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windows/configuration/guidelines-for-assigned-access-app.md

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 ## Guidelines for web browsers
 
-In Windows 10, version 1909, assigned access adds support for the new Microsoft Edge kiosk mode. [Learn how to deploy Microsoft Edge kiosk mode](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/DeployEdge/microsoft-edge-configure-kiosk-mode).
+In Windows 10, version 1909, assigned access adds support for the new Microsoft Edge kiosk mode. [Learn how to deploy Microsoft Edge kiosk mode](https://docs.microsoft.com/DeployEdge/microsoft-edge-configure-kiosk-mode).
 
 In Windows 10, version 1809, Microsoft Edge Legacy includes support for kiosk mode. [Learn how to deploy Microsoft Edge kiosk mode.](https://docs.microsoft.com/microsoft-edge/deploy/microsoft-edge-kiosk-mode-deploy)
 
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 ## Customize your breakout sequence
 
-Assigned access allows for the specification of a new breakout sequence. A breakout sequence is a keyboard shortcut that stops the kiosk experience and brings the user back to the lock screen. By default the breakout sequence is configured to be ctrl+alt+delete, a common windows keyboard shortcut. It is recommended that this is set to a non-standard windows shortcut to prevent disruptions in the kiosk experience.
+Assigned access allows for the specification of a new breakout sequence. A breakout sequence is a keyboard shortcut that stops the kiosk experience and brings the user back to the lock screen. By default the breakout sequence is configured to be ctrl+alt+delete, a common Windows keyboard shortcut. It is recommended that this is set to a non-standard Windows shortcut to prevent disruptions in the kiosk experience.
 
-There is currently no UI for customizing the breakout sequence in Windows Settings, so it would need to be specified in a provision method where an XML format is used like MDM.
+There is currently no user interface for customizing the breakout sequence in Windows settings, so it would need to be specified in a provisioning method where an XML format such as MDM is used.
 
 ## App configuration
 

windows/configuration/kiosk-single-app.md

@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@ To change the default time for assigned access to resume, add *IdleTimeOut* (DWO
 > [!NOTE]
 > **IdleTimeOut** does not apply to the new Microsoft Edge kiosk mode.
 
- The Breakout Sequence of **Ctrl + Alt + Del** is the default, but this can be configured to be a different sequence of keys. The breakout sequence uses the format **modifiers + keys**. An example breakout sequence would look something like **Shift + Alt + a**, where **Shift** and **Alt** are the modifiers and **A** is the key value. [See how this is configured using in xml](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows/configuration/kiosk-xml#microsoft-edge-kiosk-xml-sample).
+ The Breakout Sequence of **Ctrl + Alt + Del** is the default, but this can be configured to be a different sequence of keys. The breakout sequence uses the format **modifiers + keys**. An example breakout sequence would look something like **Shift + Alt + a**, where **Shift** and **Alt** are the modifiers and **a** is the key value. [See how this is configured in XML](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows/configuration/kiosk-xml#microsoft-edge-kiosk-xml-sample).
 
 
 

windows/configuration/kiosk-xml.md

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 ```
 
 ## Global Profile Sample XML
-Global profile is currently supported in Windows 10, version 2004 and later. Global Profile is designed for scenarios where a user does not have a designated profile, yet IT Admin still wants the user to run in lockdown mode, or used as mitigation when a profile cannot be determined for a user.
+Global Profile is currently supported in Windows 10, version 2004 and later. Global Profile is designed for scenarios where a user does not have a designated profile, yet IT Admin still wants the user to run in lockdown mode, or it is used as mitigation when a profile cannot be determined for a user.
 
-This sample demonstrates that only a global profile is used, no active user configured. Global profile will be applied when every non-admin account logs in 
+This sample demonstrates that only a global profile is used, with no active user configured. Global Profile will be applied when every non-admin account logs in.
 ```xml
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8" ?>
 <AssignedAccessConfiguration