As reported in issue ticket #6556 (Traffic filter sentence incomplete),
there is a missing part in the sentence "Network admins to effectively
add interface specific firewall rules on the VPN Interface." to make it
work as a full descriptive sentence in this context. This PR aims to
correct this issue, in addition to various other adjustments.
Thanks to klishb for reporting this issue.
Changes proposed:
- Add the missing part of the Traffic Filters sentence
- Update 2 outdated and permanently redirected MSDN links
- Uppercase adjustments for "Traffic filters" & "Lockdown"
- Add MarkDown indent marker compatibility spacing in the Note blob
- Reduce bullet point spacing from 3 to 1 in the "Applies to" section
- Remove all redundant end-of-line spacing
- Add missing space after the corrected sentence (after the period)
Ticket closure or reference:
Closes#6556
Description:
As reported in issue ticket #6541 (lastUpdateTime), the description
text for lastUpdateTime is identical to the entry for firstEventTime.
This is not a correct description for 'lastUpdateTime'.
Thanks to harveywargo2 (Harvey Wargo) for reporting this.
Changes proposed:
- Replace the misplaced copy-pasted text with a suitable description.
- Remove 5 end-of-line blanks (whitespace correction).
The page author is, of course, invited to improve the phrasing.
Ticket closure or reference:
Closes#6541
Description:
As reported in issue ticket #6538 (TPM, not TMP), there is a typo where
the initialism TPM is misspelled as "TMP". Although a common variable
in the Microsoft Windows environment, it is not correct in this note.
Thanks to ntw2 for reporting this typo.
Further changes suggested: Replace 2 out of 3 fwlinks with their
current target page links (the 3rd is a rabbit hole too deep for now).
Changes proposed:
- "TMP" corrected to TPM (as it should be)
- fwlink/p/?LinkId=619548 -> docs.microsoft.com/previous-versions/
windows/it-pro/windows-7/dd875529(v=ws.10) ((could use a new page))
- fwlink/p/?LinkId=167133 -> gallery.technet.microsoft.com/
ScriptCenter/b4dee016-053e-4aa3-a278-3cebf70d1191
((marked for retirement, needs a backup or replacement))
- Remove redundant end-of-line whitespace for 2 lines
Additional notes:
Please feel free to suggest improved link replacements, especially for
the untouched fwlink, [Check to see if the TPM is enabled.]
(https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/p/?LinkId=619549) This link lands on
the top blog archive menu: https://docs.microsoft.com/archive/blogs/ .
Ticket closure or reference:
Closes#6538
