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windows/whats-new/windows-11-plan.md

@@ -7,7 +7,6 @@ ms.mktglfcycl: deploy
 ms.sitesec: library
 author: greg-lindsay
 ms.author: greglin
-ms.date: 08/18/2021
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: laurawi
 ms.localizationpriority: high
@@ -57,8 +56,7 @@ If you manage devices on behalf of your organization, you will be able to upgrad
 - Additional insight into safeguard holds. While safeguard holds will function for Windows 11 devices just as they do for Windows 10 today, administrators using Windows Update for Business will have access to information on which safeguard holds are preventing individual devices from taking the upgrade to Windows 11. 
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> If you use Windows Update for Business to manage feature update deployments today, you will need to leverage the **Target Version** policy rather than **Feature Update deferrals** to move from Windows 10 to Windows 11. Deferrals are great for quality updates or to move to newer version of the same product (from example, from Windows 10, version 20H2 to 21H1), but they cannot migrate a device between products (from Windows 10 to Windows 11). <br>
+> Also, Windows 11 has new Microsoft Software License Terms. If you are deploying with Windows Update for Business **Target Version** or with Windows Server Update Services, you are accepting these new license terms on behalf of the users in your organization. 
-> Also, Windows 11 has a new End User License Agreement. If you are deploying with Windows Update for Business **Target Version** or with Windows Server Update Services, you are accepting this new End User License Agreement on behalf of the end-users within your organization. 
 
 ##### Unmanaged devices
 

windows/whats-new/windows-11-prepare.md

@@ -7,7 +7,6 @@ ms.mktglfcycl: deploy
 ms.sitesec: library
 author: greg-lindsay
 ms.author: greglin
-ms.date: 09/03/2021
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: laurawi
 ms.localizationpriority: high
@@ -41,16 +40,15 @@ The tools that you use for core workloads during Windows 10 deployments can stil
 - If you use [Microsoft Endpoint Configuration Manager](/mem/configmgr/), you can sync the new **Windows 11** product category and begin upgrading eligible devices. If you would like to validate Windows 11 prior to release, you can sync the **Windows Insider Pre-release** category as well.  
 
   > [!NOTE]
-  > Configuration Manager will prompt you to accept the End User License Agreement on behalf of the users in your organization. 
+  > Configuration Manager will prompt you to accept the Microsoft Software License Terms on behalf of the users in your organization. 
 
 #### Cloud-based solutions
 
--	If you use Windows Update for Business policies, you will need to use the **Target Version** capability rather than feature update deferrals to upgrade from Windows 10 to Windows 11. Feature update deferrals are great to move to newer versions of your current product (for example, Windows 10, version 20H2 to 21H1, but do not enable you to move between products (Windows 10 to Windows 11). 
+-	If you use Windows Update for Business policies, you will need to use the **Target Version** capability (either through policy or the Windows Update for Business deployment service) rather than using feature update deferrals alone to upgrade from Windows 10 to Windows 11. Feature update deferrals are great to move to newer versions of your current product (for example, Windows 10, version 20H2 to 21H1), but won't automatically devices move between products (Windows 10 to Windows 11). 
     - In Group Policy, **Select target Feature Update version** has two entry fields after taking the 9/1/2021 optional update ([KB5005101](https://support.microsoft.com/topic/september-1-2021-kb5005101-os-builds-19041-1202-19042-1202-and-19043-1202-preview-82a50f27-a56f-4212-96ce-1554e8058dc1)) or a later update: **Product Version** and **Target Version**. 
-    - The product field must specify Windows 11 in order for devices to upgrade to Windows 11. If only the target version field is configured, the device will be offered matching versions of the same product. 
+    - The product field must specify Windows 11 in order for devices to upgrade to Windows 11. If only the target version field is configured, the device will be offered matching versions of the same product. For example, if a device is running <i>Windows 10, version 2004</i> and only the target version is configured to 21H1, this device will be offered version <i>Windows 10, version 21H1</i>, even if multiple products have a 21H1 version. If you use deferrals today in Group Policy, your devices will continue to get the latest feature update of Windows 10 once it has reached your specified deferral age, but will not be offered Windows 11 until you specify this by using the **Select target Feature Update version** policy. Your deferrals will continue to apply in this case as well. 
-    - For example, if a device is running <i>Windows 10, version 2004</i> and only the target version is configured to 21H1, this device will be offered version <i>Windows 10, version 21H1</i>, even if multiple products have a 21H1 version.
+- Quality update deferrals and experience policies will continue to work the same across both Windows 10 and Windows 11. This is true regardless of which management tool you use to configure Windows Update for Business policies.
-- Quality update deferrals will continue to work the same across both Windows 10 and Windows 11. This is true regardless of which management tool you use to configure Windows Update for Business policies.
+- If you use Microsoft Intune and have a Microsoft 365 E3 license, you will be able to use the [feature update deployments](/mem/intune/protect/windows-10-feature-updates) page to select **Windows 11, version 21H2** and upgrade Windows 10 devices to Windows 11. You can also continue using the same update experience controls to manage Windows 10 and Windows 11 on the **Update Rings** page in Intune. If you aren’t ready to move to Windows 11, keep the feature update version set at the version you are currently on. When you are ready to start upgrading devices, change the feature update deployment setting to specify Windows 11. 
-- If you use Microsoft Intune and have a Microsoft 365 E3 license, you will be able to use [feature update deployments](/mem/intune/protect/windows-10-feature-updates) to easily update devices from one release of Windows 10 to another, or to upgrade Windows 10 devices to Windows 11. You can also continue using the same update experience controls to manage Windows 10 and Windows 11. If you aren’t ready to move to Windows 11, keep the feature update version set at the version you are currently on. When you are ready to start upgrading devices, change the feature update deployment setting to specify Windows 11. 
 
 ## Cloud-based management