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@@ -23,11 +23,11 @@ New features and enhancements are introduced through the monthly cumulative upda
 - Temporarily turned off by default using [temporary enterprise feature control](#temporary-enterprise-feature-control)
 - Controlled by a policy that allows for [permanent enterprise feature control](#permanent-enterprise-feature-control)
 
-Features that are turned off by default are listed in the KB article for the monthly cumulative update. A feature is typically selected to be off by default because it impacts the user experience or IT administrators significantly. For example, a feature might be turned off by default if it requires a change in user behavior or IT administrators to take action before the feature can be used.
+Features that are turned off by default are listed in the KB article for the monthly cumulative update. Typically, a feature is selected to be off by default because it either impacts the user experience or IT administrators significantly. For example, a feature might be turned off by default if it requires a change in user behavior or if it requires IT administrators to take action before the feature can be used.
 
 ## Temporary enterprise feature control
 
-Features behind temporary enterprise control are automatically disabled for devices with Windows updates managed by policies.
+Features behind temporary enterprise control are automatically disabled for devices that have their Windows updates managed by policies.
 
 ### Enable features behind temporary enterprise feature control