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education/windows/get-minecraft-device-promotion.md

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ ms.author: trudyha
 ms.date: 06/29/2017
 ---
 
-# Get Minecraft: Education Edition with your Windows 10 device promotion
+# Get Minecraft: Education Edition with Windows 10 device promotion
 
 **Applies to:**
 
@@ -21,10 +21,10 @@ For qualifying customers, receive a one-year, single-user subscription for Minec
 
 ## Requirements
 - Qualified Educational Users in K-12 education institutions
-- Windows 10 device purchased after May 2, 2017
-- Redeem Minecraft: Education Edition licenses starting July 1, 2017
+- Windows 10 devices purchased from May 2, 2017 - January 31, 2018
+- Redeem Minecraft: Education Edition licenses from July 1, 2017 - March 17, 2018
 - Microsoft Store for Education admin must submit request for Minecraft: Education Edition licenses
-- Proof of device purchase is required
+- Proof of device purchase is required (invoice required) 
 
 Full details available at [Minecraft: Education Edition promotion](https://info.microsoft.com/Minecraft-Education-Edition-Signup.html). 
 
@@ -34,29 +34,39 @@ Redeeming your licenses takes just a few steps:
 - Submit a device purchase statement
 - Provide proof of your device purchase
 
-After that, we’ll add the appropriate number of Minecraft: Education Edition licenses to **Apps & software** in **Microsoft Store for Education**.
+After that, we’ll add the appropriate number of Minecraft: Education Edition licenses to your product inventory in **Microsoft Store for Education** as **Minecraft: Education Edition [subscription]**.
 
 **To redeem Minecraft: Education Edition licenses**
 1. Visit [Minecraft: Education Edition and Windows 10 device promotion](https://educationstore.microsoft.com/store/mee-device-promo?setflight=wsfb_devicepromo) in **Microsoft Store for Education**. 
 
      ![Minecraft: Education Edition page in Microsoft Store for Education. ](images/get-mcee-promo.png)
      
-2. Sign in to **Microsoft Store for Education** using a school account. If you don’t have one, we’ll help you set one up.
-3. **On Minecraft Windows 10 device special offer**, click **Submit a device purchase**.
+2. Sign in to **Microsoft Store for Education** using a school account. If you don’t have one, we’ll help you set one up. <br>
+-or-
+
+    If you're already signed in to Microsoft Store for Education, the device special offer is available on **Benefits**. </br> 
+    Click **Manage**, **Benefits**, and then click **Minecraft: Education Edition Device Promotion**.
+    
+3. **On Minecraft Windows 10 device special offer**, click **Submit a device purchase**. 
 
     ![Windows 10 device special offer page for Minecraft: Education Edition. Submit a device purchase is highlighted to show customers how to submit info about the devices you purchased. ](images/mcee-benefits.png)
-
+    
 4. Provide info for **Proof of Purchase**. Be sure to include a .pdf or .jpg of your invoice, and then click **Next**.
 
+    > [!NOTE]
+    > Your one-year subscription starts when you submit your proof-of-purchase info. Be sure to submit your request when you'll be using licenses in the classroom. 
+
     ![Proof of purchase page with Invoice area highlighted.](images/proof-of-purchase.png)
 
-5. Accept the **Promotion Terms of use**, and then click **Submit**. 
-
-    On **Minecraft Windows 10 device special offer** you can manage Minecraft: Education Edition
-after your device quantity is added to this page.  
-
-
-[Learn how teachers can get and distribute **Minecraft: Education Edition**](teacher-get-minecraft.md)
-
-[Learn how IT administrators can get and distribute **Minecraft: Education Edition**](school-get-minecraft.md), and how to manage permissions for Minecraft.
+5. Accept the **Promotion Terms of use**, and then click **Submit**. </br>
+    
+    Success look like this!
+    
+    ![Proof of purchase page with Invoice area highlighted.](images/msfe-device-promo-success.png)
+      
+6. Choose a group of subscription, click **Actions**, and then click **Manage** to distribute licenses.  
 
+## Distribute Minecraft: Education Edition licenses      
+Teachers or admins can distribute the licenses:
+- [Learn how teachers can distribute **Minecraft: Education Edition**](teacher-get-minecraft.md)
+- [Learn how IT administrators can distribute **Minecraft: Education Edition**](school-get-minecraft.md)