diff --git a/windows/deployment/update/waas-wu-settings.md b/windows/deployment/update/waas-wu-settings.md
index ae53a53365..f109996699 100644
--- a/windows/deployment/update/waas-wu-settings.md
+++ b/windows/deployment/update/waas-wu-settings.md
@@ -287,15 +287,15 @@ New-ItemProperty -Path $registryPath -Name $name -Value $value -PropertyType DWO
 
 ## <a name="allow-windows-update-before-initial-logon"> </a> Allow Windows Updates to install before initial user logon
 
-This value is supported on devices running Windows 11, version 22H2 or newer.
+This value is supported on devices running Windows 11, version 22H2, or later.
 
-On new devices Windows Update does not begin to install background updates until a user has completed the Out of Box Experience and logs on for the first time.  The initial logon typically happens immediately after completing that first user experience.  Some VM-based solutions provision a device and automate the first user experience but are not immediately assigned to a user and don't see an initial logon until several days later.  
+On new devices, Windows Update does not begin to install background updates until a user has completed the Out of Box Experience and signs in for the first time.  The user typically signs in initially immediately after completing that first user experience. Some VM-based solutions provision a device and automate the first user experience but are not immediately assigned to a user and don't see a user initially signing in until several days later.  
 
-In those scenarios, setting the following registry value allows those devices to begin background update work before a first user logon:
+In those scenarios, setting the following registry values allows those devices to begin background update work before a user first signs in:
 
 - **Registry key**: HKEY_LOCAL_MACHINE\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows\CurrentVersion\WindowsUpdate\Orchestrator
 - **DWORD value name**: ScanBeforeInitialLogonAllowed
 - **Value data**: 1
 
 > [!CAUTION]
-> This value is designed to be used only for scenarios with a deferred initial user logon.  Setting this value on normal consumer retail devices could have a detrimental effect on performance as it may allow update work to occur as the user is logging in for the first time.
+> This value is designed to be used only for scenarios where the initial signing-in of a user is deferred. Setting this value on normal consumer retail devices could have a detrimental effect on performance as it may allow update work to occur as the user signs in for the first time.