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windows/keep-secure/protect-enterprise-data-using-edp.md

@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ EDP gives you a new way to manage data policy enforcement for apps and documents
 
     -   **Helping prevent accidental data disclosure to public spaces.** EDP helps protect your enterprise data from being accidentally shared to public spaces, such as public cloud storage. For example, if Dropbox™ isn’t on your **Protected App** list, employees won’t be able to sync encrypted files to their personal cloud storage. Instead, if the employee stores the content to an app on your **Protected Apps** list, like Microsoft OneDrive for Business, the encrypted files can sync freely to the cloud, while maintaining the encryption.
 
-    -   **Helping prevent accidental data disclosure to other devices.** EDP helps prevent enterprise data from leaking when it's copied or transferred to other devices. For example, if an employee puts enterprise data on a Universal Serial Bus (USB) drive that also has personal data, the enterprise data remains encrypted while the personal data doesn’t.
+    -   **Helping prevent accidental data disclosure to other devices.** EDP helps prevent enterprise data from leaking when it's copied or transferred to removable media. For example, if an employee puts enterprise data on a Universal Serial Bus (USB) drive that also has personal data, the enterprise data remains encrypted while the personal data doesn’t.
 
 -   **Remove access to enterprise data from enterprise-protected devices.** EDP gives admins the ability to revoke enterprise data from one or many MDM-enrolled devices, while leaving personal data alone. This is a benefit when an employee leaves your company, or in the case of a stolen device. After determining that the data access needs to be removed, you can unenroll the device so when it connects to the network, the user's encryption key for the device is revoked and the enterprise data becomes unreadable.<p>**Note**<br>System Center Configuration Manager also allows you to revoke enterprise data. However, it does it by performing a factory reset of the device.
 
@@ -83,7 +83,6 @@ Use the following table to identify the scenarios that require Azure Rights Mana
 |EDP scenario |Without Azure Rights Management |Workaround |
 |-------------|--------------------------------|-----------|
 |Saving enterprise data to USB drives |Data in the new location remains encrypted, but becomes inaccessible on other devices or for other users. For example, the file won't open or the file opens, but doesn't contain readable text. |Share files with fellow employees through enterprise file servers or enterprise cloud locations. If data must be shared via USB, employees can decrypt protected files, but it will be audited.<p>We strongly recommend educating employees about how to limit or eliminate the need for this decryption. |
-|Sharing enterprise data through email attachments |The attachment is sent unprotected. |Store documents on enterprise cloud or network sites, and share links. |
 |Synchronizing data to other services or public cloud storage |Synchronized files aren't protected on additional services or as part of public cloud storage. |Stop the app from synchronizing or don't add the app to your **Protected App** list.<p>For more info about adding apps to the **Protected App** list, see either the [Create an enterprise data protection (EDP) policy using Intune](create-edp-policy-using-intune.md) or the [Create and deploy an enterprise data protection (EDP) policy using Configuration Manager](create-edp-policy-using-sccm.md) topic, depending on your management solution.
 
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