Description:
As reported in issue ticket #6541 (lastUpdateTime), the description
text for lastUpdateTime is identical to the entry for firstEventTime.
This is not a correct description for 'lastUpdateTime'.
Thanks to harveywargo2 (Harvey Wargo) for reporting this.
Changes proposed:
- Replace the misplaced copy-pasted text with a suitable description.
- Remove 5 end-of-line blanks (whitespace correction).
The page author is, of course, invited to improve the phrasing.
Ticket closure or reference:
Closes#6541
Description:
As reported in issue ticket #6538 (TPM, not TMP), there is a typo where
the initialism TPM is misspelled as "TMP". Although a common variable
in the Microsoft Windows environment, it is not correct in this note.
Thanks to ntw2 for reporting this typo.
Further changes suggested: Replace 2 out of 3 fwlinks with their
current target page links (the 3rd is a rabbit hole too deep for now).
Changes proposed:
- "TMP" corrected to TPM (as it should be)
- fwlink/p/?LinkId=619548 -> docs.microsoft.com/previous-versions/
windows/it-pro/windows-7/dd875529(v=ws.10) ((could use a new page))
- fwlink/p/?LinkId=167133 -> gallery.technet.microsoft.com/
ScriptCenter/b4dee016-053e-4aa3-a278-3cebf70d1191
((marked for retirement, needs a backup or replacement))
- Remove redundant end-of-line whitespace for 2 lines
Additional notes:
Please feel free to suggest improved link replacements, especially for
the untouched fwlink, [Check to see if the TPM is enabled.]
(https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/p/?LinkId=619549) This link lands on
the top blog archive menu: https://docs.microsoft.com/archive/blogs/ .
Ticket closure or reference:
Closes#6538
Description:
As reported in issue ticket #6531 (Redirect Exploit protection
"Evaluation Package" link directly to right site), the aka.ms link to
the Evaluation Package points to the Windows Defender test ground page.
The suggestion is to point the link directly to the Exploit Protection
(EP) page instead.
Thanks to beerisgood for reporting this issue.
Additional changes: Link corrections and updates to counteract the fact
that some of the old technet links do not lead directly to the correct
topic pages, so it is better to insert traceable direct links instead.
I have not found any formatting worth correcting on this page, so the
various outdated or bad links will be the main focus in this PR.
Changes proposed:
- Replace the aka.ms/mp7z2w link with the direct EP download page link
- Replace technet/msdn links with current docs.microsoft.com page links
- Replace 1 technet link with support.microsoft.com/help
- Remove bad go.microsoft.com/fwlink (Windows 10 edition comparison PDF)
- Insert direct link to local neighboring page for MD-ATP (same folder)
Ticket closure or reference:
Closes#6531
I have just added "caution" after the first paragraph, i am making this comment after doing testing in my customer's environment. If OOBE is automated using unatend.xml, the Firmware-embedded Windows 10 activation doesn't happen automatically, we need to manually activate and then enroll with AAD for E3 license switch to happen
