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education/trial-in-a-box/educator-tib-get-started.md

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 4. [Minecraft: Education Edition](#minecraft-education-edition)
 
 ## Microsoft Learning tools
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 Learning Tools is a set of features available in Word, OneNote, and the Edge browser that helps:
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   | ![Word Online Text to Speech](images/wordonline_tts.png) | ![Word Online Text Preferences](images/wordonline_text_preferences.png) | ![Word Online Grammar Options](images/wordonline_grammar_options.png) | ![Word Online Line Focus](images/wordonline_line_focus.png) |
 
 ## Microsoft Teams
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 Microsoft Teams is a digital hub that brings conversations, content, and apps together in one place. Throughhis guided tour walks you through the essential teaching features of the app. Then, through interactive prompts, experience how you can use this tool in your own classroom to spark classroom digital discussions, respond to student questions, organize content, and more!  
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 ## OneNote
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 OneNote acts as an unlimited digital canvas for the whole class to store text, images, handwritten drawings, attachments, links, voice, video, and more. See how a group project comes together with opportunities to interact with other students, multimedia, and sophisticated drawing tools. This one works best with your digital pen! 
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 ## Minecraft: Education Edition
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 Minecraft: Education Edition is an open-world game that promotes creativity, collaboration, and problem-solving in an immersive environment where the only limit is your imagination.   

education/trial-in-a-box/index.md

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 -   Windows 10 S Fall Creators Update, Office 365 for Education, Microsoft Intune for Education, Microsoft Store for Education, Minecraft: Education Edition
 
-## What's Microsoft Education?
-Microsoft Education empowers educators to unlock creativity, promote teamwork, and provide a simple and safe experience in a single, affordable solution built for education.
+Welcome to the Microsoft Education Trial in a Box!
 
 ## What's Trial in a Box?
+Trial in a Box lets you evaluate our latest solutions for education.
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 With Microsoft Education Trial in a Box:
-* Educators can enhance independence for students of all abilities with intelligent tools like Office Lens and Learning Tools, spark creativity, collaboration, and problem-solving with Office, OneNote Class Notebook and Sway
-* Students can be more creative, collaborative, and improve problem-solving skills with Minecraft: Education Edition and bring ideas to live in 3D
+* Educators can enhance independence for students of all abilities with intelligent tools like Microsoft Learning Tools, spark creativity, collaboration, and problem-solving with OneNote
+* Students can be more creative, collaborative, and improve problem-solving skills with Minecraft: Education Edition and bring ideas to life in 3D
 * IT admins can learn about the tools they can use to implement and deploy a full cloud infrastructure for their school that's secure and easy to manage
 
 ## What's in Trial in a Box?
 
-* **Support** - A *Getting Started Guide* provides start-to-finish instructions so you can quickly begin using your PCs and live customer support in case you need it.
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-* **Two (2) Windows 10 S devices** - A 2-in-1 convertible PC that supports digital ink, and an affordable PC designed to survive the rigors of classroom life. Both PCs are running Windows 10 S<sup>[1](#footnote1),</sup> <sup>[2](#footnote2)</sup> with Fall Creators Update already installed.
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-* **Microsoft 365 Education Trial subscription** - A one-year trial subscription of Microsoft Education software to test both device experiences. This includes: Microsoft 365 Education, Minecraft: Education Edition, OneNote, Microsoft Teams for Education, and Intune for Education to enable easy setup and secure management of classroom devices.
+* **User name and passwords** - We've already set up a cloud-based school using Microsoft 365 Education. Your login credentials are included in the kit.
+* **Device A** - A 2-in-1 convertible PC that supports digital ink. This device is pre-configured with Windows 10 S<sup>[1](#footnote1),</sup> <sup>[2](#footnote2)</sup> and ready for login so you can try the Microsoft Education classroom experience. 
+* **Device B** - An affordable PC designed to survive the rigors of classroom life. This PC has a fresh installation of Windows 10 S<sup>[1](#footnote1),</sup> <sup>[2](#footnote2)</sup> so you can see how easy it is to set up a brand new device.
+* **Accessories** - A wireless mouse to use with Minecraft: Education Edition, a USB memory stick to set up school PCs, and a network adapter (just in case).
 
 ## Get started!
 Choose your role to get started.