Acrolinx improvements

education/windows/set-up-school-pcs-whats-new.md

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 # What's new in Set up School PCs
-Learn what’s new with the Set up School PCs app each week. Find out about new app features and functionality, and see updated screenshots. You'll also find information about past releases.   
+Learn what’s new with the Set up School PCs app each week. Find out about new app features and functionality, see updated screenshots, and find information about past releases.   
 
 
 ## Week of September 23, 2019  
 
 ### Easier way to deploy Office 365 to your classroom devices 
- Microsoft Office now appears as an option on the Set up School PCs > Apps screen. Select the app to add it to your provisioning package. Devices will install Office 365 ProPlus, which includes the cloud-connected and most current versions of apps such as Word, PowerPoint, Excel, and Teams.   
+ Microsoft Office now appears as an option on the Set up School PCs > Apps screen. Select the app to add it to your provisioning package. Devices install Office 365 ProPlus. This version includes the cloud-connected and most current versions of apps such as Word, PowerPoint, Excel, and Teams.   
 
 
 ## Week of June 24, 2019  
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 The previously mentioned provisioning problem was resolved, so the Set up School PCs app once again supports Windows 10, version 1903 and later. The Windows 10 settings that were removed are now back in the app. 
 
 ### Device rename made optional for Azure AD joined devices  
-When you set up your Azure AD join devices in the Set up School PCs app, you no longer need to rename your devices. Set up School PCs will let you keep existing device names.  
+When you set up your Azure AD join devices in the Set up School PCs app, you no longer need to rename your devices. You can keep existing device names.  
 
 ## Week of May 23, 2019   
 
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 Due to a provisioning problem, Set up School PCs has temporarily stopped support for Windows 10, version 1903 and later. All settings in the app that were for Windows 10, version 1903 and later have been removed. When the problem is resolved, support will resume again.  
 
 ### Mandatory device rename for Azure AD joined devices
-If you configure Azure AD Join, you are now required to rename your devices during setup. Set up School PCs will not let you keep existing device names.    
+If you configure Azure AD Join, you're now required to rename your devices during setup. Set up School PCs won't let you keep existing device names.    
 
 ## Week of April 15, 2019  
 
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 All apps that are deployed by Set up School PCs are configured on the device as non-removable apps. This feature ensures that students don't unpin or uninstall the apps they need.  
 
 ### Domain name automatically added during sign-in  
-Specify your preferred Azure Active Directory tenant domain name to automatically append it to the username on the sign-in screen. With this setting, students don't need to type out long school domain names. They can sign in by typing only their unique usernames.  
+Specify your preferred Azure Active Directory tenant domain name to automatically append it to the username on the sign-in screen. With this setting, students don't need to type out long school domain names. To sign in, they type only their unique usernames.  
 
 ### Set up devices with hidden Wi-Fi network
 Set up devices so that they connect to a hidden Wi-Fi network. To configure a hidden network, open Set up School PCs. When you get to **Wireless network**, choose **Add a Wi-Fi network**. Enter in your Wi-Fi information and select **Hidden network**.  
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 ## Week of December 31, 2018
 
 ### Add Microsoft Whiteboard to provisioning package  
-Microsoft Whiteboard has been added to the list of Microsoft-recommended apps for schools. Whiteboard is a freeform digital canvas where ideas, content, and people come together so students can create and collaborate in real time in the classroom. You can add Whiteboard to your provisioning package in Set up School PCs, on the **Add apps** page. For more information see [Use Set up School PCs app](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#create-the-provisioning-package).  
+Microsoft Whiteboard has been added to the list of Microsoft-recommended apps for schools. Whiteboard is a freeform digital canvas where ideas, content, and people come together so students can create and collaborate in real time in the classroom. You can add Whiteboard to your provisioning package in Set up School PCs, on the **Add apps** page. For more information, see [Use Set up School PCs app](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#create-the-provisioning-package).  
 
 ## Week of November 5, 2018  
 
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 Packages now expire 180 days from the date you create them.  
 
 ### Updated apps with more helpful, descriptive text 
-We've updated the app's **Skip** buttons to clarify the intent of each action. You'll also see an **Exit** button on the last page of the app.  
+We've updated the app's **Skip** buttons to clarify the intent of each action. An **Exit** button also appears on the last page of the app.  
 
 ### Option to keep existing device names
 The [**Name these devices** screen](use-set-up-school-pcs-app.md#device-names) now gives you the option to keep the original or existing names of your student devices.   
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 ## Next steps    
-Learn more about setting up devices with the Set up School PCs app.  
+Learn how to set up devices with the Set up School PCs app.  
 * [What's in my provisioning package?](set-up-school-pcs-provisioning-package.md)
 * [Shared PC mode for schools](set-up-school-pcs-shared-pc-mode.md)
 * [Set up School PCs technical reference](set-up-school-pcs-technical.md)