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windows/deployment/do/waas-delivery-optimization.md

@@ -23,9 +23,9 @@ ms.date: 12/31/2017
 
 > **Looking for Group Policy objects?** See [Delivery Optimization reference](waas-delivery-optimization-reference.md) or the master spreadsheet available at the Download Center [for Windows 11](https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/download/details.aspx?id=104594) or [for Windows 10](https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/download/details.aspx?id=104678).
 
-Windows updates, upgrades, and applications can contain packages with large files. Downloading and distributing updates can consume quite a bit of network resources on the devices receiving them. Delivery Optimization is a reliable HTTP downloader with a cloud-managed solution that allows Windows devices to download those packages from alternate sources if desired (such as other devices on the network and/or a dedicated cache server) in addition to the traditional internet-based servers (referred to as 'HTTP sources' throughout Delivery Optimization documents). You can use Delivery Optimization to reduce bandwidth consumption by sharing the work of downloading these packages among multiple devices in your deployment however, the use of peer-to-peer is completely optional.
+Windows updates, upgrades, and applications can contain packages with large files. Downloading and distributing updates can consume quite a bit of network resources on the devices receiving them. Delivery Optimization is a reliable HTTP downloader with a cloud-managed solution that allows Windows devices to download those packages from alternate sources if desired (such as other devices on the network and/or a dedicated cache server) in addition to the traditional internet-based servers (referred to as 'HTTP sources' throughout Delivery Optimization documents). You can use Delivery Optimization to reduce bandwidth consumption by sharing the work of downloading these packages among multiple devices in your deployment however, the use of peer-to-peer is optional.
 
-To use either the peer-to-peer functionality or the Microsoft Connected Cache features, devices must have access to the Internet and Delivery Optimization cloud services. When Delivery Optimization is configured to use peers and Microsoft Connected Cache (MCC), to achieve the best possible content delivery experience, the client will connect to MCC and peers in parallel. If the desired content can't be obtained from MCC or peers, Delivery Optimization will seamlessly fall back to the HTTP source to get the requested content.
+To use either the peer-to-peer functionality or the Microsoft Connected Cache features, devices must have access to the Internet and Delivery Optimization cloud services. When Delivery Optimization is configured to use peers and Microsoft Connected Cache (MCC), to achieve the best possible content delivery experience, the client connects to MCC and peers in parallel. If the desired content can't be obtained from MCC or peers, Delivery Optimization seamlessly falls back to the HTTP source to get the requested content.
 
 You can use Delivery Optimization with Windows Update, Windows Server Update Services (WSUS), Microsoft Intune/Windows Update for Business, or Microsoft Configuration Manager (when installation of Express Updates is enabled).
 

windows/deployment/do/whats-new-do.md

@@ -34,8 +34,8 @@ There are two different versions:
 
 - Delivery Optimization introduced support for receiver side ledbat (rLedbat) in Windows 11 22H2.
 
-- New peer selection options: Currently the available options include: 0 = None, 1 = Subnet mask, and 2 = Local Peer Discovery. The subnet mask option applies to both Download Modes LAN (1) and Group (2). If Group mode is set, Delivery Optimization will connect to locally discovered peers that are also part of the same Group (have the same Group ID)."
-- Local Peer Discovery: a new option for **[Restrict Peer Selection By](waas-delivery-optimization-reference.md#select-a-method-to-restrict-peer-selection)** (in Group Policy) or **DORestrictPeerSelectionBy** (in MDM). This option restricts the discovery of local peers using the DNS-SD protocol. When you set Option 2, Delivery Optimization will restrict peer selection to peers that are locally discovered (using DNS-SD). If Group mode is enabled, Delivery Optimization will connect to locally discovered peers that are also part of the same group, for those devices with the same Group ID).
+- New peer selection options: Currently the available options include: 0 = None, 1 = Subnet mask, and 2 = Local Peer Discovery. The subnet mask option applies to both Download Modes LAN (1) and Group (2). If Group mode is set, Delivery Optimization connects to locally discovered peers that are also part of the same Group (have the same Group ID)."
+- Local Peer Discovery: a new option for **[Restrict Peer Selection By](waas-delivery-optimization-reference.md#select-a-method-to-restrict-peer-selection)** (in Group Policy) or **DORestrictPeerSelectionBy** (in MDM). This option restricts the discovery of local peers using the DNS-SD protocol. When you set Option 2, Delivery Optimization restricts peer selection to peers that are locally discovered (using DNS-SD). If Group mode is enabled, Delivery Optimization connects to locally discovered peers that are also part of the same group, for those devices with the same Group ID).
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > The Local Peer Discovery (DNS-SD, [RFC 6763](https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc6763)) option can only be set via MDM delivered policies on Windows 11 builds. This feature can be enabled in supported Windows 10 builds by setting the `HKEY_LOCAL_MACHINE\SOFTWARE\Policies\Microsoft\Windows\DeliveryOptimization\DORestrictPeerSelectionBy` value to **2**. For more information, see [Delivery Optimization reference](waas-delivery-optimization-reference.md).

