items reviewed through #168

windows/security/threat-protection/auditing/audit-account-lockout.md

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 title: Audit Account Lockout (Windows 10)
-description: This topic for the IT professional describes the advanced security audit policy setting, Audit Account Lockout, which enables you to audit security events that are generated by a failed attempt to log on to an account that is locked out.
+description: The policy setting, Audit Account Lockout, enables you to audit security events  generated by a failed attempt to log on to an account that is locked out.
 ms.assetid: da68624b-a174-482c-9bc5-ddddab38e589
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: dansimp

windows/security/threat-protection/auditing/audit-computer-account-management.md

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 title: Audit Computer Account Management (Windows 10)
-description: This topic for the IT professional describes the advanced security audit policy setting, Audit Computer Account Management, which determines whether the operating system generates audit events when a computer account is created, changed, or deleted.
+description: The policy setting, Audit Computer Account Management, determines if audit events are generated when a computer account is created, changed, or deleted.
 ms.assetid: 6c406693-57bf-4411-bb6c-ff83ce548991
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: dansimp

windows/security/threat-protection/auditing/audit-ipsec-driver.md

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 title: Audit IPsec Driver (Windows 10)
-description: This topic for the IT professional describes the Advanced Security Audit policy setting, Audit IPsec Driver, which determines whether the operating system generates audit events for the activities of the IPsec driver.
+description: The Advanced Security Audit policy setting, Audit IPsec Driver, determines if audit events are generated for the activities of the IPsec driver.
 ms.assetid: c8b8c02f-5ad0-4ee5-9123-ea8cdae356a5
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: dansimp

windows/security/threat-protection/auditing/audit-ipsec-extended-mode.md

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 title: Audit IPsec Extended Mode (Windows 10)
-description: This topic for the IT professional describes the advanced security audit policy setting, Audit IPsec Extended Mode, which determines whether the operating system generates audit events for the results of the Internet Key Exchange (IKE) protocol and Authenticated Internet Protocol (AuthIP) during Extended Mode negotiations.
+description: The setting, Audit IPsec Extended Mode, determines if audit events are generated for the results of IKE protocol and AuthIP during Extended Mode negotiations.
 ms.assetid: 2b4fee9e-482a-4181-88a8-6a79d8fc8049
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: dansimp

windows/security/threat-protection/auditing/audit-pnp-activity.md

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 title: Audit PNP Activity (Windows 10)
-description: This topic for the IT professional describes the advanced security audit policy setting, Audit PNP Activity, which determines when plug and play detects an external device.
+description: The advanced security audit policy setting, Audit PNP Activity, determines when plug and play detects an external device.
 ms.assetid: A3D87B3B-EBBE-442A-953B-9EB75A5F600E
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: dansimp

windows/security/threat-protection/auditing/audit-security-state-change.md

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 title: Audit Security State Change (Windows 10)
-description: This topic for the IT professional describes the Advanced Security Audit policy setting, Audit Security State Change, which determines whether Windows generates audit events for changes in the security state of a system.
+description: The policy setting, Audit Security State Change, which determines whether Windows generates audit events for changes in the security state of a system.
 ms.assetid: decb3218-a67d-4efa-afc0-337c79a89a2d
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: dansimp

windows/security/threat-protection/auditing/audit-special-logon.md

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 title: Audit Special Logon (Windows 10)
-description: This topic for the IT professional describes the Advanced Security Audit policy setting, Audit Special Logon, which determines whether the operating system generates audit events under special sign on (or log on) circumstances.
+description: The Advanced Security Audit policy setting, Audit Special Logon, determines if  audit events are generated under special sign in (or logon) circumstances.
 ms.assetid: e1501bac-1d09-4593-8ebb-f311231567d3
 ms.reviewer: 
 manager: dansimp

windows/security/threat-protection/auditing/event-5027.md

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 title: 5027(F) The Windows Firewall Service was unable to retrieve the security policy from the local storage. The service will continue enforcing the current policy. (Windows 10)
-description: Describes security event 5027(F) The Windows Firewall Service was unable to retrieve the security policy from the local storage. The service will continue enforcing the current policy.
+description: Details on security event 5027(F) The Windows Firewall Service was unable to retrieve the security policy from the local storage. 
 ms.pagetype: security
 ms.prod: w10
 ms.mktglfcycl: deploy

windows/security/threat-protection/auditing/event-5148.md

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 title: 5148(F) The Windows Filtering Platform has detected a DoS attack and entered a defensive mode; packets associated with this attack will be discarded. (Windows 10)
-description: Describes security event 5148(F) The Windows Filtering Platform has detected a DoS attack and entered a defensive mode; packets associated with this attack will be discarded.
+description: Details on Security event 5148(F), The Windows Filtering Platform has detected a DoS attack and entered a defensive mode.
 ms.pagetype: security
 ms.prod: w10
 ms.mktglfcycl: deploy