diff --git a/education/windows/set-up-school-pcs-whats-new.md b/education/windows/set-up-school-pcs-whats-new.md index 151604eb6f..1051e702b2 100644 --- a/education/windows/set-up-school-pcs-whats-new.md +++ b/education/windows/set-up-school-pcs-whats-new.md @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ ms.pagetype: edu ms.localizationpriority: medium author: dansimp ms.author: dansimp -ms.date: 09/23/2019 +ms.date: 09/25/2019 ms.reviewer: manager: dansimp --- @@ -43,12 +43,12 @@ If you configure Azure AD Join, you're now required to rename your devices durin ## Week of April 15, 2019 ### Support for Minecraft Education Edition upgrade - Set up School PCs will only add apps to the provisioning package that meet the minimum supported version for Windows 10. For example, Minecraft was the most recent store app to upgrade, and when selected, can only be installed on devices running Windows 10, version 1709 and later. If you select an earlier Windows version, Minecraft won't be added to the provisioning package. + Set up School PCs only adds apps to the provisioning package that meet the minimum supported version for Windows 10. For example, Minecraft is the most recent store app to upgrade; it's only installed on devices running Windows 10, version 1709 and later. If you select an earlier version of Windows, Minecraft won't be included in the provisioning package. ## Week of April 8, 2019 ### Apps configured as non-removeable -All apps that are deployed by Set up School PCs are configured on the device as non-removable apps. This feature ensures that students don't unpin or uninstall the apps they need. +All apps that are deployed by Set up School PCs are configured on the device as non-removable apps. This feature prevents students from unpinning or uninstalling the apps they need. ### Domain name automatically added during sign-in Specify your preferred Azure Active Directory tenant domain name to automatically append it to the username on the sign-in screen. With this setting, students don't need to type out long school domain names. To sign in, they type only their unique usernames. @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ Set up devices so that they connect to a hidden Wi-Fi network. To configure a hi ## Week of December 31, 2018 ### Add Microsoft Whiteboard to provisioning package -Microsoft Whiteboard has been added to the list of Microsoft-recommended apps for schools. Whiteboard is a freeform digital canvas where ideas, content, and people come together so students can create and collaborate in real time in the classroom. You can add Whiteboard to your provisioning package in Set up School PCs, on the **Add apps** page. For more information, see [Use Set up School PCs app](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#create-the-provisioning-package). +Microsoft Whiteboard has been added to the list of Microsoft-recommended apps for schools. Whiteboard is a freeform digital canvas where ideas, content, and people come together; students can create and collaborate in real time in the classroom. Add Whiteboard to your provisioning package in Set up School PCs, on the **Add apps** page. For more information, see [Use Set up School PCs app](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#create-the-provisioning-package). ## Week of November 5, 2018 @@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ The Set up School PCs app was updated with the following changes: ### Three new setup screens added to the app The following screens and functionality were added to the setup workflow. Select a screen name to view the relevant steps and screenshots in the Set Up School PCs docs. -* [**Package name**](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#package-name): Customize a package name to make it easy to recognize it from your school's other packages. The name is generated by Azure Active Directory and appears as the filename and as the token name in Azure AD in the Azure portal. +* [**Package name**](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#package-name): Customize a package name to make it easy to recognize it from your school's other packages. Azure Active Directory generates the name. It appears as the filename, and as the token name in Azure AD in the Azure portal. * [**Product key**](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#product-key): Enter a product key to upgrade your current edition of Windows 10, or change the existing product key. @@ -85,13 +85,13 @@ The following screens and functionality were added to the setup workflow. Select Packages now expire 180 days from the date you create them. ### Updated apps with more helpful, descriptive text -We've updated the app's **Skip** buttons to clarify the intent of each action. An **Exit** button also appears on the last page of the app. +The **Skip** buttons in the app now communicate the intent of each action. An **Exit** button also appears on the last page of the app. ### Option to keep existing device names The [**Name these devices** screen](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#device-names) now gives you the option to keep the original or existing names of your student devices. ### Skype and Messaging apps to be removed from student PCs by default -We've added the Skype and Messaging app to a selection of apps that are, by default, removed from student devices. +The Skype and Messaging apps are part of a selection of apps that are, by default, removed from student devices. ## Next steps