From issue ticket #8873 (**typo in FQDN**) :
> The FQDN "1storecatalogrevocation.storequality.microsoft.com" does not exist, it should probably be "storecatalogrevocation.storequality.microsoft.com"
See also the comment below, stating as follows:
> It would probably make sense to merge the lines and use "TLSv1.2/HTTPS/HTTP" as the protocol like on other lines.
> I did not see any use of 1storecatalogrevocation.storequality.microsoft.com in my tests, also there is no A or AAAA DNS record for this endpoint, which makes me assume this is a typo.
Thanks to ruffy91 for noticing and reporting this typo issue.
Changes proposed:
- Remove the leading digit 1 from the hostname in `1storecatalogrevocation.storequality.microsoft.com`
- Remove 1 redundant `HTTPS` from the row below, making it only `HTTPS/HTTP`
- Merge the 2 lines since they now point to the same host FQDN
Whitespace changes:
- add 1 editorial blank line between the metadata section and the page title
- remove 2 redundant end-of-line blanks
Closes#8873
From issue ticket #8864 (**typo**):
> For more information, see Assign administrator and non-administrator roles to uses with Azure Active Directory.
> (near the bottom of the page)
>
> uses should read users
Thanks to andrePKI for pointing out the typo.
This seemingly simple typo correction escalated somewhat into a format improvement and link update to replace outdated MSDN and TechNet links with current MS Docs links. You want to verify if the new links are the proper ones for this source page, or request the links either to be reverted back to the old ones, in case there is specific information in the old documents not present in the new documents, or suggest more correct links to replace the old ones.
Proposed changes:
- typo correction, "uses" -> users
- typo correction: remove 2 commas from "see, Add, or remove group memberships"
- Connect-MsolService: replace the old MSDN URL with a new one pointing to its current PowerShell docs page
- old URL: https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/dn194123.aspx
- new URL: https://docs.microsoft.com/powershell/module/msonline/connect-msolservice
- "Add, or remove group memberships" link text (document title: "Manage Azure AD group and role membership") replaced with "Add or remove group members using Azure Active Directory"
- old URL: https://technet.microsoft.com/library/321d532e-407d-4e29-a00a-8afbe23008dd#BKMK_ManageGroups (anchor link jump broken by redirection)
- new URL: https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/active-directory/fundamentals/active-directory-users-assign-role-azure-portal
Whitespace & formatting changes:
- remove redundant end-of-line blanks (2 occurrences)
- add editorial blank line after MarkDown H2 and H3 headings (4 occurrences)
- MD syntax highlighting phrase "text" corrected to "PowerShell" (MD code blocks containing PS cmdlets)
- reduce double blank spacing in bullet point list to single space (1 occurrence)
- add MD indent marker compatibility spacing (1 occurrence)
Closes#8864
From in issue ticket #8810 (**Confusing text**):
> The Note about server licensing is confusing. some words are repeated and acronyms are not defined. Please review and edit this so that people that are not familiar with server licensing terminology can understand what is needed. The whole topic of Defender for Endpoint in regards to servers is very confusing and needs to be simplified.
Changes proposed:
- expand and clarify acronyms and initialisms in the details of the Note blob
- convert the list within the sentence to a bullet point list for better overview
- remove a duplicated word (Microsoft Defender Defender for Endpoint)
Whitespace changes:
- remove any blanks at end-of-line (redundant blanks)
Closes#8810
