optimization service is contacted to enable peer-to-peer sharing of content so that only a few devices need to download it from the internet.
 
     -   <https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/deployment/update/waas-delivery-optimization>
 
-    -   NOTE: If Delivery Optimization is inaccessible, the AutoPilot process will still continue.
+    -   NOTE: If Delivery Optimization Service is inaccessible, the AutoPilot process will still continue with Delivery Optimization downloads from the cloud (without peer-to-peer).
 
 -   **Network Time Protocol (NTP) Sync.**  When a Windows device starts up, it will talk to a network time server to ensure that the time on the device is accurate.
 

windows/security/identity-protection/hello-for-business/hello-key-trust-deploy-mfa.md

@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ Sign in the domain controller with _domain administrator_ equivalent credentials
 ##### Add accounts to the Phonefactor Admins group
 
 1. Open **Active Directory Users and Computers**.
-2. In the navigation pane, expand the node with the organization’s Active Directory domain name.  Select Users. In the content pane. Right-click the **Phonefactors Admin** security group and select **Properties**.
+2. In the navigation pane, expand the node with the organization’s Active Directory domain name.  Select Users. In the content pane. Right-click the **Phonefactor Admins** security group and select **Properties**.
 3. Click the **Members** tab.
 4. Click **Add**. Click **Object Types..** In the **Object Types** dialog box, select **Computers** and click **OK**. Enter the following user and/or computers accounts in the **Enter the object names to select** box and then click **OK**.   
     * The computer account for the primary MFA Server

windows/security/information-protection/encrypted-hard-drive.md

@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ For Encrypted Hard Drives used as **startup drives**:
  
 ## Technical overview
 
-Rapid encryption in BitLocker directly addresses the security needs of enterprises while offering significantly improved performance. In versions of Windows earlier than Windows Server 2012, BitLocker required a two-step process to complete read/write requests. In Windows Server 2012, Windows 8, or later, Encrypted Hard Drives offload the cryptographic operations to the drive controller for much greater efficiency. When the operating system an Encrypted Hard Drive, it activates the security mode. This activation lets the drive controller generate a media key for every volume that the host computer creates. This media key, which is never exposed outside the disk, is used to rapidly encrypt or decrypt every byte of data that is sent or received from the disk.
+Rapid encryption in BitLocker directly addresses the security needs of enterprises while offering significantly improved performance. In versions of Windows earlier than Windows Server 2012, BitLocker required a two-step process to complete read/write requests. In Windows Server 2012, Windows 8, or later, Encrypted Hard Drives offload the cryptographic operations to the drive controller for much greater efficiency. When the operating system identifies an Encrypted Hard Drive, it activates the security mode. This activation lets the drive controller generate a media key for every volume that the host computer creates. This media key, which is never exposed outside the disk, is used to rapidly encrypt or decrypt every byte of data that is sent or received from the disk.
 
 ## Configuring Encrypted Hard Drives as Startup drives