windows/deployment/update/wufb-reports-do.md

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ Windows Update for Business reports uses the following Delivery Optimization ter
 - **MCC Device Count**: The device count is the number of devices that have received bytes from the cache server, for supported content types.
 - **Total # of Devices**: The total number of devices with activity in last 28 days.
 - **LAN Bytes**: Bytes delivered from LAN peers.
-- **Group Bytes**: Bytes from Group peers. If a device is using Group DownloadMode, Delivery Optimization will first look for peers on the LAN and then in the Group. Therefore, if bytes are delivered from LAN peers, they'll be calculated in 'LAN Bytes'.
+- **Group Bytes**: Bytes from Group peers. If a device is using Group DownloadMode, Delivery Optimization first looks for peers on the LAN and then in the Group. Therefore, if bytes are delivered from LAN peers, they are calculated in 'LAN Bytes'.
 - **CDN Bytes**: Bytes delivered from Content Delivery Network (CDN).
 - **City**: City is determined based on the location of the device where the maximum amount of data is downloaded.
 - **Country**: Country is determined based on the location of the device where the maximum amount of data is downloaded.
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ Windows Update for Business reports uses the following Delivery Optimization ter
 
 ## Calculations for Delivery Optimization
 
-There are several calculated values that appear on the Delivery Optimization report. Listed below each calculation is the table that's used for it:
+Each calculated values used in the Delivery Optimization report are listed below.
 
 **Efficiency (%) Calculations**:
 
@@ -182,10 +182,10 @@ A row in UCDOStatus represents data downloaded by a combination of a single devi
 A row in UCDOAggregatedStatus represents data summarized at the tenant level (AzureADTenantID) for each content type (ContentType).
 
 - **How are BytesFromCache calculated when there's a Connected Cache server used by my ISP?**
-If there's a Connected Cache server at the ISP level, BytesFromCache will filter out any bytes coming the ISP's Connected Cache.
+If there's a Connected Cache server at the ISP level, BytesFromCache filters out any bytes coming the ISP's Connected Cache.
 
 - **How do the results from the Delivery Optimization PowerShell cmdlets compare to the results in the report?**
 [Delivery Optimization PowerShell cmdlets](waas-delivery-optimization-setup.md#monitor-delivery-optimization) can be a powerful tool used to monitor Delivery Optimization data on the device. These cmdlets use the cache on the device. The data calculated in the report is taken from the Delivery Optimization telemetry events.
 
-- **The report represents the last 28 days of data, why do some queries include >= 7 days?**
-The data in the report does represent the last 28 days of data. The query for last 7 days is just to get the data for the latest snapshot from past 7 days. It is possible that data is delayed for sometime and not available for current day, so we look for past 7 day snapshot in log analytics ans show the latest snapshot.
+- **The report represents the last 28 days of data, why do some queries include >= seven days?**
+The data in the report does represent the last 28 days of data. The query for last seven days is just to get the data for the latest snapshot from past seven days. It's possible that data is delayed for sometime and not available for current day, so we look for past 7 day snapshot in log analytics and show the latest snapshot.